The Cross Species Battle (resumed from Zidan’s Army) Imprisoned

Summary: An intersting part, with promised action. I SWEAR ON MY WORD AS A PRINCESS!!

Chapters: 1 2 3

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Silver glanced around her, at the swarm of mud men pouring in. She was already at her perch.
The plan wasn’t working. However much they tried, they couldn’t get the humans into one place. It was impossible. Rather it looked like Holly, Loken and Piper were the ones hoarded into the same spot. This was impossible. Better call Retrieval. Silver took out her communicator. “Foaly,come in. Darn, where the heck is he? Foaly, come in!”
She heard a human shout. Apparently she’d been spotted, and all was over.



Zidan smirked. “Ah, my old enemy,” he said, dramatically. It had taken eight of his men to restrain Loken, and just two each for the others. “We meet again.”

Loken grinned. “Try me.”

“Take that stupid smile off your face,” growled the human.

“Make me.”

Holly chuckled.

Zidan’s stare drifted towards her. He sighed. “Bring the elf here.”

“What, gonna interrogate me?” she asked, sarcastically. “Won’t work.”

“Interrogate?” asked Zidan, faking surprise. “Oh, no, much worse.” He leaned in, face inches away from hers. Holly scowled. “I know what you’re thinking and it’s not going to happen. Dream off, pervert.”

He nodded at the two musclemen holding her. “Take her to my room. I’ll be back shortly after I kill this pathetic whelp.”

Loken sneered at him with burning hatred in his eyes. “Talking about yourself, I presume.”

“We’ll settle this, Loken. Take the two elves to the dungeon.”

“I’m half sprite,” spat Silver. “Dungeon. Very dramatic.  And I suppose you mean basement. Believe me, we’ve seen it. Super lame.”

“Go on,” challenged Piper. “Retrieval is going to kick your butt.” She paused, glancing at Silver. “You did call them, right?”

The elf/sprite  shook her head guiltily. Piper groaned.


“Release him,” ordered Zidan. The eight humans did as they were told, immediately leaving with a low bow.

He faced Loken, sword at hand. “Do your worst, elf,” he snickered. “This is a fight to the death.”


Minerva sighed. “I’m sorry about this, Holly. But around here, you do what Zidan wants you to do.”

Holly scowled. “Look, since we’re familiar and all, why don’t you just let me go and help Loken kill that freak?”

“That’s not an option.”

“Why not? You’re not still mad at me about the No1 thing, are you?”

The Mud Girl sat beside her, breathing deeply. “No. I just can’t. Just like you said, Zidan is a freak. When he was appointed General, he searched the planet for talented humans who could contribute to him winning the war, and found ways to make them work for him. He kept their families hostage and I’ll only get to see Papa and Bobo if this war ends, and if he wins it.”

Holly stared at her, horrified. Now it all made sense why these humans were so dedicated to their leader’s every word.

“If there was any other way, I’d do anything possible to make him lose it,” she continued. “Though I still can’t believe how Zidan managed to get every brilliant mind on the planet and missed Artemis.”

Holly smiled slowly. “That’s because he and the rest of his family are on our side.”

“This is one of the only times I wish I was Artemis.”

The elf laughed. “I’m glad you’re not, because otherwise I’d be in love with a girl.”

“You are gross.”

“I only said that to freak you out.”

“Did you say you love Artemis?”

Holly rolled her eyes. “As a friend, yes. What did you think?”

Minerva smirked. “Because Beckett told me–”

“How long ago was this?”

“The bottom line is still the same.”

“Never believe what a Fowl says,” warned Holly. “Artemis promised that he’ll stay behind and not fight, but I think he’s going to do the exact opposite.”

Chapters: 1 2 3

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  1. Fine! I will guess!

    So… would the man eating beast happen to be your cheetah? I’m guessing you go with Arty when he tries to come to the rescue and you take cheetah with you?

    Just guessing here….. 🙂

    Uh-oh…. we got caught… well, there’s only one thing I can think to say about that.


    Anyhow, great work! Update soon! 🙂

  2. No,cheetah is around but its not the correct answer! You’ll have to try harder, Piper! 🙂

  3. …well, this is awkward.

    No, contrary to circumstantial evidence, I’m actually not dead. Just… ended up on a regrettably long hiatus. But I’m back now, and about to get in a war of patience with the Google Chrome app on my phone to update some of my friggen stories. Actually, you’ll probably only get one, but that’s better than nothing… right?

    Also, shaadia, if you go back to the first chapter of TCSB(yeah, you may be looking a while), my character is half-sprite half-human. She looks like a human, except has pointed ears of which are hidden beneath her hair and wings, which no one can see, as they are hidden beneath her shirt/jacket or something.Just saying.

    *moans feebly* on to the update battle…

  4. Okay, but more than anything, we’re glad YOU’RE BACK!!
    FG welcomes you again. HAI!!

  5. I’m guessing that you abandon everyone because you are super board, and get taken prisoner. Then butler thinks Artemis is going crazy and Foaly decides to vist them with mulch. Then for some reason, they bring a giant man-eating dragon or dragonfly. I’m probably miserably off but oh well. Anyway Shaadia, you are really good at writing stories. Please continue as soon as possible. Or I will track you down somehow and you will feel my wrath. Or something else that crazy.

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