It doesn't matter what IQ you've got-- someday, somewhere, you will put your pants on the wrong way.
Hahahaha.
Do you get tired of hearing that Artemis is smokin' hot? I'm just going to use an acronym from now on. AISH. Especially in the second panel-that-isn't when he's asking how he looks.
Nice to see Foaly get a mention. And I think I spotted the error-- Cheyenne's hair is colored in?
I think the part you messed up on was when Holly called Artemis 'Arty'. I noticed it right away, she wouldn't call him that. Holly's hair lookes different, i guess 'cause she brushed it right? Artemis looks a little acward in the last panal (what's with the 99 above his head?)
is Peregrine refering to Cheyenne when he said "ah the one with the vocabulary has arrived" or was he talking about Holly. and what does Holly mean when she thought "I can just imagine Foaly braying, "I like this one".
sorry, i'm being very critic-y. it was just a little hard for me to understand (in the second-actually a panal-panal) it's problably 'cause i'm tired.
and to answer Atremis's question, AWESOME!! very nice iesnoth!
the 99 thing is me trying to make it look like he's nodding. i failed. and yes, cheyenne's hair color went bogus, and Peregrine's talking about holly, since she said "Oxford-y" which is not really a word. XD And i thought 'Arty' flowed better than 'Artemis'. Artistic license there.
and i'm good with critics, its OK.
sorry, i was really tired when i wrote that. i thought about it afterwards, and it was perfectly clear. (except the '99'. maybe if you had put it off to the side, it might have been more understandable) now i realize that Holly was saying that Foaly would like Peregrine. obviously, since they're like carbon copies of eachother. they'd get along great!!
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Hahahaha.
Do you get tired of hearing that Artemis is smokin' hot? I'm just going to use an acronym from now on. AISH. Especially in the second panel-that-isn't when he's asking how he looks.
Nice to see Foaly get a mention. And I think I spotted the error-- Cheyenne's hair is colored in?
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Yay for outfits! And I love Peregrine. He's amazing. Heh, "It fit ME better." XD
is Peregrine refering to Cheyenne when he said "ah the one with the vocabulary has arrived" or was he talking about Holly. and what does Holly mean when she thought "I can just imagine Foaly braying, "I like this one".
sorry, i'm being very critic-y.
and to answer Atremis's question, AWESOME!!
and i'm good with critics, its OK.
Did you forget Foaly is half horse?