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Artemis Fowl: The Manga

My version of the graphic novel. The text is taken directly from the book and is the copyright of Eoin Colfer. The artwork is mine, however =]

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MichaelM   [Aug 11, 2007 at 12:03 PM]
Luvin it so far! Comics are always great to read, and you're a really good artist. Very Happy
katya345b   [Aug 11, 2007 at 01:17 PM]
yay more arty comics!!!! Smile (love arty comics btw) and urs are very good (and there 2 of them!!! Very Happy Very Happy )
VinyĆ ya rocks   [Aug 11, 2007 at 01:36 PM]
*does first comment dance coz nobody did* lovely! He looks very sweet! Surprised
Griffin   [Aug 11, 2007 at 03:34 PM]
Very good but his head looks kinda lopsided. I think you gave him too much hair. But it looks great anyways! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
Gerry   [Aug 11, 2007 at 10:49 PM]
His head is lop-sided and his clothes are bulky.
Soulcatcher   [Aug 12, 2007 at 02:57 AM]
Too much hair ... yes, LOL. I know the clothes aren't brilliant; I tried to pad it out a little since blazers make you look bigger but went a tad overboard Razz I'll go fix it at some point ...
Beetle juice   [Aug 13, 2007 at 06:02 AM]
Great! I always go overboard on the hair when I try to draw manga (I'm learning to at the moment!)-The face is the hardest part to draw I find and you did that brilliantly!
flamingbones   [Aug 16, 2007 at 11:35 PM]
Love it as always! cant wait to see the next one!!! Wink Very Happy
Mulch diggums the 3rd   [Aug 18, 2007 at 04:26 PM]
s m i l e
Nicole_artist   [Aug 19, 2007 at 02:40 AM]
It's great but that's not how I picture Artemis. If he's in Manga he should have long almond shaped eyes, because big eyes usually mean that they are innocent, and/or naive. The chin is a BIT too pointy, maybe if he was an adult it would suit, but teen normally still have a bit or roundness in their face. I agree that the body is much too big, it should only be 1 1/2 heads wide at the most. The hair looks a bit funny too, perhaps you could make it slightly neater and add more highlights. I don't think Artemis should be smiling either.
Just trying to provide constructive criticism!
Mulch diggums the 3rd   [Aug 19, 2007 at 10:05 AM]
constructive? whats constructive about that?
kidding. i agree. with NA. because im to lazy to write it. Wink
Soulcatcher   [Oct 22, 2007 at 04:58 AM]
Nicole, thanks! I appreciate the constructive crit! I think I'm gonna redo this page before I fix up the next few Smile I was looking back over and I realised Arty looks far far far too nice HA!
Fowl-Freak   [Oct 23, 2007 at 06:37 PM]
I really like it !!! But Nicole is right, i think his whole looks kinda weird . And he should have a serious and intellegent expression, with a secret hint of smug thrown in! Can't wait to see the new page!!!
artyfowl4evr   [Oct 28, 2007 at 01:02 AM]
somethings not rite...
Soulcatcher   [Nov 15, 2007 at 10:10 AM]
There is a revised version of Arty in the Artemis Fowl section. It's just a sketch, but I like it much more than this one ... I'm going to redo this, I think =]
Captain Holly Short, LEP   [Jan 26, 2009 at 01:11 PM]
section 9 ?
paopufruit   [Jul 04, 2010 at 04:47 PM]
His face-to-body postioning is a bit off, but overall, great pic! Keep em comin!! (BTW- is this computer art? If so, on what program??) THX Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation

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