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I pledge

Summary: Take pity on me and caress me like you do to a whimpering child. I pledge to never replay my past again. I pledge to never perform my wrong mistakes. I pledge to do all this if you forgive me. My heart, full of misery and guilt, pounds against my fragile skin. Cut it out for me so I can’t feel a thing.....................

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Take pity on me and caress me like you do to a whimpering child. 

I pledge to never replay my past again. I pledge to never perform my wrong mistakes. I pledge to do all this if you forgive me. 

My heart, full of misery and guilt, pounds against my fragile skin. Cut it out for me so I can’t feel a thing. 

Make me feel like I am worth something. Help me not surrender to my mind. My mind has torn apart. I no longer can think. I’m not who I was and never will be. 

I pledge to become a new me if you would help me. 

Whenever I look back, all I see is evil. I cannot even say it. I cannot even think of it. 

I am falling apart. This sickness overcomes me but don’t let the night trick me into sleep. 

Don’t tell me I can live normally for I can never be. This curse of being intelligent is a heavy load I have to carry the rest of my life. 

Just convince me that you are real. Persuade me that I can trust you. Induce me that I am invincible. 

Everyday I wake, every night I sleep, fearing the day that comes before me. Take this fear away so I can rest peacefully. 

Days pass by without me even knowing. 

These tests are getting restless. The doctor knows naught. 

I once believed I was never helpless. I once assumed I never needed anyone. I once held the thought of being ruler of my mind and others. I thought wrong. I never could control myself. 

Please, don’t think me bad even if I am. I never thought I was innocent as an angel or naïve like a child. I never once thought of myself as a hero coming to save everyone in need. 

When I look up at the blank ceiling, my head is full of buzzing sounds. I wonder if you can hear it too. 

Don’t worry about me, you said so yourself that I would survive. I don’t worry. If darkness overcomes me, I am in peace. No longer will I be screaming in agony and crying in despair. But I would like to see the sun again and relive the life I never had. 

I pledge I will change my ways. I pledge I will be strong. I pledge I will never replay my past again. I pledge to never perform my wrong mistakes. 

I pledge to do this if you would help me. 

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  1. That’s kind of sweet and very sad. Who is this about?

    The part where they talk about how bad they’ve been. That makes me think it could be Artemis. But if so, who is he talking to??

  2. Wow. Very good. Is this about Artemis, to Holly? Idling no noticible errors, but I wasn’t looking for any.

    Anyways, social time 🙂 Welcome, and enjoy your loss of sanity. Hi, I’m LEPreconGirl. I’m still rather new, and I have lollipops! If you’re lucky, you’ll get a longish, very helpful comment from WE. She’s good at commenting.

    Um, I must go. Grub’s whining, and Holly, Trouble, and Lili found my duct tape.

    Lolliop for more stories by you?

    Bye!

  3. You’re right, it is Artemis. But I’m not sure who he is talking to. I was writing it while thinking it being Holly and sometimes he is talking to himself. However, it depends on the reader’s imagination.
    Thanks for reading!

  4. Hello all. I am Orion Fowl, resident maniac of FG. And I rate this story..a 5! Or maybe a 3? who knows in the demented spiral that is my brain??

  5. I see you have met the annoying alter ego. Welcome. Who i am is obvious, and im very genourous with my 5 stars, but you have earned it!Well done 😀

  6. SO DEPRESSING. SO, SO DEPRESSING.

    But very, very good.

    I don’t really have much to say. Your sentence variation was great, as was your choice of language. I hope to see more from you as well, but as of now… excellent.

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