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Deadly Melody

Summary: Warning! SPOILERS FOR TLG!!!!! (post TLG)

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12

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Sidenote- in case no one realized it, I updated two chapters, so it might be a good idea to go and read Ch. 8, which also contains my obscenely long author’s note/apology.

The elf walked into the recovery room where Obsidia sat, still staring at the unconscious boy. She crossed over to her and sat down next to Sorens’ heart monitor, but Obsidia still never moved.

“Look, I know I’m probably not your favorite person right now, but we are trying. We didn’t know there was another siren, or we wouldn’t have taken the chance of such a high dosage tranquilizer.” she said almost pleadingly.

“I never caught your name, by the way.”

Still no response. After twenty minutes of this, Holly stood to leave. She had just placed her hand on the doorknob, when the girls’ low, smooth voice rang across the room.

“I didn’t know he was here, either.”

Holly turned back to face the girl, not appearing to have moved, until she spoke again. “If I had known he was here, I would have never been so brash.” her silver eyes glinted in the fluorescent lights as they flicked to Holly. “I don’t mind risking my own life, but I would never risk someone else’s’ at their expense.” she said, the steely resolve draining out if her voice with every word she uttered.

Holly sighed and sat back down. “You’ll tell me all that, but not your name.” she muttered.

“The real one, or the practical one?” she asked before answering her own question. “My name is Obsidia, but I tell everyone Katia, because who can explain a name like Obsidia?”

Holly smiled ruefully in agreement. She opened her mouth to reply, when, suddenly, Sorens’ heart monitor began to beep erratically.

The thin crack Holly had gone through so much trouble to make in Obsidias’ stony exterior closed up like a crack in a glacier, filling in with icy hostility.

Her features once again stoic as ever, Obsidia leapt from her seat, looking over his body as though it was a wound she could see. Holly also sprang up, giving Soren a panicky once-over. Obsidias’ head jerked up sharply to look at her.

“Holly, call the Mud Man, something’s wrong.” she rushed, before turning back to the boy.

“I know that.” she muttered, before speaking into her wrist communicator. Once she alerted Artemis of the boy’s condition, she walked back over to the gurney. Obsidia was sitting down again, realizing there was nothing she could do for him, besides worsen his condition.

“How did you know my name?” she asked, crossing her arms.

Still looking ahead, Obsidia answered, “One, you do have a nametag and I do read Gnommish. Two, I heard the Mud Whelp, Artemis, say it when I was spying on you.” she replied, blatantly admitting that she had been spying on them. Holly raised an eyebrow, but didn’t seem surprised.

Both turned to look at the door as Artemis pushed it open and entered briskly. Obsidia also stood, placing herself in between him and Sorens’ gurney, blocking his path.

“Before you so much as breathe on him, I want to make something very clear. You do anything that hurts him or makes his condition worse, I will kill you all.” she said in a tone cold as ice, sharp as razors.

Artemis swallowed stiffly and nodded once. She sat back down and he began checking the boy’s vitals. Crossing over to stand by his side, Holly positioned herself slightly behind him, just out of his peripheral vision. She glared daggers of ice at Obsidia, sending a clear message that said she wasn’t the only one who could make threats.

Obsidias’ returning glare held a message if its own.

Come and get it.

So much for trust.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12

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  1. you maybe new,but you’re sort of good. i liked it,and i’ll be grateful if you keep it going. i just turned 11 last month and usually haaate too much romance but this was really good

  2. @shaadia- thanks. This is only the second fanfic I have written and the first AF. I’m glad you liked it

    When I updated it randomly added a third chapter, but its blank. I don’t know how that happened but I will try to fix it.

  3. Your new? Welcome to the sight! I myself just joined a little while back. I haven’t written any fan fics though.
    Nice story! I really liked it! Where did Holly go? Why was she so mad? I thought what Artemis said was kind of sweet.
    So far so good. :)Please update! I’m curious to see what happens next. ???

  4. hi silvergoddess i saw chapter two only now. Great job! And don’t worry about the third chapter being blank,that happens in a lot of stories,i guess. So far,i love this fic. i’m adding it to my favourites when you write more!

