The Adventures of Anastasia

Summary: This has got a touch of romance to it, but I don't know if I'm good at romantic stories. Never underestimate the power of a Fowl. LEP Captain Luther Gimmit found that out the hard way. The great Artemis Fowl has disappeared. His son, Arthur Fowl, doesn't know his father, only his mother, Juliet. He has heard many stories about his grandfather's schemes, and he decides to try catching a faerie of his own. Along the way, he meets the girl of his dreams, but her father will do anything to get her away from his clutches, although she may not want to go... Did I mention they aren't the same species?

Chapters: 1 2 3

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Mission Log-3.1
The three of us, newly reunited, ran as fast as we could to the door. I won’t bother you with the reunion and all, you don’t want to hear mushy stuff. On the way out, BOOM, there’s Butler.
“You’re not going anywhere,” he growls in that creepy way of his. Behind him is Arthur. What’s worse, Artemis or Arthur? I say Arthur; he did kidnap two faeries. He grabs the three of us and shoves us-no. Make that two of us. He kept Anastasia. Holly looks at me. Frond, that look was miserable.
Anastasia smiles at Arthur. Smiles. They are the same age…no! He kidnapped her, and Holly, and now me! How could she smile??? Unless, now this is really weird, there’s something going on between them, something…like feelings that a kidnapper/his kidnappee should not feel. I’m just putting that out there.

I know the ending sucks, but I lost my inspiration a while ago. I’m ending it here. I may pick it up again in the future, but for now it’s done.

Chapters: 1 2 3

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  1. *first comment dance*

    It’s a little confusing. I like the story line but maybe have an introduction to introduce all the charactors??

    I don’t understand each section. Who’s writing it? The Mission Log thing? Or is that just me…

    I really like it. Just have the introduction and I think I will understand. All too confusing without…

  2. Oh, I meant to say the good things.

    The idea is great. The description and poem bit is cool too. I love it. Update!!

  3. ‘Tis good, but I want to see ARTEMIS COME IN. Or someone from the AF series. Too short and irrelevant for a proper comment. There was a typo or two, but nothing major.

  4. WE:I think Holly’s going to be important.
    Elf:A couple of typos-gaps and caps where there shouldn’t be. And said is a very very boring word. Use a thesaurus. Yelled, squealed, exclaimed etc, will make it a lot more interesting.

  5. Man Hermonie’s Crazy!

    No offence intended!

    First of all, please keep comments to the actual story, and second, no double posting 😉

  6. Roadburner99- Are you even going to review?

    Well,I will. 😉 This was pretty good, I must say. A couple typos, but nothing that major. I like this idea so far. Please keep it up. 😉

    -Star* :mrgreen:

  7. im pretty sure his dad wouldn’t agree with this…

    anyway good story so far…

  8. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or I will kidnap Artemis and force him to be my boyfriend! ‘Course, i might do that anyway…

  9. the overall story was good & @ star7 HOW DO YOU DO THE BLUE SMILY FACE!!!!!!???????? PS arty girl, you can’t kidnap arty. I beat you to it.

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