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What Would YOU Do?

Summary: Spoilers for TLG. This is a series of small scenes, but I need people to add into it. please read and add your ideas to the comment box!

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

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Okay, get ready for a dark, demented one. I uploaded this from my phone, to test the Google Chrome app I just got, because it works on my laptop, I figured it would work here.

Not for children with single digit ages.

 

Night Terrors

 

“No, please, n-eaahhhhhh!”

A hooded figure yanked a delicately curved dagger through the thin membrane of skin. A small gout of blood sprayed from the incision across the elf’s abdomen. The figure chuckled at her screams.

Tears rolled down Artemis’ filthy cheeks as Holly’ piercing screams filled his ears. Blood splashed to the dirt floor in streams of rich crimson.
Artemis shook at the state his best friend was in. Cheeks once a bright persimmon were now an ashen gray. Auburn hair that one shone like a copper kettle, now hung in choppy, sweat slickened strings.

Holly shivered as the slash through her slender torso seeped blood onto her green jumpsuit. Ragged bits of red flesh puckered from the wound.
The figure wound their fingers through the dirty knots of her hair and yanked her head back. Artemis heart nearly burst when the obscure torturer pressed the tip of the bloodstained knife to her neck.

“Any last sentiments boy?” The rough chortle was indecipherable as male or female.

“Please don’t! I’ll do anything, give you anything! Please don’t harm her anymore!” his desperate words were only rewarded with another chuckle.

“What I want is for you to beg. I want you to plead for all you were never worth as I take her in front of you. I want you to suffer.” the obscure assailant hissed. He dug the knife in deeper, drawing a ruby drop from beneath the slim blade.

Artemis feel the gruesome smile of their shadowed face as the dagger glided through her jugular as though it was butter.

The earth itself seemed to drop from beneath his feet as he thrashed in his bonds, screaming like a beast strait from the pits of hell itself. He screamed until he could no more.

The figure leaned into his face, finally revealing their own.

“You know, it really is too bad I don’t have the kindness to kill you, too.” the twisted, gnarled mouth of Opal Koboi hissed words of venom at him, her marred by magic features all the more gruesome from the psychotic grin stretched across her blackened face.

Droplets of blood flew through the air as the knife whistled past his ear, embedding itself in the wall behind him.

“No, you have to live with yourself.

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Artemis awoke in a cold sweat, strands of his damp raven hair matted to his forehead. He smeared the wet locks from his eyes as he slid out of bed and flipped the bathroom switch.

He splashed a handful of icy water onto his face and looked into the gilt framed mirror.

“What’s happening to me?”

 

Yes, so this is an microscopic peek into my demented, sadist mind. I’m considering writing a full length story for this. Thoughts?

On a lighter note, my birthday is in a week, y’all! Imma be fifteen! Which means I can get my learner’s permit! WOO!

Well, later y’all! I hope I can update more now!

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

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11 responses to “What Would YOU Do?.” Join in!

  1. Haha…funny. That’s a FUNNY idea,i know my descriptive verbs aren’t good sooo….i can just say it”s good. I like this one.

    Hmm…you want people? ADD ME!!!

    Ideas…how about OPAL USING THE SAME METHOD AS ARTEMIS TO COME BACK TO LIFE AND REVENGE!!!!
    Dude you had better appreciate that one cos i was planning to put it into one of my stories but you deserve it better.

  2. Go ahead and put it in yours! Maybe we can use each others ideas and incorperate them into our own stories. Like I’ll create a situation and you add to it in your own story. I just updated, though I didn’t add in shaadias’ part YET. I kinda wanted to make this little fluffy bit before I lost the idea. It is one of the fluffiest things I have done and I’m not sure if I’ll make anything else so fluffy, but I really liked this idea.

  3. the update felt good to read,especially after that…awesome/tiring/sloppy(don’t know) day at school. i mean really,we tried touching a bull skull in the science lab and sprayed water all over the place. anyway ,to the topic. you know what i think of fluffy stories,but i kinda like your ones. keep it up silver.

  4. I dunno if this is spamming, just makin sure you know i’m still interested. Please write more!

  5. shaadia feeling like crying April 2nd, 2013 at 11:33 am 5

    WHAT–?! WHY THE FREAKING CLIFFHANGER?! and why is it so sad?? dude! how DO you come up with such awesome ideas????!!! *wrings own neck* why are you better than me?? waaargh! you are so awesome!!!!

  6. so they did get married? what happened to the sickness? um….have i ever told you how good your descriptive writing is? you should be proud of that.

    *invades comment* Okay, she isn’t sick in this one. None of the stories have any relation to another unless I specify otherwise in an Author’s Note. The sickness in the fourth one never occurred in the fifth. Does that answer your question?
    And thanks, I am most proud of this little drabblicious fic. I try to make everything as descriptive as possible, but I think this fic got it best:)

  7. I love your writing. The quality, the grammar, the plots, the everything.
    And before I forget…
    thanks for updating!!

  8. Hmm… very good, Silver! I think you should do a full length on the last one, it was very good. I like the dark demented stuff. 🙂

    Happy birthday! Good luck on getting your permit! Er… here’s a virtual lollipop to celebrate! O- 🙂

    *invades comment* I have been considering a full-length like this for a while, I just figured this would be the best way to pitch the idea. If people like it, great, I’ll do it. If they don’t, this is short, so they’re no worse for the wear.

    MY LOLLIPOP! Om nom nom… mmm, mango…

  9. OMG……………..Awesome.

    Oh, and i’ll send ya a happy b’day email!

  10. I’m scared. chapter seven was scary. but hey…sadistic-ness rules!!
    I sent a whole apology letter, if you check your inbox. And now I’m watching GL!

  11. Kudos! I love your descriptions. I suck at them u know. Keep on writing! It really made me smile when arty proposed. Not many.can pull off.romance like.this. Sweet but not sappy.

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