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The Fowl Seige

Summary: Chapter 2

Chapters: 1 2

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Chapter 2

Chapters: 1 2

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  1. WOW I really Liked that! 🙂 I could’nt find any mistakes, even though my 21 year old sister was poking my in the head. I laughed at this part:“So, this is our army?” I said standing up, “Wow, this is just pathetic a bunch of kids and an adult.”

    *Is so happy get’s pink gun that shoots TACOS!*

    Don’t shoot me!*hides under table* If you do then… I’ll… I don’t know!

  2. Great job. It’s lacking in suspense, and it’s kind of dull but the concept and plot idea are fresh enough for me to want to continue to read the updates. I look forward to an update.

  3. That was Awesome! thank you for putting me in it! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

    M. Fowl says…

    Your welcome Torry!*hugs* Just be a bit more careful I have a few tricks up my sleeve for you! *grins evilly*

  4. FowlsGirl123 July 6th, 2011 at 2:53 am 4

    cool. I didn’t really see any mistakes, but it was kind of boring. It’s hard to understand. I feel like you have the idea in your head, and write assuming that people know everything in your head. Which we don’t.
    So, just a pointer, please be more descriptive. And sorry if this sounds like flame, its not supposed to be. I just want to make your stories easier for people to read.

    M. Fowl says…

    Dude I am trying my best I had a friend over last night I have a lot of things on my mind and I haven’t updated this is like… A few weeks so just lay off a bit please.

  5. Hermione Fowl July 7th, 2011 at 6:16 am 5

    That was really good, so far. Needs more description though. E.G-Said can be changed to agreed, encouraged, cheered, shouted etc.
    Also, the bit at the start was kinda confusing. Who was he talking to??
    I think that’s it. So. . .

  6. That was GREAT! I loved it! 5 lollipops! Can I be in it? I look foward to updates!


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