The Box, the Wolf, and the Fowl.

Summary: The things people will do for food-- shame they didn't know who he was. Please read!

Chapters: 1 2 3

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Temptation. I taste it in my mouth, bittersweet and beckoning.

He’s rich, judgeing entirely on how he walks. His head towers above the mal-fed crowd, and as I pull closer, I see that he’s wearing a suit. Definately rich. He’s almost ceartainly not carrying any cash, but still.

I tag along anyways.

D’arvit. He’s heading back to the airport. I have failed. Unless… no. Cannibalisim is not an option.


Later, on the plane. This is a really nice crate. I could snach it and- again, no. They want dinner, not housing.

And yet I feel that the rich kid has more to offer. I can’t follow him around for weeks, so.

Kidnap? Well, I’m certainly not against it.

I’m brilliant. Insert evil laugh here.


Later, in some street after an hour or two. Off the plane. Insert colorfull swear word here.

Heh. This is not working out. A huge man greeted Mr.Fancy-Pants Kid as he stepped off the plane, and hasn’t left. Having lived on the streets my whole life, I’m not that bright, but I can tell he’s not leaving anytime soon.

So what do I do?

This will take some explaining.

You see, I’m not your average teenage she-stalker/hobo. I’m a werewolf teenage she-stalker/hobo.

So I transform and pounce, ‘cuz I’m one of those cool modern ones that can transform whenever they want, and don’t look like Hollywood major screw-ups.

That was stupid. Big Guy has guns. I would fight back; I’d love to bite him.  There’s that stupid tepmtation again. But that would curse him, and he’d probably rampage the town. See, I’m nice! I knock an interfering teen girl out of the way. Shame; she knew what she was doing.

I don’t know how it happens. Some how I knock Fancy Pants out. It was just a swift knock on the head. But here’s the thing: I’m not shot yet. I don’t look, just run. I have to get out of here. I’m lost, yes, but wolves have good homing instincts.

Chapters: 1 2 3

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23 responses to “The Box, the Wolf, and the Fowl..” Join in!

  1. OMG! IT IS QUIET! Which is exactly why I was working on a songfic. Quiet site=psychotic rant=songfic. Yup. Even though I should update my stories…
    Off topic now.

    Lotsa mistakes.
    Cannibalism is sketchy, but I’m not sure if even I spelled it right…

    Anyway. Interesting style of writing you’ve taken up, Fal. It’s nice. I like it.

    “You see, I’m not your average teenage she-stalker/hobo. I’m a werewolf teenage she-stalker/hobo.”




  2. I like this, though its not my style. I like the attitude of your writing [see excerpt above]. The site is to quiet, its driving me nuts. excuse me a moment:


    OK, I’m all better 🙂
    I’d like more details, like where we are, and what we are doing.
    Update, or fear my ninjas.

  3. Different writing style, sadly I don’t really enjoy reading 1st person in this kind of manner. Now if you changed it to a different POV (Point-Of-View) than it would added more interest.

    When you turn from story telling to directly addressing the reader you could be a little more discrepant about it.

    This has an interesting character and hope you will add more to this story.

    – Mr. B

  4. Wow- better reveiws than I thought. This is my experiment on a new style. It works well when I have a bad mood >:D

  5. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. Hah, teenage were wolf girls, I currently know 2.

  7. UPDATE!!!!!!!! Insert colorful words here.

  8. Hmmmmm. I’m not sure I like the other magical creature crossovers. Especially with the other magical creatures as the main charachters.

  9. Hey, does anyone have a better title?

  10. Um… Okay… All my stories are zombies anyways…

  11. Pretty good looking. Imma likin this style! Uh, could ya tell us she- were-wolf hobo/stalker’s name? Please?!

  12. LOL i havent thought of one yet.

  13. FantasyDevourer July 24th, 2011 at 2:59 am 13

    I found mistakes. Mostly typos, though. I kinda liked the style, but only because I like the short sentences kind of writing.

    I agree with Short: What’s her name????

    This is interesting, but ok.


  14. Yay ^^

    An honest person

  15. This is really interesting and good. I can’t wait for the next update!!

  16. Interesting. A bit confusing, but still. It kinda makes me think of Max Ride, I’m not sure why. Maybe cuz they remind me of Erasers. I like it. Um…5/s I guess.

  17. Interesting… I do wish for an update. Otherwise, there isn’t much to comment upon… let alone rate. 😉

  18. Update! I like it till now 😀

  19. ArtfullyInsane September 2nd, 2011 at 1:28 am 19

    I really like this, and the cliffy was good. Please update!

  20. Are you going to update any more? I think you should this is really good. I didn’t notice any mistakes and whats the she wolfs name? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  21. Of course I’m going to updaate more. We haven’t gotten to my marvelous ending yet >:D

  22. Absent_Minded_Professor January 29th, 2012 at 11:35 pm 22

    That’s IT?! WHAT HAPPENS AFTER?! I like the writing style, though. And werewolves. I do love my werewolves.

  23. He DIED?! *cry cry* If there’s no updates, I will keel you!

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