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The Weekend

Summary: Half the village is talking about me. 'My hairs bright red and I've got a temper to match' I don't have a temper! Well not really...

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

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A/N: Erm, well I’m not quite sure how to say this. This chapter, um, kinda leave’s the PG zone, and well dances into, erm, ‘adultry’. PHEW! Glad to get that out!!

Holly’s P.O.V.

While Artemis was sulking I sorted out my feelings. Believe me, it wasn’t easy. What I came up with was this:

1.Artemis is really annoying, and I swear he does it on purpose, so I’m not going to be nice to him.

2.It’s not my fault Artemis cried. He’s a wuss.

3.Stuff Myles. I loved last night and I am in love with Beckett.

In fact, I was so in love that I decided I could brave the dragon, and tell Artemis how I felt.


“Polly! I’m sorry I tried to kiss you.”

“Yeah, whatever.” I sit down on the bed next to him.

“It’s a double bed,” Artemis points out, hoping I’m a very forgiving person.

I rolled my eyes. “I noticed.”

“And we’re engaged, so actually that’s really good for us.”

“For you.”

“Oh. I thought I was forgiven.”

“Nope. I actually love someone else.”

“You can’t. Well, I suppose you can love who you like, but the Press would have a field day if they found out that you were engaged to someone else. It’s a royal wedding, Polly.”

Ugh! What a dork! He doesn’t control me!

“You can’t tell me what to do! Have kids and tell them whatever you like. But you don’t own me.”

“OK. Let’s have kids, then.”

“No! No! I barely know you!”

“You get very angry very easily. You shouldn’t. It’s not very nice for the person on the receiving end.”

So I took a deep breath and re-phrased my statement. “I don’t want kids, OK? I’m 19, I can’t be a mum!”

“You can! You can, Polly, I know you can! You’re very orderly, and a good role-model, and you’re very nice, when you want to be.”

Yeah, he has a good point. I probably could be a mum. But I don’t want to.

“So? I could but I won’t.”

“Go on. Lets.”

“I can’t!”


“Because I don’t love you, I love Beckett, OK? I slept with him!” Shoot. That was really dumb.

“Good! That’s good! That means you won’t be nervous, because you have experience, and you know me better than you know him.”

Wow. There was me expecting another breakdown. I could not have been more wrong.

“No! You don’t get it! I. Don’t. Love. You.”

“So? Who cares?” He curls up against me. Brilliant persuasion move, works a charm, no sarcasm intended. “Please? I love you.”

“I wouldn’t do it with you if you were the last man on Earth.”

“Yes you would,” he replies, nuzzling my neck.

I don’t reply to that, it’s just so stupid.

“Because otherwise humans would cease to exist, just because you’re scared.”

“Scared! I am not scared!”

His hands slide up my top. “Prove it.”

“I did it with your brother. I think that kinda ‘proves it’, don’t you?”

“You didn’t, though. It’s an excuse. If you’re scared, please tell me. I would like you to be comfortable around me.”

“I did! Let go of me!”

But he’s pushed me down, now lying on top of me. “If you’re pregnant in the next 2 months, I’ll believe you. However, right now I don’t. So if you and I have a baby, then you’ll be pregnant, then I’ll believe you.”

He’s got this stupid smirk on his face. He reckons he’s got me, hook line and sinker. I must admit, he’s close.

“OK, I’ll-”

But he presses his lips against me, cutting me off. My top has been pushed right up to my bra.

“Stop!’ I manage to choke out.

“You said ‘OK’. You did, I heard you.”

“I was going to say something else.”

My top is off now, as is his. I don’t want to do this. I can’t.

“Well, bad luck. You’ve agreed.”

“No, listen-”

He cuts me off again, sliding his tongue around my mouth. His cold hands slip below my waistband. He can’t seriously do this. That’d be rape. That’d be breaking the law.

“Artemis, listen to me!”

“No. Don’t want to stop now.”

“Fine, don’t stop, just listen.”

His eyes were shining at the words ‘don’t stop’. He was finally silent, hands not still for a single second “Artemis, I. Don’t. Love. You. I slept with Beckett, OK? I love him.”

“If you’re too scared to do it, just say, please. I want you to be comfortable around me.”

“Scared?! I’m not scared!”

“But you must be, or you’d sleep with me.”

“I’m not! Stop it! Leave me alone!”

“Not listening! Nooo, you have to now!”

I kick him off furiously. “I. Don’t. Want. To. Get it?”

He rolls off, staring at my roof. “Sleep with me.”

“Were you not just listening to me?”

He giggled. Yes, actually giggled. “No, Polly. Sleep as in rest. Like, you and I share the same bed, and just rest.”


“It will get your confidence up.”

“I’m not-”

“You know, Polly, you need to learn acceptance. This is what is happening, it’s not really a request for permission.”

So I simply turned furiously on him, hogging as much blanket as possible.

Only much later in the night do I realise that it’s Saturday.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

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36 responses to “The Weekend.” Join in!

  1. ArtemisfianceNo1 November 10th, 2010 at 5:28 am 1

    ermm, a bit to short for me to properly comment, so when you make it a bit longer, tell us, and ill give you a proper comment 🙂 🙂 🙂 :mrgreen:

  2. Yeah, VERY short. But awesome. And there is no OOCness, Holly was as close to perfect as possible. 🙂 UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!

