The princess and the people (rewrite)


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  1. Why is it cut off…?

  2. Hey, it’s okay if I don’t come in ’til much later if you use the plot you said you would. *smug, knowing smile*

    …And if you update!!!! 🙂

  3. yoshi, you will hate the last two chapters. I have split the fanfic into 2 parts- this one, and the second one called ‘left, right and centaur’ Nobody must claim this title!!!
    you might like the end of the second part though yoshi.

  4. *raises eyebrows in a way that most people would classify as skeptical and the people who know me best would classify as dangerous* Isn’t this the fic you asked me about before you disappeared? Why would I dislike the ending?

  5. *cackles evily* patience, my young padawan, patience. Lets just say, we have to test Arty’s strength of character in this fic. All will be revealed

  6. So /that’s/ why you wanted my description!

    Awesome chapter! A few things, but who cares? I don’t even remember what they were! 😀

  7. Ally, you are based on Annabeth Chase, out of the Percy Jackson books. If you don’t know who she is, read the books.

  8. When will all be revealed? I’m starting to get impatient, here, though I know the big reveal is at the end of the fic. And don’t call me padawan. *picks Shadow up with the Force and glares daggers until Shadow gets the general idea*

    I would really, really, really like an update. Good enough? *simultaneously does puppy-dog eyes while sharpening glaring-daggers*

    ~An impatient Yoshi

  9. *retrievesb shield from under bed* Okay, jedi master -sorry, mistress- but I can only really update on saturdays. Until half term comes, naturally.

  10. shadowsnake451 February 1st, 2010 at 12:09 pm 10

    someone r&r this again already! It’s okay if you say it’s rubbish, just please talk to me!!!

  11. shadowsnake451 February 3rd, 2010 at 12:05 pm 11

    hello? anyone?

  12. Evyluvsbunnies February 6th, 2010 at 9:52 pm 12

    Holy moly. O_O This…is… incredible! 😀
    Grammar- 5
    Punctuation- 5
    Grammar- 4 or 5, haven’t read all of it yet.
    Epicness- 15

  13. Hey, I likes. I just haven’t been able to be on. I’m soooo stressed lately… *head busts open* Whoops.

    But, seriously, aside from trivial deviations from normal grammar, ELB is right about the epicness level, on a scale of one to five. 😀 This story is totally awesome. No complaints, only cheers and beggings for updates!!!

    And please, update as soon as you can. When is mid-term? I just had my mid-term a week ago…

    ~An impatient Yoshi who wants to be in this story sometime soon but is willing to wait for a while

  14. shadowsnake451 February 8th, 2010 at 2:32 pm 14

    My mid term is next week. Sucks, huh?
    Give me two chapters, yoshi. Two chapters at the very most. Actually, you are already in it. Look closely. Think. Okay, so you aren’t in it properly yet, but still.

  15. shadowsnake451 February 24th, 2010 at 2:27 pm 15

    hello? Anyone gonna review this?

  16. Hey, be PATIENT. I have final exams, and I’m officially banned from the computer by my dad but I’m cheating by going on the school computer, and I’m trying to write a book….


    Anyhoo, I can’t even express how much I am loving this story. Although I am verrry disappointed that that stupid bi– er, meanie Koboi burned down my kingdom, I love everything else. Thank you for the update!!!

    ~(Princess?) Yoshi

  17. shadowsnake451 February 27th, 2010 at 3:13 pm 17

    How you likin’ the description?

  18. shadowsnake451 March 13th, 2010 at 3:02 pm 18

    If you want to listen to music whilst reading this, I’ve found three excellent ones- Blood red sky by Seth Lakeman, Uprising by Muse and Eyes of the night by the starlight mints. Try it, they really work together

  19. bookygirl1996 March 19th, 2010 at 11:36 pm 19

    *Screams a single word* UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE
    update Now
    this is one of the BEST things I have ever read!!!!!!
    (honestly, at some points i cried other i glowed splendid imagry)

  20. shadowsnake451 March 20th, 2010 at 2:11 pm 20

    I know. Sad innit?
    Don’t worry, it gets…WORSE! HAHAHAHAHA!!!
    Oh yes,much sadder, and also much more beautiful. *smiles evily/knowingly*

  21. 3 WORDS: BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!

  22. shadowsnake451 March 23rd, 2010 at 2:41 pm 22

    i thank you, i thank you…

  23. 0_0



    *wanders off in speechless wonder*

  24. shadowsnake451 March 26th, 2010 at 9:55 am 24

    Ah…sorry Yoshi, I probably should have warned you…erm…yeah. Do you like it anyway?

  25. I think you misunderstood my speechless wonder. My mind is too in-the-gutter for me to be freaked by kissing. Though it is a bit bold for me, I must admit, I do like it and I’m waiting (not-so-)patiently for another update.

    *throws paper ninja stars at Opal*

    Random fact: I am a paper ninja. I have paper ninja stars, a paper gauntlet, and the plans for a paper katana. If paper was metal and metal was paper, I’d be the deadliest non-Butler human alive. 😈

    ~Yoshi, princess of a pile of ash in the sea 😥

  26. shadowsnake451 April 1st, 2010 at 11:35 am 26

    I’m sorry guys…I just don’t know how to bring it back.
    *dissolves into tears whilst also jumping off a rather high cliff and trashing the world’s technology*


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