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Savage Heart

Summary: Heartbreak, a death in itself.

Chapters: 1 2 3

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Tears dripped onto the worn welcome mat as the LEPRecon officer in front of her offered his condolences, before taking off into the sim-night.
β€œArtemis Fowl, he passed away, Commander… I’m so sorry.” the slight elf said, shaking his head sadly.

She stood there. Stood there and wept, waiting for the onslaught of memories to falter. She was rooted in place, frozen as her heart. Her face twisted in a mask of pure grief, and she knew that the press of time was finally catching up to the broken shell that she had become.

Holly could barely contain herself as she shut the door to the outside world, along with any light it allowed into the small residence. Collapsing, she slowly slid down the doorway, her tears an unending stream of anguish, which fell onto her clothes and dotted them with ugly spots.

This was the cherry on top of the sundae, yes, it was, thought Holly bitterly. Stress, Trouble, the LEP… it was all too much for one fairy to handle… to much… too much.

Her world turned upside down, the angry tendrils of insanity coiled within the dark of her mind… were finally unleashed: free to wreck havoc and play upon the rhythms of your heart.

Chapters: 1 2 3

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  1. I’m shocked. Thoroughly and completely. 5 stars. That much goes without saying.

    One question, the word ‘Fowl’, in Fowl play? Did Artemis have a say in this? Didn’t it say in the first chapter that he was dead? Isn’t that what drove her to depression?

    Ah, you noticed. πŸ˜€ That was completely intentional… my way of saying that Artemis could control you, that his hold of you would never be severed, even upon his death. πŸ˜€ Depressing, isn’t it? XD Anyway, thanks. πŸ˜€ ~Fowlie

  2. XDDD I TOTALLY didn’t notice the “Fowl”! XP

    Yeah, the music, which I oh-so-conviently suggested, was a really nice touch. I actually didn’t read all of this until now, and really struck me. This gives “angsty romance” a new meaning.


  3. I love the description of how she’s heartbroken. It just adds, I don’t know, a new feeling or something. It’s amazing. Um…there’s not much else to say about it except… 5 stars.

  4. Omg that is soooo sad at the end… *Sniffle* She killed herself. I feel bad for her.. 500/T(tacos)

  5. This is so beautiful. This actually made me cry for a bit there…
    I love how you somehow managed to work a songfic in there. Just amazing…

  6. Prettiful, but I’m not crying… didn’t even feel my heart clench. Wow, creepy — that shows what too much angst does to you. Takes a lot more for me to cry, I guess.

    Very nice, and very few mistakes. I’m talking the bare minimal — “to” used instead of “too”, etc. I like the way you structured your sentences and your use of repitition. Interesting symbolization, descriptives, word choice. Omigosh, you’ve grown so much! XD

    Thanks, WE. πŸ˜€ I’ll try to fix the errors, if I ever get time. πŸ˜€ ~Fowlie

  7. It was amazing but one thing confuzzled me, at the end of chapter 2 it said “the end ” but then chapter 3 cropped up. Why?

    It was the end of her life, not the end of my story. ~Fowlie

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