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Opal felt a shiver run down her spine as she headed towards the path ahead, engulfed in darkness. The darkness, equal to that of it in her own mind. She was not gone. She was back on Earth, in search for the one thing that would fullfil her wish. On the deepest depths of the dark, forbidding forests. There, a single foot ahead, she found what she was searching for.

The sword. The most treasured possession of the First Elfin King, the sword used to slay numerous Mud Men during the Battle of Tailte.

Artemis Fowl shall pay for all he has done.

Chapter two: AQUA


Artemis frowned at her. “Holly, you should have not said that.”

“It was an accident, Mud Boy, and I meant it.”

She stubbornly folded her arms. “I’m wasting my time here. Goodbye, Fowl.”

And the everything went black.


“Look who’s here,”mumbled a familiar voice. Artemis’s eyes shot open. Not only the voice, but the place was mildly familiar as well. He had been here once. That time he had got the Complex. This was inside his own mind.

Long time no see, boorish counterpart,”greeted Orion. “Did you just upset the princess?”

“What are you doing here?’demanded Artemis. “I am cured of the Atlantis Complex.”

“We’re your personality, Arty,”argued Orion. “Complex or not, we’ll always be here.”

Artemis’s eyes widened. “We? There’s more of you here?”

“Yup,”answered another guy. “What did ya think, dude?’

Artemis paled. “Did he just say the word–“

“Dude!”yelled the alter. “‘Course I did!”

“That’s Capricorn,”explained Orion. “There are others as well. Right now, Aqua is in control of your body.”
The Irish teen’s eyes averted to the mind screen. He didn’t yet know what Aqua was like, but he’d better not be worse than Orion.


Aqua was just in time to stop Holly leaving. “Come on,sweetheart, don’t be like that!”

Holly froze. Did he just say…?

“It’s not fair if I don’t get to talk to you ’cause of Artemis,”he continued.”He’s boring anyway.”

“You must be aware of that by now.”

“W-Who are you?”stammered the elf, taking a step backwards.

“Aqua,”said the boy. “I am another one of Arty’s personalities.”



A/N: I know, this Alter ego stuff is found in thousands of other fics, but I’m aiming to make this different. You see, this adventure is going to be harder because of it. Thank you for reading, dear reader, and puleeeezee leave me a comment!

Update coming soon!

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19 responses to “ARMAGEDDON’S EVE -(Re-written) NEW CHAPTER ADDED!.” Join in!

  1. Mastermind Excello May 24th, 2013 at 12:57 pm 1

    Multiple alternate personalities… this is interesting.

  2. Interesting indeed. I like the rewrite. This one is better than the first, in my opinion. 🙂 Update soon!

    thanks! i promise to update as soon as possible.

  3. hey fans! heehee….sorry for not updating in a while but i swear, when my mom gets back from hong kong i WILL use the powers of the laptop to update! keep you eyes open for these awesome alters! Capricornus:freako who sees the supernatural, and other alters are jealous holly cares about him/Scorpio:soft spoken boring in a way/Tarus:intelligent nerd/Libra:stupid guy with a 1secons memory span/Leo:physical guy/Pisces: guy who is slightly perverted, hates his name/Saggitarius: awesome person who nobody yet knows what his personality is/Virgo: girly and embarassing/AND i cant remember the other names, there are 12 alters. all zodiac style. and dont forget opal koboi, she is out for revenge and this leads to an all-out adventure where Haven, Atlantis and the human worlr face a threat. artemis and the alters have to join in on the adventure with holly, my favourite foaly, mulch and trouble kelp. we also get to see the alters of these chatacters as well! foaly has a stupid side! and whats more, can artemis really save the world when he is stuck in his own mind most of the time? read, comment and i will update!

  4. Silver is too lazy to log in June 5th, 2013 at 8:09 pm 4

    I only noticed that comment now. The ones you missed are:

    Cancer(the crab) *my sign!*
    Gemini(the twins)
    Aquarius(the water bearer)
    Aries(the ram)

    If you want more info on what personality type correspond with which astrological symbol, email me and I’ll send you a list.

  5. No, I did use ’em. Observe carefully and you’ll see it.

    I missed Aries on purpose. He comes later on, and he’s like evil. Wouldn’t wanna ruin the surprise!!

    PS: since I’m outta ideas, what kinda person dya want cancer to be?
    (I like that kinda speaking)

  6. Mastermind Excello June 7th, 2013 at 2:18 am 6

    I think Aqua is supposed to be Aquarius. Where’s Scorpio? That’s in the Zodiac, right?

  7. yes! someone finally got it! aqua is indeed aquarius. man, did i really miss scorpio?? i cant believe it. *dies of embarassment* comes back to life and glares at mastermind* never, never point out a mistake like that again!

  8. Silver is still too lazy to log in June 7th, 2013 at 5:02 pm 8

    I meant the ones you missed in the comment.

    @ME- Scorpio was in her comment.

  9. stop confusing the princess y’all. she’s had a long boring day at school with a busy week ahead, so my loving fans: i might not be on for a while, but when princess gets back awesomeness will too!

  10. Haha! Yeah, lucky him. 🙂 Good work! Update soon!

  11. Thanks for the review!

    SMILEY TIME!! 🙂 🙁 😀 :p :mrgreen: 😈 😀

  12. Haha! Awesome work, shaadia. I think you’re definitely getting better. Lots of A/H, too, which I love. 😀 Update soon!

  13. Great work on there update! I totally bet that he will be like ten times hader to work with than Artemis would… that ought to be good… update soon!

  14. What the….?! Are you saying that for Artemis to escape, he has to let the complex take control of him again?? Wow.. What is gonna happen???

    You had better update soon! 😉 I’m watching…

  15. Ha ha, don’t worry I will!

  16. Update soon. I love how you did the whole multiple personalities on your symbols of when you were born. This is great!

  17. Oh cool, you added it here on Fangathering. I can’t wait to see Leo and Pisces and Gemini and Libra take control. I wonder if Artemis has a ‘Butler’ side… Or a random girl side. Can’t wait for the update!

  18. okay, maybe tonight if possible!

  19. Please,please uptdate!
    No one writes anything on this site anymore.
    I have to rely on, which is SO untrustworthy.
    by the way, good job.
    Taurus reminds me of myself.
    BTW, Saggitarius should be insane.
    That would be cool.
    Peace out,Artemis.

    And real!

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