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Fowlie’s Complex

Summary: What if Fowlie has the Atlantis Complex? She's not sure how she got it, but she knows it's time to get rid of it. And she has no idea how.

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Chapter Four: Awakening

Domvoia’s P.O.V.

My first sensation was a gentle touch to my fingers.

Then, the perfume of crushed lilac and vanilla.

That was when I finally knew Mira was there.

I understood that something bad had happened. I was injured. I kept my eyes closed, afraid of what I’d find if I opened them. Would the scent be a hallucination? Would the gentle caresses all be just a dream? Just like the silvery touch of a ghost spirit.

I know something had happened, but I’m not sure what.

“Open your eyes, sweetie,” she whispered gently into my ear, “I’m here to catch you….I promise.”

I cracked an eye open, to behold a white room. All I saw was white. I shut my eye again; afraid of what was going to happen if I opened them.

“Open your eyes, Dommy,” she whispered again.

I did so, and beheld an angelic face. Her soft dark curls framed her face, her light brown eyes wide with relief, hinged with worry. “There, there, I’m here now,” Mira said.

“Mira,” I asked, looking at her, “w-what happened?” I sat up slowly, without any pain. I looked around the room. Everything was white, the cabinets, the sheets, the furniture. The place spelled of antibiotics and chemicals. Dommy crinkled her nose.

Mira laughed, seeing Dommy’s nose, “Later. Right now, there’s someone who has been begging to see you ever since he found out you were hurt,” Mira said to Dommy, “Grub! Get in here!” She yelled at the door.

Immediately, the force of a small miniature tornado burst open the door, almost smashing it to pieces. Grub Kelp rushed to Domvoia’s side, and immediately leaned down, giving her a chaste kiss that conveyed all his worry and love and hope into the short sweet moment. He broke the kiss, saying nothing. He had bags under his eyes and looked exhausted. Dommy blushed at his attentions.

Mira snickered slightly at Grub, knowing he would ignore her jibe. Dommy threw Mira a look, whose face was no longer looking so angelic. And that was how it should be, Dom thought. Mira rose from her chair slowly. “I’ll take my leave now. Grub, if her condition changes in any way, run and get me, or I will tear your throat out,” Mira then left, whistling.

Domvoia shook her head, typical Mira. She was still confused about the silvery presence in her mind. She felt traces of foreign energies all throughout her mind. She wondered what it was, and longed to tell Grub, but instinct told her to keep that information to herself. She instead settled for asking Grub how he and Trouble were doing.  She wondered how she had gotten here. Grub was nice company, but she needed answers. Grub glanced at the monitors, concerned.

“What?” Dom asked, following his gaze. He just shrugged.

“You know what Captain Kelp said. I have to look out for you, though that’s not the only reason I’m doing it,” Grub said as Mira opened the door quietly. She glanced at the monitors herself, and then closed the door.

“Grub…I think I’m fine now. I want to go home. I need to ask questions, I have no idea where Fowlie is, and I can’t remember anything,” Domvoia said worriedly.

Grub nodded and left the chair, going outside to ask Mira about Domvoia’s request.

Mira stood outside, munching on a random banana. “Is she alright?” She asked, shoving the banana to one side of her mouth repeatedly. Bananas were one of Mira’s favorite things to eat, that is, apart from peppermint cake.

“She’s fine!” Grub said, before he could get yelled at, “She wants to go home now.”

“WHAT? NO,” Mira yelled, waving her banana in the air manically, “Are you crazy? Why does she want to go home so bad?” Mira asked, rolling her eyes at the suggestion, and took another bite of her delicious banana. She sighed. “No, no, no, no, NO! If you want to argue, I’ll be happy to get Letta,” she threatened.

Grub gulped, Letta was Mira’s Rider sword, and she was VERY lethal with it. “It’s fine! I don’t mind! I wasn’t even arguing!” He dashed back to Domvoia and cried, “Your sister is threatening me!”

“Mira…” Dom muttered. Mira popped her head back in.

“Yes?” Mira said, grinning.

“Please don’t threaten Grub.” Dom said shaking her head.

Mira rolled her eyes. “All right,” and she shut the door.

“Mir mir,” Dom yelled, “I need to talk to you!”

Mira popped her head in again. “Yeah?” She was grinning brightly.

“What happened back there?” Dom asked looking at her seriously.

The grin faded, replaced by a concerned frown. “Forge…. Forge went insane. Trouble had to sedate her. You were in a coma for three days and in surgery for seventeen hours. But, you wouldn’t wake up. Rhunön had to step in and heal you. She is Fowlie’s new personality, not as bad as the others, but sadder, quieter… darker.” Mira explained hesitantly. She sighed one last time, again. “Should I try and get Fowlie? Her body at least….”

“Oh…” Dom said a little bit later. It was hard for her to process all this information, “is that what the silvery wisps are?”

“Silvery wisps!” Mira cried, alarm spreading over her face “ARGON! I need to speak with you!”

Dom went slightly pale at Mira’s reaction. Mira raced out, her footsteps receding quickly down the hall. “Argon,” She yelled again, and he poked his head out of a room. She slid to a stop.

“Hmm?” said the doctor lazily.

“It’s Dommy! Come with me, now!” She yelled, putting a hand on Letta. She immediately pulled out her earpiece, plugged it into her ear and began barking instructions to Foaly, “Get me Artemis Fowl here, and bring FowlStar to the hospital. Make sure she’s surrounded by guards”

Grub was thoroughly confused. What was wrong with Mira? He sighed. “Dom?” He asked.

“Yeah?” Domvoia answered looking at him, concerned.

“What’s with Mira?” He asked, tugging his feet up on the stool.

