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Summary: Mud Men have discovered Haven! What will happen? Lame summary, I know, just read the fic. CHAPTER 10 ADDED!

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

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Yes, it’s here!

Holly, Artemis, and Zane made it into Haven but something was clearly wrong. No one was on the streets, no lights were on in the houses, the artificial sunlight was out even though it was noon.

“I should have never left,” Zane muttered while Holly said,”Why did I go to that wrestling match?”

“It’s neither of your faults,” Artemis stated, looking at them in the eye.

They continued their walk to Argon’s clinic. When they got there, there was no one in there.

The group walked through the clinic, searching for signs of life. A door flew open and out walked a big mud man. He was more than a man mountain, more like a madness solar system! Holly’s eyes grew the size saucers. Reyna rolled of Zane and Artemis’s arms. She landed at their feet.

“Fellow humans, join us. We will destroy these things,” he indicated at Holly,”once and for all.”

Reyna was conscious. She walked up tot the mud man.

“Why don’t you-” Reyna punched him when she said ‘you’,” stay out of your own business?” Reyna kicked him in the shin.

He jumped back, causing another solar system man to appear.

“It’s so on now,” he snarled, moving forward to hit Holly. Holly was able to dodge, courtesy of LEP training.

Reyna took a fighting stance. She was about to hammer him when a green foggy mist appeared. It was caught on fire when an elf with long blond hair, green clothes, and was holding a bow stepped out.

“Where am I?” he asked. Then he jumped. “The Ring!” he shouted. Holly sighed. More Lord of the Rings characters.

Reyna was staring at him, her mouth open. She didn’t even bother to correct him. Then the mud men grabbed Holly, and put her in a bag. The bag moved obit then a man put a tazer in there and the bag fell limp.

Reyna continued to stare at him. “You’re, you’re…” she stammered.

“I am Legolas Greenleaf (A/N, I have no clue if that’s correct) , prince of Mirkwood,” he said and Reyana nearly fainted.

Legolas grabbed his bow and shot one of the men.

“He isn’t dead, is he?” Artemis asked, tentivly. Legolas shook his head.

Then, a noise like a stamped happened. Everyone went back to back. Artemis moved and slapped Reyna.

“We really need a new staregy,” Reyna said. Legolas nodded in adhere ment and Reyna blushed.

“Reyna, Legolas, Zane, they vanished,” Artemis said. Everyone spun around.


Artemis nodded. “They vanished.” With that he wandered off. Reyna ran after him.

“Wait, Artemis!” she shouted, but he ignored her. “Don’t you want to hear what I know,” Reyna tried bribing him. He turned around.

“Tell me what you know,” he commanded as everyone sat down, waiting for the information.

Just felt like adding a LotR character so I added Legolas. 

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

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21 responses to “UoM.” Join in!

  1. Nice try for a first fic. It’s really good, but still too early to say anything I guess. Please update soon,I’ll keep an eye open!

  2. Thanks Shaadia. I’ll update soon.
    Just added chapter 3!

  3. nice!!

    Inturupts comment: thanks Shaadia but to be honest, I think that I could have done better. Thanks again, reviews make me happy, me being happy means updates faster, to you being happy. It’s a cycle. ~Thunder

  4. The lord of the rings !!!!

    My precious

    Nice job Thunder

    Thanks, you got the series

  5. another case of atlantis complex! what’s his alter ego honna be like? please i must know!

  6. When is Ch 5 coming out, I want to see Zane’s alter ego

  7. Actually, it pops up under the Recently Updated bar whenever you update. Otherwise, no one would know.
    Ok, thanks!

  8. hi thunder!!
    i was wondering if you could add me to your truth or dare. the comment section doesn’t load on my kindle.
    oh and i have a solution. i do it all the time.
    in your summary, write
    in capital letters and there’s no missing it. or better yet, add it with capital letters in your title.

  9. THANK YOU! And I’ll add you in the next update.

  10. heehee…Gollum. now i like him!!
    Gollum is awesome, isn’t he? At least in my opinion.

  11. nice simon haha
    I think we both know why I put that name. Thanks! ~Thunder

  12. Gollum is so awesome…and funny! I always laughed my head off when he yelled “My precious!” in the LotR movies and books. It’s just so hilarious. I can’t wait to see more! Update soon!
    PS-Did you notice, I’m so weird my fav HP character is Dobby. And in LotR it’s Sméagol. And in AF it’s Mulch. heehee.

  13. I love Sméagol or Gollum. I don’t care which name you use. I’ll update when I get back, I’m going to an amusement park! Should I put this also under ‘funny’ then? I also love Dobby but in AF my favorite is Opal or Foaly. Thanks!

  14. Nice job Simon and gollum


    He’s pretty awesome.

  16. shaadiaTheWeird November 21st, 2013 at 11:16 am 16

    cool, i like the twist!

  17. Cool, an update! Hey, what’s with all the codes?? heehee.
    You’ll see. *smiles evilly and laughs like a maniac* No really. You will. Probably soon.

  18. Wats with the codes ??? And that was a total twist to the story

    They are important. Very important.

  19. I think that Renya should be spending her time trying to heal and not playing dramatic music. BTW awesome story try to make Foaly explode the worsfer while drinking coffe I love to see him mad at the world. It’s so funny :).

    I just thought it was funny. Thanks for the idea.

  20. Oh come on, please make a bad guy die. Pretty please?
    And the story’s progressing great. Just quit the cliffhanger thing. It makes things so much harder to predict. Well, that’s a good thing but…
    Oh slap me. I’m insane. Heehee.

    Maybe I will, maybe I won’t. Thanks! I’m glad it’s not easy to predict. I’m not slapping you! Cliffhangers on some chapters then if it is really annoying.

  21. Lili is a total bimbo. I can see why Holly hates her.

    Speaking of which, what happened to Holly?!
    Just wondering. Anyway, another well written chappie. Good work!

    Holly is coming next chapter. I didn’t want to put to much stuff in. Thanks!

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