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Haven City

After two hours of having to drive Aqua around to get to Police Plaza, Holly was sick. He kept annoying her with his adolescent comments, and worst of all, he just didn’t know how to shut up.

Trouble Kelp was going to have a  hard time.

“Aqua, can I  ask you a favor?”

He beamed. “Sure, baby. Anything you want.”

“The council will hold a meeting about this. They have no clue that you aren’t Artemis, so for the love of Frond, please let them believe that. Listen and don’t say anything stupid or unhelpful, and above all don’t even look my way. Got it?”
“I don’t know, Holly. The last one sounded hard.”
“You can’t be serious! You’re Artemis Fowl the second, how can you be so…ugh…”
“I am not Artemis Fowl,” argued Aqua, sounding hurt. “I’m nothing like him.”
“That I knew.”
“Do you like me, then?”
Holly thought it would be a great idea to discourage the boy as much as possible. “No, I like nerds.” That wasn’t strong enough. “I meant that seriously, I-”
“Well, if you like Trouble, why not me?”
The elf scowled. “You don’t even remind me of Trouble, or Arty. So why don’t you be a good mud boy and shut up?”
“Will you like me then?”
“Will you shut up and stop looking at me like that?”
Aqua laughed. “There’s nothing to worry about, sweetheart. Being a pervert is Pisces’s job, not mine.”

Holly squinted at him. ‘Artemis has a perverse side?”

The alter leaned uncomfortably against her. “Don’t we all?”

The elf shrugged him off. “No, we don’t! You think I enjoy seeing people in their underwear?”

“Well Artemis kinda did, when you two had to go back in time to rescue Jayjay.”


“IDIOT!” yelled Artemis. And he had thought Orion was bad. He couldn’t believe what Aqua was saying.  Worse still, the words came from his own mouth.

“Now that we’re introduced,” said Pisces. “Would Holly perhaps like me?”

Orion snorted. “I do not think the princess is too thrilled to meet you.”

“She’ll love me when she finds out how fun I can be.”

Leo laughed heartily. “Heck yeah, in your freakish stupid dreams. Piss.”

“Piss,” Cancer joined in. “Piss. Pissssssssss…”

“Will you stop that?” snapped Virgo. “It’s just his name!”

“He also behaves like it. Come to think of it, why does Virgo sound like a girl to me?”

“It’s only is personality,” defended Orion, indignantly.

“HER personality, you mean,” giggled Cancer.

“Shut up,” said Artemis. “All of you. Opal Koboi has returned, according to Holly, and having Aqua occupying my body at such a time is a major disadvantage. Is there any way I can  get back in control?”

“I told ya before, Arty. No.”

‘Actually, yes,” said Taurus. “One, your body loses consciousness for a long while, two, he faces extreme shock, or three…” he hesitated. “The Complex returns.”



A/N: I will update soon.

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19 responses to “ARMAGEDDON’S EVE -(Re-written) NEW CHAPTER ADDED!.” Join in!

  1. Mastermind Excello May 24th, 2013 at 12:57 pm 1

    Multiple alternate personalities… this is interesting.

  2. Interesting indeed. I like the rewrite. This one is better than the first, in my opinion. 🙂 Update soon!

    thanks! i promise to update as soon as possible.

  3. hey fans! heehee….sorry for not updating in a while but i swear, when my mom gets back from hong kong i WILL use the powers of the laptop to update! keep you eyes open for these awesome alters! Capricornus:freako who sees the supernatural, and other alters are jealous holly cares about him/Scorpio:soft spoken boring in a way/Tarus:intelligent nerd/Libra:stupid guy with a 1secons memory span/Leo:physical guy/Pisces: guy who is slightly perverted, hates his name/Saggitarius: awesome person who nobody yet knows what his personality is/Virgo: girly and embarassing/AND i cant remember the other names, there are 12 alters. all zodiac style. and dont forget opal koboi, she is out for revenge and this leads to an all-out adventure where Haven, Atlantis and the human worlr face a threat. artemis and the alters have to join in on the adventure with holly, my favourite foaly, mulch and trouble kelp. we also get to see the alters of these chatacters as well! foaly has a stupid side! and whats more, can artemis really save the world when he is stuck in his own mind most of the time? read, comment and i will update!

  4. Silver is too lazy to log in June 5th, 2013 at 8:09 pm 4

    I only noticed that comment now. The ones you missed are:

    Cancer(the crab) *my sign!*
    Gemini(the twins)
    Aquarius(the water bearer)
    Aries(the ram)

    If you want more info on what personality type correspond with which astrological symbol, email me and I’ll send you a list.

  5. No, I did use ’em. Observe carefully and you’ll see it.

    I missed Aries on purpose. He comes later on, and he’s like evil. Wouldn’t wanna ruin the surprise!!

    PS: since I’m outta ideas, what kinda person dya want cancer to be?
    (I like that kinda speaking)

  6. Mastermind Excello June 7th, 2013 at 2:18 am 6

    I think Aqua is supposed to be Aquarius. Where’s Scorpio? That’s in the Zodiac, right?

  7. yes! someone finally got it! aqua is indeed aquarius. man, did i really miss scorpio?? i cant believe it. *dies of embarassment* comes back to life and glares at mastermind* never, never point out a mistake like that again!

  8. Silver is still too lazy to log in June 7th, 2013 at 5:02 pm 8

    I meant the ones you missed in the comment.

    @ME- Scorpio was in her comment.

  9. stop confusing the princess y’all. she’s had a long boring day at school with a busy week ahead, so my loving fans: i might not be on for a while, but when princess gets back awesomeness will too!

  10. Haha! Yeah, lucky him. 🙂 Good work! Update soon!

  11. Thanks for the review!

    SMILEY TIME!! 🙂 🙁 😀 :p :mrgreen: 😈 😀

  12. Haha! Awesome work, shaadia. I think you’re definitely getting better. Lots of A/H, too, which I love. 😀 Update soon!

  13. Great work on there update! I totally bet that he will be like ten times hader to work with than Artemis would… that ought to be good… update soon!

  14. What the….?! Are you saying that for Artemis to escape, he has to let the complex take control of him again?? Wow.. What is gonna happen???

    You had better update soon! 😉 I’m watching…

  15. Ha ha, don’t worry I will!

  16. Update soon. I love how you did the whole multiple personalities on your symbols of when you were born. This is great!

  17. Oh cool, you added it here on Fangathering. I can’t wait to see Leo and Pisces and Gemini and Libra take control. I wonder if Artemis has a ‘Butler’ side… Or a random girl side. Can’t wait for the update!

  18. okay, maybe tonight if possible!

  19. Please,please uptdate!
    No one writes anything on this site anymore.
    I have to rely on, which is SO untrustworthy.
    by the way, good job.
    Taurus reminds me of myself.
    BTW, Saggitarius should be insane.
    That would be cool.
    Peace out,Artemis.

    And real!

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