The Cross Species Battle (resumed from Zidan’s Army) Imprisoned

Summary: An intersting part, with promised action. I SWEAR ON MY WORD AS A PRINCESS!!

Chapters: 1 2 3

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Author’s note: Hmm…where were we now? Oh yeah.


Sweat was trickling down his face. It had nothing to do with the heat. No. But maybe it had something to do with the eleven year old girl screaming at him to punch harder.

This was worse than anything Butler would get him to do. No, this  was a nightmare.

“Come on!” shouted Shaadia. “This is super lame! I could do better!’

Punching a bag.

Half an hour doing something totally pointless. How was he supposed to get to Loken’s level of strength?

“LAME!” Shaadia was yelling. “What wrong did I do to get pulled into this mess? Why the heck can’t Foaly train you himself? Do I even care about your girlfriend problems?”

Artemis scowled. (He’d been doing that the whole time anyway) One, because he was still in the armor. Secondly, he didn’t like Shaadia using that G word.

Artemis immediately stopped what he was doing, wringing his hands sloppily.  “I give up. Who do you think I am, Rocky Balboa?”

“Not really, but giving up is LAME!” Shaadia sighed. “We’d better get to the shuttle already. You’re never gonna get better than Loken at this rate.”

Chapters: 1 2 3

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  1. Fine! I will guess!

    So… would the man eating beast happen to be your cheetah? I’m guessing you go with Arty when he tries to come to the rescue and you take cheetah with you?

    Just guessing here….. 🙂

    Uh-oh…. we got caught… well, there’s only one thing I can think to say about that.


    Anyhow, great work! Update soon! 🙂

  2. No,cheetah is around but its not the correct answer! You’ll have to try harder, Piper! 🙂

  3. …well, this is awkward.

    No, contrary to circumstantial evidence, I’m actually not dead. Just… ended up on a regrettably long hiatus. But I’m back now, and about to get in a war of patience with the Google Chrome app on my phone to update some of my friggen stories. Actually, you’ll probably only get one, but that’s better than nothing… right?

    Also, shaadia, if you go back to the first chapter of TCSB(yeah, you may be looking a while), my character is half-sprite half-human. She looks like a human, except has pointed ears of which are hidden beneath her hair and wings, which no one can see, as they are hidden beneath her shirt/jacket or something.Just saying.

    *moans feebly* on to the update battle…

  4. Okay, but more than anything, we’re glad YOU’RE BACK!!
    FG welcomes you again. HAI!!

  5. I’m guessing that you abandon everyone because you are super board, and get taken prisoner. Then butler thinks Artemis is going crazy and Foaly decides to vist them with mulch. Then for some reason, they bring a giant man-eating dragon or dragonfly. I’m probably miserably off but oh well. Anyway Shaadia, you are really good at writing stories. Please continue as soon as possible. Or I will track you down somehow and you will feel my wrath. Or something else that crazy.

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