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Both Artemis and Orion watched in unquestioned horror as Aqua pulled Holly onto his lap, tweaking her ear in a most ridiculous manner, saying things neither of them would dream of saying.
“Get your filthy hands off my maiden!”yelled Orion.
“Shut up and let me think!”Artemis yelled right back.

“Orion, I swear I’ll buy you all the lollipops you want, if you help me get out of here.”
“Stop this, mud boy!”shouted Holly. “Artemis, if this is your idea of a joke-”
“Hey,don’t confuse me with that guy,”protested Aqua.
“Does that give me permission to knock your teeth out?”She was definitely not in a good mood.
Aqua grinned mischievously. “Try me.”
He caught her fist before it impacted with his jawbone. The elf looked surprised at this.”How…?”she trailed off. “I am not Artemis,” replied Aqua,touching her cheek fondly. Holly snorted. “That much I can see.”

“You could try asking the others.”
Artemis soon realized whom Orion was referring to. And said just one word in response.

Orion, oblivious to Artemis’s unwillingness, ran off to summon the other alters anyway.
In just twelve minutes, they were all there. An entire hoard of Orion look-alikes.

“Introduce yourself, brave knights,”said Orion.
“I am Leo,”said one, “your awesome side.” Another guy snorted at this.”No, Leo is just a physical phsyc who goes about dropping banana peels outside people’s bathrooms.” Artemis wasn’t impressed with the “joke”. “And you are…?”
“Uh. Not saying my darned name. It sounds like the P word.”
“It is the P word!”laughed Leo.
“What is that?”asked Orion, interested.
Leo smirked. “Piss…”
He recieved a sloppy punch on the head. “Pisces! My name is Pisces! I am not the disgusting excreta of…ugh…”
“Heck you are disgusting!”argued Leo.”You read all those freaking women’s magazines like it’s some kind of hobby…”

“No! Please stop that!”pleaded another Alter. “You can’t settle anything with a fight!”
“Who is the goodly knight?”inquired Orion.
“Some guy with a girl’s name,”muttered Pisces.
“Shut up!”shouted Artemis.
“Virgo,”he said, quietly.

“I’m bored,”yawned another guy.”Somebody get me a hotdog.”
“You are?”
“I can’t quite remember my name.”
“And chocolate syrup. Yum.”
Artemis was losing patience. “Just tell me your damned name!”
“He’s Libra,”explained Orion. “The stupid knight.”

“I am Capricornus,” said another, quietly, twidling his thumbs. “I-I…”
“I don’t know why I’m called Gemini, I don’t have two heads or something…”
“My name is merely a tag to identify myself from other individuals, and as I am capable of naming myself-(“Quit being a nerd and tell us,”snapped Leo.) Apologies. I call myself Taurus. It is rather unsuitable, but I–”

“Where’s the twelfth alter?”asked Gemini. “Aren’t there twelve of us?”
“Some anti social jerk called Sagittarius,”murmured Pisces.
“He’s a freak.”
“Heck yeah.”
“He’s scary.”
“He sounds interesting…”

“Quiet!”shouted Artemis. “How can I get out of here?”


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19 responses to “ARMAGEDDON’S EVE -(Re-written) NEW CHAPTER ADDED!.” Join in!

  1. Mastermind Excello May 24th, 2013 at 12:57 pm 1

    Multiple alternate personalities… this is interesting.

  2. Interesting indeed. I like the rewrite. This one is better than the first, in my opinion. 🙂 Update soon!

    thanks! i promise to update as soon as possible.

  3. hey fans! heehee….sorry for not updating in a while but i swear, when my mom gets back from hong kong i WILL use the powers of the laptop to update! keep you eyes open for these awesome alters! Capricornus:freako who sees the supernatural, and other alters are jealous holly cares about him/Scorpio:soft spoken boring in a way/Tarus:intelligent nerd/Libra:stupid guy with a 1secons memory span/Leo:physical guy/Pisces: guy who is slightly perverted, hates his name/Saggitarius: awesome person who nobody yet knows what his personality is/Virgo: girly and embarassing/AND i cant remember the other names, there are 12 alters. all zodiac style. and dont forget opal koboi, she is out for revenge and this leads to an all-out adventure where Haven, Atlantis and the human worlr face a threat. artemis and the alters have to join in on the adventure with holly, my favourite foaly, mulch and trouble kelp. we also get to see the alters of these chatacters as well! foaly has a stupid side! and whats more, can artemis really save the world when he is stuck in his own mind most of the time? read, comment and i will update!

  4. Silver is too lazy to log in June 5th, 2013 at 8:09 pm 4

    I only noticed that comment now. The ones you missed are:

    Cancer(the crab) *my sign!*
    Gemini(the twins)
    Aquarius(the water bearer)
    Aries(the ram)

    If you want more info on what personality type correspond with which astrological symbol, email me and I’ll send you a list.

  5. No, I did use ’em. Observe carefully and you’ll see it.

    I missed Aries on purpose. He comes later on, and he’s like evil. Wouldn’t wanna ruin the surprise!!

    PS: since I’m outta ideas, what kinda person dya want cancer to be?
    (I like that kinda speaking)

  6. Mastermind Excello June 7th, 2013 at 2:18 am 6

    I think Aqua is supposed to be Aquarius. Where’s Scorpio? That’s in the Zodiac, right?

  7. yes! someone finally got it! aqua is indeed aquarius. man, did i really miss scorpio?? i cant believe it. *dies of embarassment* comes back to life and glares at mastermind* never, never point out a mistake like that again!

  8. Silver is still too lazy to log in June 7th, 2013 at 5:02 pm 8

    I meant the ones you missed in the comment.

    @ME- Scorpio was in her comment.

  9. stop confusing the princess y’all. she’s had a long boring day at school with a busy week ahead, so my loving fans: i might not be on for a while, but when princess gets back awesomeness will too!

  10. Haha! Yeah, lucky him. 🙂 Good work! Update soon!

  11. Thanks for the review!

    SMILEY TIME!! 🙂 🙁 😀 :p :mrgreen: 😈 😀

  12. Haha! Awesome work, shaadia. I think you’re definitely getting better. Lots of A/H, too, which I love. 😀 Update soon!

  13. Great work on there update! I totally bet that he will be like ten times hader to work with than Artemis would… that ought to be good… update soon!

  14. What the….?! Are you saying that for Artemis to escape, he has to let the complex take control of him again?? Wow.. What is gonna happen???

    You had better update soon! 😉 I’m watching…

  15. Ha ha, don’t worry I will!

  16. Update soon. I love how you did the whole multiple personalities on your symbols of when you were born. This is great!

  17. Oh cool, you added it here on Fangathering. I can’t wait to see Leo and Pisces and Gemini and Libra take control. I wonder if Artemis has a ‘Butler’ side… Or a random girl side. Can’t wait for the update!

  18. okay, maybe tonight if possible!

  19. Please,please uptdate!
    No one writes anything on this site anymore.
    I have to rely on, which is SO untrustworthy.
    by the way, good job.
    Taurus reminds me of myself.
    BTW, Saggitarius should be insane.
    That would be cool.
    Peace out,Artemis.

    And real!

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