  5. Alright, I managed to get the chapters under control and I updated. Chapter 3 officially contains WORDS. I also have a new songfiction up called I Can’t Fix You.

  6. Glad u updated chappie 3 and its great. i read your songfic left a review now 2 be honest i am trying to come up with a theory why everyone’s better than me now IT IS BECAUSE YOURE OLDER AND THERE CANT BE ANY OTHER REASON COS IM BETTER THAN EVERYONE IN CLASS ahem,sorry. good story,keep writing,i will add 2 my favs *smilie face*

  7. Actually I’m not sure it has anything to do with me being older, but I do read a lot. I go through seven or eight 2 inch library books in a week NOT KIDDING. Its really helped with my spelling and vocabulary. I’m glad you like them! I like sad stories so don’t be surprised if you see a lot of them.

  8. Yeah maybe. but it has to be natural talent,because even i read books that are taller than me in diameter. well whatever. i’ll admit i actually am better than everyone in class and am trying ,not too hard,but trying,to maintain the status. silver,can i ask you a favour? PLEASE GIVE ME A BETTER TITLE FOR TIME PARADOX PART TWO, I’M FACING OCD AND GOING PARANOID PLUS MY ALTER EGO IS WORSE THAN ARTY’S!!!! pleasee continue your totally awesome story,honestly i log in daily to see what else you’ve added.

  9. I’m glad you like my stories. I’m going to update at lunch today and I’m also adding a new songfic and poem. I have no real life and i was up until midnight-ish typing it all.

    As for the time paradox thing…hmmm…not sure. Maybe something like Right Place Wrong Time or The Time Travaler’s Genius.

    I updated chapter four. I tried to make it longer too. Review!

  10. wow yeah,love 4th chappie. this is REAL intresting. write more silver,pls read my stories too,specially cos no one likes them:( i give u 5 stars though yours was awesome.

  11. Erm… chapter 5 is updated, but something weird happened and all of my paragraph spacing and indentations got screwed up. I’m going to leave it up for now, but I will fix it.

  12. chapter 5 is really good. also no spelling errors and stuff-spacing doesn’t actually matter to me if the story is good,which it is. keep it up!

  13. sexxicosmologist February 7th, 2013 at 2:55 am 13

    Hi I’m commenting!! 😀 I really do like your fic! I should have commented on it when I added it to my favorites but I was being lazy… so Sorry!



    No offence anybody else. I ADDED THIS 2 MY FAVS COS YOU ARE AWESOME!!!

    *invades comment* Ah actually, I didn’t mean to update! This was my work in progress and I must have updated by accident! FIXING NOW!!!

  15. yay update u have no idea how long i was waiting!

  16. was soo friggin awesome! so glad u updated! excuse me now,i have WWYD to look at!

  17. i am not ignoring that chapter. i still like the story and im totally pissed off that nobody else is commenting, silver deserves more. her writing is totally awesome and i start jumping about in excitement whenever shes posted something!

  18. YES!! update! *lollipop dance*
    I love those! Just so long as you update quickly…
    Thank you! You updated this awesome story just for me? Aww! That’s so nice of you!

  19. Woo-ooh, it’s been a while! Thank you so much for updating! Me love it all! (hey, the cliffhanger doesn’t count 😉 ) Keep it up, Sil!

  20. Yeah, really good work! And I’m glad to see somebody posting, and to see you back on, if only briefly. 🙂 I did see a few small mistakes, but I won’t bothe pointing them out cause of how small they are, they don’t make much difference. Still, really great work! I’ll watch for the updates! 😀

  21. wow. i always love your updates. they’re amazing.

  22. ThunderSpirit October 4th, 2013 at 9:59 pm 22

    Hello. This fix is amazing and your updates are great!????

  23. Oops. I tried placing a happy face. Anyway you are really good.

  24. Nah, it’s not as good as the Rise of the Guardians I have on It’s called Cold Insanity and has hit over 120 reviews last I checked. That’s my best story, and my favorite that I’ve written so far.

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