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Holly Short

give me some tips I want to draw a better one

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butler_1993   [Jan 14, 2008 at 03:39 PM]
*first comment dance* hmmm. weli, the face is a little large, but other than that it looks awesome Wink
Griffin   [Jan 14, 2008 at 07:29 PM]
The ear looks kinda funny. Try drawing a regular ear, and then adding a slight point at the tip. But that's just my opinion, and how I personally draw pointy earses. Looks great!!
obsessed_fowl_fanatic   [Mar 30, 2008 at 01:28 PM]
she kinda looks like brittney demaranvil Smile
but other wise... coolio! ^___^
Arty's_only_girl_4eve   [Jul 20, 2008 at 08:26 AM]
no offense, but it looks like the gun is IN her Laughing
But other than that, it's good.4/5
Butlers_Secret_Love   [Jul 21, 2008 at 12:53 PM]
I thought that I would critique this seeing how no one else has.

The birck wall is done very well.

I assume that she is wearing gloves, as her hands are a completely different colour than her face.

There is no trigger being protected by the trigger guard.

I like the settings on the gun, but it does look like its in her ear.

Her eyes are done wonderfully, as are her eyebrows, however her mouth is a little lumpy. Try looking at a lipstick advertisment. They do fun closeups on lips.

I also doubt that her first name would be on her badge, more likely 'Short' or her full name.

For shading, instead of doing jagged back and forth, try getting a bunch of graphite on a scrap peice of paper, rubbing you finger in it, and shading with your finger. I'm sure you can work a technique out for yourself.

Keep Drawing!
Captin.Holly.Short   [Dec 12, 2008 at 09:29 PM]
lips to big

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