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This wasn’t supposed to happen.

The Complex wasn’t supposed to return, and that freak Aqua wasn’t supposed to be out there ruining his life.

Artemis had to think. He glanced sideways at the rest of the Alters. Orion and Leo were hooked up in an arm fight and most of the others were watching intently. Capricornus was the only one locked  in his bedroom quietly. They’d all claimed that this wasn’t a stage of the Atlantis Complex, but who knew? And it was obvious that they all awaited the chance to get out of here.

He focused back on the mind screen, where Aqua had quickly recovered from Holly slamming the door in his face and was headed out to have a better look around. Obviously, unlike Orion, this Alter seemed to have more of an interest in life than impressing women.



Aqua stared at the huge painting. Artemis had honestly done that? He had to admit, it was “kind of awesome” and be on his way for lunch, where the whole of the Fowl family (except his father, of course. Some freaking conference business) had already gathered. He took Artemis’s place between Beckett and Myles.  One of the toddlers was trying to sort a Rubik’s Cube while the other was counting the legs of an ant crawling on the table. Aqua already knew from Artemis’s experience who was who.

Myles looked up from his work. “Did anything interesting happen, Arty? You spent two hours locked up in your room.”


“No, not really, but I met the girl of my dreams. Man she’s hot. Arty is the luckiest guy on the planet.”

Angeline, Beckett, Myles and Butler stopped whatever they were doing and stared wide-eyed at him, as if he’d grown a chicken’s head or something.

It’s probably going to cause chaos if I tell them that I’m not Arty, thought Aqua. Turns out, he had already given it away. “I-I meant Arty as in myself,” he corrected, weakly grinning at the others.

Inside his head, Artemis screamed.

“I guess that’s great, Arty,” said Angeline, tone disbelieving.  “But I do hope this isn’t a trick to stop me making you wear jeans or something, like coming up two weeks later saying your girlfriend likes you better in Bespoke suits.”


Tell her that is was a trick, thought Artemis. Please, please, plea–


“Nope,” said Aqua.


Damn him.


“And what is her name?” asked Myles. “If you come up with something cheesy, we know it’s a lie.”

Aqua tried to think. Everyone here knew who Holly was, so that wasn’t going to work. “Eh…I hardly think it is any of your business what her name is.” oh Yeah! Maybe if I keep talking Nerd style they’ll think I’m Artemis.

And who are you calling a nerd? shouted a voice from the back of his head.


What the heck am I going to say next?

Shut up, Aqua. Let me out and I’ll take care of this.

Na huh. You’re not the only smart guy here, Arty. And what do I say?

You’re only killing my dignity here, should you care?


“What did this girl look like?” Angeline pressed on. “At least you could tell us that.”

Aqua paused. “”Eh…well, she was pretty. And hot. And kind of cute, and…”


I can’t believe this total idiot is in charge of my body! groaned Artemis.

“Apart from your opinion?”

“Oh y-yeah,” stammered Aqua. “Yeah, she was…uh, she had a face, and…two eyes, which were lovely, and hair…uh, I mean…”

The other Alters either giggled or moaned.

“She’s just too good for words,” Aqua finished, lamely. Artemis slapped his forehead.

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19 responses to “ARMAGEDDON’S EVE -(Re-written) NEW CHAPTER ADDED!.” Join in!

  1. Mastermind Excello May 24th, 2013 at 12:57 pm 1

    Multiple alternate personalities… this is interesting.

  2. Interesting indeed. I like the rewrite. This one is better than the first, in my opinion. 🙂 Update soon!

    thanks! i promise to update as soon as possible.

  3. hey fans! heehee….sorry for not updating in a while but i swear, when my mom gets back from hong kong i WILL use the powers of the laptop to update! keep you eyes open for these awesome alters! Capricornus:freako who sees the supernatural, and other alters are jealous holly cares about him/Scorpio:soft spoken boring in a way/Tarus:intelligent nerd/Libra:stupid guy with a 1secons memory span/Leo:physical guy/Pisces: guy who is slightly perverted, hates his name/Saggitarius: awesome person who nobody yet knows what his personality is/Virgo: girly and embarassing/AND i cant remember the other names, there are 12 alters. all zodiac style. and dont forget opal koboi, she is out for revenge and this leads to an all-out adventure where Haven, Atlantis and the human worlr face a threat. artemis and the alters have to join in on the adventure with holly, my favourite foaly, mulch and trouble kelp. we also get to see the alters of these chatacters as well! foaly has a stupid side! and whats more, can artemis really save the world when he is stuck in his own mind most of the time? read, comment and i will update!

  4. Silver is too lazy to log in June 5th, 2013 at 8:09 pm 4

    I only noticed that comment now. The ones you missed are:

    Cancer(the crab) *my sign!*
    Gemini(the twins)
    Aquarius(the water bearer)
    Aries(the ram)

    If you want more info on what personality type correspond with which astrological symbol, email me and I’ll send you a list.

  5. No, I did use ’em. Observe carefully and you’ll see it.

    I missed Aries on purpose. He comes later on, and he’s like evil. Wouldn’t wanna ruin the surprise!!

    PS: since I’m outta ideas, what kinda person dya want cancer to be?
    (I like that kinda speaking)

  6. Mastermind Excello June 7th, 2013 at 2:18 am 6

    I think Aqua is supposed to be Aquarius. Where’s Scorpio? That’s in the Zodiac, right?

  7. yes! someone finally got it! aqua is indeed aquarius. man, did i really miss scorpio?? i cant believe it. *dies of embarassment* comes back to life and glares at mastermind* never, never point out a mistake like that again!

  8. Silver is still too lazy to log in June 7th, 2013 at 5:02 pm 8

    I meant the ones you missed in the comment.

    @ME- Scorpio was in her comment.

  9. stop confusing the princess y’all. she’s had a long boring day at school with a busy week ahead, so my loving fans: i might not be on for a while, but when princess gets back awesomeness will too!

  10. Haha! Yeah, lucky him. 🙂 Good work! Update soon!

  11. Thanks for the review!

    SMILEY TIME!! 🙂 🙁 😀 :p :mrgreen: 😈 😀

  12. Haha! Awesome work, shaadia. I think you’re definitely getting better. Lots of A/H, too, which I love. 😀 Update soon!

  13. Great work on there update! I totally bet that he will be like ten times hader to work with than Artemis would… that ought to be good… update soon!

  14. What the….?! Are you saying that for Artemis to escape, he has to let the complex take control of him again?? Wow.. What is gonna happen???

    You had better update soon! 😉 I’m watching…

  15. Ha ha, don’t worry I will!

  16. Update soon. I love how you did the whole multiple personalities on your symbols of when you were born. This is great!

  17. Oh cool, you added it here on Fangathering. I can’t wait to see Leo and Pisces and Gemini and Libra take control. I wonder if Artemis has a ‘Butler’ side… Or a random girl side. Can’t wait for the update!

  18. okay, maybe tonight if possible!

  19. Please,please uptdate!
    No one writes anything on this site anymore.
    I have to rely on, which is SO untrustworthy.
    by the way, good job.
    Taurus reminds me of myself.
    BTW, Saggitarius should be insane.
    That would be cool.
    Peace out,Artemis.

    And real!

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