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All words

Used to describe


He stole

My heart.

My trust.

My faith

That people

Could truly change.

So why

Do I

Still love


There are others

Even better

Yet he

Still holds

The key

To my heart.


I don’t know.

All I know

Is that he

Captured me,

Gained my trust,

Stole my heart,

Broke my trust,

And I still love


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8 responses to “Him.” Join in!

  1. HIM… five.

  2. Very good, very good. Very nicely done. I really really like it. There’s something about it that I absolutely love. I dunno what it is, but… wow. Nice. You have some talent there.

  3. Wow. It’s brilliant. *3rd comment dance*

  4. Beckett Simpleton January 14th, 2010 at 9:42 pm 4

    😯 coolio! wish i’d written it… *Secretly despises you for thinking it first*
    Well i’ll rate it 5 stars if i cant HAVE it then
    *grumbles about the unfairness of life*

  5. I love the rhythum. Nicely done 😉

  6. 😯 Wow. You have some serious talent going on in the poetry department.

    Great job. 😀 😉 😀

  7. iwa the Chris Tormentor January 15th, 2010 at 1:57 am 7

    Eeeeeep! 5*S!

  8. Artiholi180 the epic person of epicness! February 28th, 2010 at 11:20 pm 8

    woah……THIS IS KEWLIO! this is really good! FiVe StArSiEs!

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