The Cross Species Battle (resumed from A New Enemy) Trust?

Summary: I think Loken missed the previous part. Read it, dark lord. I took so much effort, and you're the bad guy.

Chapters: 1 2

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WARNING! Slight bad words used. Actually, the same word repeated a few times. It’s not too bad. Honest. Nothing that really needs a red warning, Amy! 😉                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Zidan fumed impatiently. “Hurry up, you blocked toilet feces!”                                                                                                                                                                                                                             The unfortunate officers quivered in fear. Being called “feces” was bad enough, but one never knew what Zidan would do next. Finally, Zidan heard the long awaited call, “I-It’s ready…sir.” “Good,” snapped Zidan. “Bring the beast. Have my armor and sword ready.” And in a while, he stepped through the portal and appeared right in front of his rivals.

Chapters: 1 2

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  1. You got cheetah back! Cool! Hehe. So… Holly has a crush on Loken now? Ew, but it is your story. I wonder what Loken will say about that… Hmm… Anyways, update soon!

  2. sorry, but i just had to put it there. it’s neccessary if the next part is to have A/H.

  3. i dont have a computer right now. this is my psp and i cant write stories for the moment, but am about to log out and write the rest on a paper. i’ll post it soon. i will reveal why throughout TCSB holly hasnt been so attached to arty.and the past and stuff.
    bye for now!

  4. Fair enough, just as long as there’s some good A/H stuff later! I’ll be watching for an update! 🙂

  5. you’d better be! lemme give ya a hint of what’s next, holly and arty …dude im not telling you!

  6. Mastermind Excello April 20th, 2013 at 2:31 am 6

    Excellent! It perfectly shows Loken’s awesomeness. I’ve updated “The Pale Elf”, and it is good.

    shaadia: it also means that holly likes you.
    REALLY likes ya.

    so arty gets jelous.
    you can guess 😉

  7. Mastermind Excello April 20th, 2013 at 2:56 am 7

    This involves the “Cross-species Battle” Series: I’d like to ask that after you’ve completed the whole story, may I have your permission to embellish and make it more… dynamic, I guess? It’s just something I thought of today, after seeing you complementing the action in my stories.

  8. Mastermind Excello April 20th, 2013 at 3:13 pm 8

    If I offended you, I apologize.

  9. no need! I already know my action stuff could improve. it’s not so great…for the future wrestling divas champion…AARGGH!!!

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