  3. Liked the first chapter! ;P
    The second chapter shows that holly is a bit different from the books-more temper;P- but it is still good!!!
    Wish you luck with your writing, and hopefully, you’ll end up with more FINISHED stories than I have. Which would currently be one.

    “What do we want?”
    “World Domination!”
    “When do we want it?”

  4. Well. Short. It must be LONGAH!

  5. erm…short, too short to comment.

    I thought Holly was a little OOC but other than that, no OOCness as far as I know.

    I actually think your writing style is really good so just write more like that and we’ll be flying 😀

    And I’ll give you grape juice for the update (a reasonably long one)

  6. Hahahahahhaha!!! No other comment, too short.

  7. Good, short. I like.

  8. it isn’t finished yet so stop calling it short I am in the middle of updating all my stories… well kind of so i’ll update as soon as possible don’t kill me if it takes until tommorow i’m doing my best 🙂

  9. We shan’t kill you, we just… erm, nag you with pitch forks? 🙂 update?

  10. Beckett Simpleton November 14th, 2010 at 9:30 pm 10

    Hmmm. Update? Short CHAPTERS (see, I didn’t say how it was just SHORT) this could be FUNNEH if it turns out good 🙂

  11. Good way to begin – I like the twist on the setting, if you know what I mean (the castle/village idea). Holly was hilarious. Yes indeed, update!

  12. Interesting…please update soon! Maybe you can combine Chap 1 and 2? It’ll be longer, and you won’t be nagged so much! 🙂

  13. Interesting…please update soon! Maybe you can combine Chap 1 and 2? It’ll be longer, and you won’t be nagged so much! 🙂 Overall, very interesting. I want to see where this is going!

  14. Abandoned story #29249. Please stand in line and take a ticket.

    COME ON!!! WHY DOES EVERYONE WRITE A LITTLE BLURB, POST, THEN STOP WRITING?! So many ideas put to waste… I need an update NOW!

    It’s very interesting and very sarcastic, which I like. That “reached the sky”

    And chapter two was hilarious.

  15. thankyou my public, I am pleased with my comments. I will update now and post ASAP. your number 1 story writer and the most awesomest person in the world ( lets not forget modest!!!!) ABRACADABRA has left the building.

  16. My public? Seriously?
    Baby should be changed to Daughter. Yes, I’ve already read it, but I just noticed that now. There’s a big-ish gap after the letter, which must die NOW.
    Other then that, very good. 🙂
    16th comment dance!!

  17. Stereotypical perhaps, but well done. Great update. Good grammer etc. I like Holly’s sarcastic nature. Pleez update!

  18. Your wish is my command. I have updated!!!

  19. That was really good!!. and funny.
    i give it 5 stars!! 🙂

  20. Wow, someone with a sense of humor. We haven’t had one of those in ages; let’s see, was it 19 years? XD

    Anyway, loved it! The chapters are really short, and yes, OOC. I think you’re rushing it a bit, though. Might I suggest that you slow things down? I didn’t imagine a Beckett/Holly fic. Hmm. Should be interesting; if you get to that part (which means UPDATE!).

  21. “I will punch you into next week.”
    “Good, we get married then.”


  22. Thankyou for those kind words of wisdom. Just updated and am updating again!! Love ME!!!!!!! 😛

  23. wow you updated a lot!!!!! I’m only on Chapter 6 I can’t read that fast. but so far it was really good!!. thank you for dedicating that chapter to me 🙂

  24. This was good. can you post a warning on chapter 11. i read these fan fics out loud to my little sis and i had to skip the whole chapter. besides that IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!! 🙂

  25. When are u gonna Update???????

  26. Hahahah! Beautiful! Magnificent! Artemis seems to be acting a bit like Orion now. 😀 And you have Holly almost perfectly. Great job! 😀

  27. Fowlfan4ever July 9th, 2011 at 4:15 pm 27

    Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  28. Did you like my update? It was awesome. Iknow:)
    I will update more later.

    ABRA OUT!!!! 🙂

  29. Wow that was amazing. I loved it every time holly and artemis would fight. Am I wiered cus I kinda liked chapter 11 ?!?

  30. Are you going to get Holly and Artemis back together or not. Update!!!!!!!!!!!

  31. Thanks guys. 🙂 No, Amber, you’re not weird, I liked it too.
    Eragon-I can’t tell you that!!! That’d totally ruin the WHOLE STORY. If you keep reading the updates you’ll find out. 🙂

  32. You updated thats good. I didn’t notice any mistakes and this is very good. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  33. OMG!!! THis is amazing!! I only saw a few spelling mistakes but other than that one of the best Fan FIcs I have EVER read!!! Please update soon.

  34. Hi, Abra here, on my co-writer’s account.
    Thanks!!! 🙂 Will update ASAP. 😀

  35. *whistles* that’s AMAZING!!! I love it! Are you going to write more or did you forget to change the ‘finished’ thing?

  36. Arto_Fowlo May 9th, 2012 at 8:52 am 36

    More is coming, don’t worry. 🙂 Glad you liked it.

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