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Summary: Mud Men have discovered Haven! What will happen? Lame summary, I know, just read the fic. CHAPTER 10 ADDED!

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

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Ok, this is might be a little random but I hope you enjoy!

“You tell us this now?” Holly shouted.”Couldn’t you tell us when we were figuring out who the girl is?”

“The damage is done,” Reyna said. “Now, what exactly are we facing?”

“You mean the giant people that are starting to surround us?” Juliet asked, abandoning her match.

“Yes,” Butler replied. Why does crazy things always happen when we are at a wrestling match, Butler thought.

Everyone glance around them.

“There is at least 3 people coming from this side,” Artemis reported.

“Same,” commented Reyna.

“Yup,” Juliet agreed.

“I don’t see anyone on this side,” wondered Holly.

“That’s because we are already here,” a deep voice growled.

Everyone jumped.

“Butler?” Artemis asked. No reply came. “Just great,” he muttered.

“So now you look for your bodyguard. Unfortunately for some of you, we don’t need all of you,” the man said.

Juliet and Holly adopted fighting stances. The men looked amused. Artemis and Reyna looked around.

“Great, we will barely survive 1, much less 9,” Reyna muttered.

The men strolled in causally until there was no room between Reyna, Artemis, Holly, and Juliet.

“Take this!” Juliet shouted, aiming for the biggest one, hitting Artemis in the process.

“Stop fighting, we are going to end up beating each other, not them!” Artemis realized.

Naturally, Holly ignored Artemis and tried punching the man closest to her and hit Reyna.

“Stop!” Reyna screamed. “Don’t you see he is right?” No one listened to her.

The men chuckled, amused.

“Juliet, instead of punching or kicking, why don’t you use your special move?” Artemis suggested.

No reply came. “Guess what? We only need one more person! You know who the lucky person is?” the man asked.

“Juliet?” Reyna asked, searching for her.

“That’s right!” The man said as he hit a button. A truck drove in and the man opened the doors. Butler and Juliet were bound to chairs with explosives on them. They were trying to mouth run.

Reyna and Holly turned around to sprint. Artemis stood there. The men took out giant guns. They shot Artemis.

“Chill ax, Holly. They have been modified to shoot only darts,” Reyna said.

Holly charged, weaved through random people, and jumped to get to the Butlers. The men constituently fired, and somehow none of them hit their target.

This is another trap, Reyna realized. “Holly!” She shouted but her voice was lost int e chaos.

Holly got to the car and was about to untie Butler. The men chuckled. She reached for her knife, trying to cut Butler loose. As soon as she hit the rope, something exploded in her face. One of the men shot her, leaving Reyna staring in horror. Reyna walked to Artemis to see if he had a phone. The man strolled to her. He punched her in the gut, leaving her gasping for breath. Then he brought out a knife.

“Congratulations, not many get to go this way,” the man said.

Reyna spun around, refusing for this to be the end. Reyna hit his hand so his knife would go flying.

“Not happening, sweetie,” the man said. He brought out the dart gun and fired. The dart hit its target. Reyna stumbled backwards as she became unconscious.

A young lady was watching from a distance. Everything was going according to the plan.

So here it is. Chapter 4 might not come for a couple of days, so don’t be so upset. Sorry about that. Please review!:)

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

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21 responses to “UoM.” Join in!

  1. Nice try for a first fic. It’s really good, but still too early to say anything I guess. Please update soon,I’ll keep an eye open!

  2. Thanks Shaadia. I’ll update soon.
    Just added chapter 3!

  3. nice!!

    Inturupts comment: thanks Shaadia but to be honest, I think that I could have done better. Thanks again, reviews make me happy, me being happy means updates faster, to you being happy. It’s a cycle. ~Thunder

  4. The lord of the rings !!!!

    My precious

    Nice job Thunder

    Thanks, you got the series

  5. another case of atlantis complex! what’s his alter ego honna be like? please i must know!

  6. When is Ch 5 coming out, I want to see Zane’s alter ego

  7. Actually, it pops up under the Recently Updated bar whenever you update. Otherwise, no one would know.
    Ok, thanks!

  8. hi thunder!!
    i was wondering if you could add me to your truth or dare. the comment section doesn’t load on my kindle.
    oh and i have a solution. i do it all the time.
    in your summary, write
    in capital letters and there’s no missing it. or better yet, add it with capital letters in your title.

  9. THANK YOU! And I’ll add you in the next update.

  10. heehee…Gollum. now i like him!!
    Gollum is awesome, isn’t he? At least in my opinion.

  11. nice simon haha
    I think we both know why I put that name. Thanks! ~Thunder

  12. Gollum is so awesome…and funny! I always laughed my head off when he yelled “My precious!” in the LotR movies and books. It’s just so hilarious. I can’t wait to see more! Update soon!
    PS-Did you notice, I’m so weird my fav HP character is Dobby. And in LotR it’s Sméagol. And in AF it’s Mulch. heehee.

  13. I love Sméagol or Gollum. I don’t care which name you use. I’ll update when I get back, I’m going to an amusement park! Should I put this also under ‘funny’ then? I also love Dobby but in AF my favorite is Opal or Foaly. Thanks!

  14. Nice job Simon and gollum


    He’s pretty awesome.

  16. shaadiaTheWeird November 21st, 2013 at 11:16 am 16

    cool, i like the twist!

  17. Cool, an update! Hey, what’s with all the codes?? heehee.
    You’ll see. *smiles evilly and laughs like a maniac* No really. You will. Probably soon.

  18. Wats with the codes ??? And that was a total twist to the story

    They are important. Very important.

  19. I think that Renya should be spending her time trying to heal and not playing dramatic music. BTW awesome story try to make Foaly explode the worsfer while drinking coffe I love to see him mad at the world. It’s so funny :).

    I just thought it was funny. Thanks for the idea.

  20. Oh come on, please make a bad guy die. Pretty please?
    And the story’s progressing great. Just quit the cliffhanger thing. It makes things so much harder to predict. Well, that’s a good thing but…
    Oh slap me. I’m insane. Heehee.

    Maybe I will, maybe I won’t. Thanks! I’m glad it’s not easy to predict. I’m not slapping you! Cliffhangers on some chapters then if it is really annoying.

  21. Lili is a total bimbo. I can see why Holly hates her.

    Speaking of which, what happened to Holly?!
    Just wondering. Anyway, another well written chappie. Good work!

    Holly is coming next chapter. I didn’t want to put to much stuff in. Thanks!

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