“I have no idea, really.” Dommy answered. “And I doubt I ever will,” she said resignedly. Dom put her knees to her chin and closed her eyes.

Mira burst into the room. “Grub, no offense, get the hell out.” She yelled. She wouldn’t let some lovesick puppy get in the way of caring for her little sister.
Domvoia opened her eyes and looked at Mira with a raised eyebrow. “Seriously Mira?” she said, annoyed.
“Shut up,” she yelled, “Grub, get out now!”

“Mira, please calm down,” Domvoia said trying to remain calm.

Mira rolled her eyes. “The silvery wisps? Not sure what it is, but it’s bad. It’s going to get quite crowded in here soon, so Grub? If you please, get your butt out of here.” She said, pointing to the door.

Dom bit her lip and looked at Grub with a look on her face pleading for him to do whatever she said. He nodded, and got up, looking at Mira’s hand, which as usual, was straying to the hilt of Letta.


Domvoia sighed as she mentally prepared herself to be poked and prodded once more.


*Thank you to Domvoia and Mira Kelp for co-writing this chapter.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

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  1. Woot woot! GO AC! XD update! FCD! It was a little short, though… oh well! *hands cheese string*

    Fowlie Says:

    Forge thanks you for the cheese. 😀 And, I don’t usually prolong my prologues. I promise the next update will be longer.

  2. Okay, you kind of confused me. It says Fowlie’s complex, so do you have the complex or not? it isn’t exactly mentioned, and it’s just kind of confusing. Otherwise it was good! UPDATE!

    Fowlie Says:

    Thanks for reading it. 😀 I thought it was clear that I have the Complex, because I am yelling at my alternate personalities: Veronica (the hopeless romantic lip gloss addicted flirt) and Forge (the crazy string cheese addicted ax-brandishing quick-to-anger girl). I hope you understand now. 😀 Thanks for the review. 😀

  3. Bobo Paradizo June 24th, 2011 at 4:46 am 3

    Cheese? Wow! I luv it…
    I’m a little confused over whos who, but its pretty good, anyways

    Fowlie Says:

    Hey Bobo. 😀 Thanks for the comment. Forge and Veronica are my personalities, but I will treat them as different people with different POV’s. It’s definitely less confusing this way. Okay? 😀 Really, we’re all the same person though. Right now, it’s in my POV, because I am the one thinking about the others. I know it’s confusing, but it’s going to be a fun story. Keep reading! 😀

  4. I apologize, but my chapter divider option thingy is currently not working. If one of the mods or someone could please help me out, it would be appreciated. 😀 The story will be one big post until this is fixed.

    /EDIT:/ The chapter divider thingy is now working! Enjoy the story! 😀

  5. I’m… I’m… wow…*is Domvia people!* I’m hurt and actually I am eleven… But still wow….

    Fowlie Says:

    Dommeh! Thank you for reviewing! 😀 I take it you like the story?

  6. Niiiiiiice! I nearly cried when I heard about Dommy. Awesome! An hour of sparring, sounds like me XD

    Fowlie Says:

    Yay! 😀 You guys will love the next chappie. 😀

  7. Ah, very good. Falcon approves ^^
    It wasn’t confusing to me at all…


    Fowlie Says:

    Glad you liked it. I can’t believe you want an update already! Fine. *mutters* Always slaving away on a hot keyboard for you bottomless pits of fan fiction reading zombies all day…I’ll try to get one more chapter in, maybe….

  8. That’s very good! I like the way you describe things. It really paints the images well in my mind. *sigh* Poor Dom…. 🙁

    On another note, you’re a fan of Hetalia?? Woot!! I love that show!! 🙂

    Update soon, please? 🙂

    Fowlie Says:

    Aww Ann! Thanks! 😀 Yes, I love Prussia! I thought I was overdoing it with the descriptions, thanks! 😀

  9. *SPOILER ALERT! Yes Fowlie it is awesome but not the part where I’m almost dead… Where’s Grub when I need him! *don’t ask…*

    Fowlie Says:

    Dommy, you said you wouldn’t tell! Sigh….oh well. Anyway *evil grin* your wittle Grubbles is on his way! A wittle chapter fwuffyness just for yew! 😀 Hahahahaah! Muhahahaha!

  10. I take it everyone likes the story so far? XD Chapter four coming up soon. 😀

  11. Okay thats awesome and not… He he update! and Really? Wittle Grubbles?

    Fowlie Says:

    I’m a sucker for reviews. Seriously. And yes, really. Grubbie might might make an appearance in the next chapter.

  12. You guys are so lucky I’m in a good mood. Two chapters in one day? Maybe another one coming. 😀

  13. Oy! Me and Dom wrote a LOT of that! *grrr*

    Fowlie Says:

    *sniffles* You wrote a lot of chapter five, I did chapter four, six and seven. We’ve all written a lot…. *sniffles* I gave you guys credit! Dom helped a little on Four…yeah…

  14. That’s so true Mira that’s so true…

    Fowlie Says:


  15. This is AWESOME! poor Fowlie, please update soon!!!

    Fowlie Says:

    Okay. Chapter six is just for Torry! 😛 Coming right up!

  16. Hermione Fowl July 6th, 2011 at 2:35 am 16

    That was pretty confusing, but maybe I’m just stupid. I liked the prologue, apart from the first line:’All the girl wanted was some string cheese! All she wanted was string cheese!’ No matter what primary school teachers tell you, repetition is NOT COOL.

    Fowlie Says:

    *fixes first line/update (soon as I wake up tomorrow XD)* Man, it’s been such a long time since I’ve read that. I missed your threatening and commanding yet loving presence at FF. *huggles*

  17. Oh god Mary Sue alert.

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