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Alive, But Not Me

Summary: hello everyone! This fanfic is inspired from the new app i found called plague inc. its really cool so please […]

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hello everyone! This fanfic is inspired from the new app i found called plague inc. its really cool so please support them and buy it, its only 1 dollar too!

Artemis smiled upon his finished project… under a microscope. It was a nanobot, Artemis designed it to attach to his brain and micro manage certain functions. “you can fix me where i have failed, now go start what you were made for!” Artemis said as the nanobot flew away from the microscope and into his ear. Artemis had made the nanobot because he had started to feel guilty for how rude he was to people. so the nanobot was supposed to change his personality from the actual brain. At that second Butler knocked on the door”Artemis? your mother made dinner, russian caviar.” Butler informed Artemis. “Tell mother i said thank you and i will be down in a se-“Artemis barely finished his sentance before he fell to the floor unconsious “Artemis?… ARTEMIS!?” butler cried out before kicking the door off its hinges and picking up Artemis’s body. The other family members scurried like ants to the sound of Butlers shouting. “What happened?!” Angeline fowl said, worried. “i-i dont know”

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

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  1. freak, who the heck are you?! this was so damn AWESOME! what do you mean, gross? and stop being such a jerk, your probably jealous because this fic is awesome. finn,puleezee update!!!

    thanks shaadia, it means a lot to me that you like it. ~Finn The Sea King

  2. Silver is being sneaky April 11th, 2013 at 5:10 am 2

    Hey guys, I’m back(ish)! I’m not actually supposed to be on the internet, but my friend let me use her phone, which , ironically, didn’t let me log in because it said it didn’t recognize the site…?

    Anyway, I have time for a short-medium-ish review.

    I like the fic, but the grammar…!!!… finn, I told you I would help you! You have great ideas, but the story’s format really takes away from that.

    And shaadia, careful with the language ! Honestly, I didn’t really think you were one to say stuff like that. I mean, you’re pretty young… actually, ignore that. I’m 14 and if you heard me talk in person… let’s not go there, shall we? Anyways, I’m sorry for being so shady. I haven’t really had the time. Testing is over, but I still have a lot to do, like two major, MAJOR projects due and yet MORE testing picking up in a couple of weeks*sigh* I promise I will make up for lost time come summer. Then I can work on ALL of my fanfics. I also have Deadly Melody up on, under the username Luminesyra. I am also in the process of writing a couple of Green Lantern: The Animated Series fics(which WB CANCELLED by the way, along with Young Justice) but they aren’t ready yet.

    Now that I have totally (almost, there was a brief review)spammed finn’s story, I have to go. I’m sorry for being so off-topic, but I needed to put that out there so people( if they even care , besides shaadia and Shorty) know I’m not abandoning you all. Please don’t trash this Amy, I promise it won’t happen again!

  3. shaadia the princess of weird April 11th, 2013 at 5:27 am 3

    yay! sil’s back! *hugs silver*
    Oh and finn…before me there was some cyco posted a mean comment~he was the one i called freak…
    forgot to say this earlier, but please seperate paragraphs, ‘k? it gets easier to read.

  4. okay, i liked the update! but dude, you should make it longer next time. i was like, “wut!over already?!” hope the next chapter is slightly longer. can’t deny i enjoyed it though. artemis was funny! please continue!

  5. shaadia again! April 17th, 2013 at 11:14 am 5

    oh….am i spamming? this is like the fourth review im leaving here…well, please delete the other one and leave this, finn, spare me! i read the update. xavier has the nerves to do that?! even orion wouldnt kiss holly if arty was around, and holly would kill him anyway. well, glad u updated, and pleeeezeee write more!! *puppy eyes* please, finn?please?

  6. imfowltothebone April 17th, 2013 at 11:48 pm 6

    ok, this time i finally have the idea of what to do with the story *angel chorus* ok so xavier- nope! you’ll never know… *weird hand motion*

  7. shaadia the princess of weird April 18th, 2013 at 2:04 am 7


  8. shaadia (the awesome one) April 25th, 2013 at 3:33 am 8

    ok, i have been *cough* spam commenting *cough* these days *cough* but still kinda lazy to update moi own fics. well, just a question, finn, didya update this or just add one sentence?a sorry for sounding mean, but i was desperately looking forward to the next chapter. its pwetty funny though. “ihateyouihateyouihateyou” lol. good one. i wonder whether holly will slap arty, xavier or both. ooh, i sense something AWESOME coming on! keep it up, update sooon, or i will, eh…send you pictures of the devil MINERVA!

  9. Finn not on account April 30th, 2013 at 7:07 pm 9

    do not send me pics of minerva. i have to get caught up with this STUPID advanced school, i’m taking colledge level courses and its hard to understand, and the homework is SO ANNOYING!!! its like if x is equal to C what is the value of g if F is less than G… Its irrelevant!!! anyways i might be able to update today

  10. I know what you mean, SCHOOL= HELL yes that’s an equation! And I hate maths especially the homework even though I’m good at it. Have you ever tried this trick, not doing homework and telling the teacher I lost my book? Works every time.

  11. ok, why am i spamming?? im such an idiot, self proclaimedly. i am glad youre still updating, though i really am feeling guilty over all these spammy reviews im leaving. finn, please,please, delete some of them! i hate myself for spamming! bad me! but pleezee update all the same!

  12. ouch…why did xavier DO that?! whats wrong with him?? omg i cant even guess whats gonna happen next! update soon!

  13. xavier (really Finn at school XD) May 6th, 2013 at 7:03 pm 13

    well… as Foaly told them i went kinda insane… because i stopped the blood flow to Artemis’s brain. anyways *slaps self* GET OUT XAVIER! anyways yeah. next chapter is it. what a releif! it wasn’t that hard to think of at first but it became progressively harder. thank you all for your support! oh crud teacher

  14. This can’t be the last part! NOOOOOOO UPDATE AND COM.PLETE or face my sufforcation wrath!
    If thats a word. …

  15. Finn being a lazy butt and not logging in May 9th, 2013 at 11:40 pm 15

    well i ran out of ideas… but i have a new one at least!

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