BONUS NIGHT! i want to get to the REAL story, so i'll out up two pages to finish off the prologue and put up the chapter 1 cover. :D that ok with everyone?
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OOOOOooooo, so suspensful!! "shut up Foaly" haha!! Once again, super cool! something about the Artemis in the second colum/bock/panal thing (whatever it is) looks a little ocword ( i so totally know that's spelled wrong, it's finetic ) i don't know, maybe it's the darker hair part, i'm not sure. it's probably just me though i'm kinda a perfectionist. Overall, A++!! HORRAYYY!!!!
He does look cute... I imagine that's what he'll look like right after he gets kissed for the first time too.
Oh yes... I also really like Holly's face in the last panel. It's very well done.
Ah! I was so excited when I saw this on the Last Uploads list! Two pages, too... big night.
I like that line... "I don't know, since the Mud-Boy hasn't let me SEE the book."
"Shut up, Foaly."
Hahaha.
Off to read the second page!
Oh yes... I also really like Holly's face in the last panel. It's very well done.