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Deadly Melody

Summary: Warning! SPOILERS FOR TLG!!!!! (post TLG)

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12

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Obsidia pushed the spent human corpse into the trash compactor and hopped nimbly off the edge, hitting the ground without a sound.

She took a deep breath and looked up at the waxing moon. Only four more days until the full moon, then she would have to leave the area or risk detection by other fairies.

“I can’t let them know I, we, still exist,”she murmured.

She rubbed her palms together and a fine, powdery silver dust sprinkled down. It hovered in the air for a moment then split into eight little clouds, which then morphed into little creatures that vaguely resembled snakes with dragonfly wings.

Each of them zipped off in a different cardinal direction. These little creatures were sentries that would return in a few hours and tell her which direction it would be safest to travel. They detected all forms of life, but were looking specifically for magical creatures.

She scaled a young oak tree, no doubt a product of someone’s Ritual, and watched the moon, waiting for her sentries to return.

Well, most of them anyway.


Holly’s face was and angry red. But, then again, she was angry enough to make a troll cower.

“You can’t what?!” she almost shrieked.

She stormed over to Artemis and got right in his face. He shrank back into the chair, obviously unable to move. “You can’t WHAT?!?!” she yelled even louder.

Artemis’ face was an odd combination of nervousness, fear and a little bit sheepish, too. He swallowed hard, his throat holding about as much moisture as the surface of the sun.

Holly whipped around and stormed form the room, but not before Artemis saw a wet glimmer in her eyes, Was she crying? thought Artemis. Surely not. Not Holly.     

He sighed and ran his pianist fingers through his hair. Foaly shifted from foot to foot for a nervous moment, then began to unhook the wires from Artemis. He glanced at the pale youth as he worked. The teen seemed to be lost in thought as he stared at the door.

Foaly paused long enought to pull Artemis from his stupor.

“Is something wrong?” he asked absently.

“Nothing.” Foaly muttered.

Maybe it is nothing, he thought or maybe it’s something else entirely.


Artemis stepped out of the shuttle, piloted by Chix Verbil instead of Holly. He hadn’t seen her since she stormed out of the Ops Booth in a furious rage.

The shuttle’s door soundlessly closed and the craft shimmered out of sight.

Artemis walked toward the manor and was met at the door by Butler, who was slightly out of breath, but he hid it well.

(P.O.V. shift)

Butler had remained at Fowl Manor because he could barely make his rounds at the Manor, let alone travel to Haven. The plasma bolt hindered him nearly as badly as when Arno had shot him.

“Welcome back, Artemis.” said Butler, his voice betraying a hint of his breathlessness.

“Hello Butler.” said Artemis in an absent tone that greatly surprised him. The boy barely gave Butler a second glance, making a beeline to his study.

Butler watched his young charges’ retreating back, with only one thought. What happened down there?

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12

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  1. you maybe new,but you’re sort of good. i liked it,and i’ll be grateful if you keep it going. i just turned 11 last month and usually haaate too much romance but this was really good

  2. @shaadia- thanks. This is only the second fanfic I have written and the first AF. I’m glad you liked it

    When I updated it randomly added a third chapter, but its blank. I don’t know how that happened but I will try to fix it.

  3. Your new? Welcome to the sight! I myself just joined a little while back. I haven’t written any fan fics though.
    Nice story! I really liked it! Where did Holly go? Why was she so mad? I thought what Artemis said was kind of sweet.
    So far so good. :)Please update! I’m curious to see what happens next. ???

  4. hi silvergoddess i saw chapter two only now. Great job! And don’t worry about the third chapter being blank,that happens in a lot of stories,i guess. So far,i love this fic. i’m adding it to my favourites when you write more!

  5. Alright, I managed to get the chapters under control and I updated. Chapter 3 officially contains WORDS. I also have a new songfiction up called I Can’t Fix You.

  6. Glad u updated chappie 3 and its great. i read your songfic left a review now 2 be honest i am trying to come up with a theory why everyone’s better than me now IT IS BECAUSE YOURE OLDER AND THERE CANT BE ANY OTHER REASON COS IM BETTER THAN EVERYONE IN CLASS ahem,sorry. good story,keep writing,i will add 2 my favs *smilie face*

  7. Actually I’m not sure it has anything to do with me being older, but I do read a lot. I go through seven or eight 2 inch library books in a week NOT KIDDING. Its really helped with my spelling and vocabulary. I’m glad you like them! I like sad stories so don’t be surprised if you see a lot of them.

  8. Yeah maybe. but it has to be natural talent,because even i read books that are taller than me in diameter. well whatever. i’ll admit i actually am better than everyone in class and am trying ,not too hard,but trying,to maintain the status. silver,can i ask you a favour? PLEASE GIVE ME A BETTER TITLE FOR TIME PARADOX PART TWO, I’M FACING OCD AND GOING PARANOID PLUS MY ALTER EGO IS WORSE THAN ARTY’S!!!! pleasee continue your totally awesome story,honestly i log in daily to see what else you’ve added.

  9. I’m glad you like my stories. I’m going to update at lunch today and I’m also adding a new songfic and poem. I have no real life and i was up until midnight-ish typing it all.

    As for the time paradox thing…hmmm…not sure. Maybe something like Right Place Wrong Time or The Time Travaler’s Genius.

    I updated chapter four. I tried to make it longer too. Review!

  10. wow yeah,love 4th chappie. this is REAL intresting. write more silver,pls read my stories too,specially cos no one likes them:( i give u 5 stars though yours was awesome.

  11. Erm… chapter 5 is updated, but something weird happened and all of my paragraph spacing and indentations got screwed up. I’m going to leave it up for now, but I will fix it.

  12. chapter 5 is really good. also no spelling errors and stuff-spacing doesn’t actually matter to me if the story is good,which it is. keep it up!

  13. sexxicosmologist February 7th, 2013 at 2:55 am 13

    Hi I’m commenting!! 😀 I really do like your fic! I should have commented on it when I added it to my favorites but I was being lazy… so Sorry!



    No offence anybody else. I ADDED THIS 2 MY FAVS COS YOU ARE AWESOME!!!

    *invades comment* Ah actually, I didn’t mean to update! This was my work in progress and I must have updated by accident! FIXING NOW!!!

  15. yay update u have no idea how long i was waiting!

  16. was soo friggin awesome! so glad u updated! excuse me now,i have WWYD to look at!

  17. i am not ignoring that chapter. i still like the story and im totally pissed off that nobody else is commenting, silver deserves more. her writing is totally awesome and i start jumping about in excitement whenever shes posted something!

  18. YES!! update! *lollipop dance*
    I love those! Just so long as you update quickly…
    Thank you! You updated this awesome story just for me? Aww! That’s so nice of you!

  19. Woo-ooh, it’s been a while! Thank you so much for updating! Me love it all! (hey, the cliffhanger doesn’t count 😉 ) Keep it up, Sil!

  20. Yeah, really good work! And I’m glad to see somebody posting, and to see you back on, if only briefly. 🙂 I did see a few small mistakes, but I won’t bothe pointing them out cause of how small they are, they don’t make much difference. Still, really great work! I’ll watch for the updates! 😀

  21. wow. i always love your updates. they’re amazing.

  22. ThunderSpirit October 4th, 2013 at 9:59 pm 22

    Hello. This fix is amazing and your updates are great!????

  23. Oops. I tried placing a happy face. Anyway you are really good.

  24. Nah, it’s not as good as the Rise of the Guardians I have on It’s called Cold Insanity and has hit over 120 reviews last I checked. That’s my best story, and my favorite that I’ve written so far.

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