*ahem* i think i can solve the poblem of the slantedness. two things. one, is that butler actualy is rather slanted. and two the perspective is WAY off, for one thing the streets dont narow as the get farther away but rather, get wider and the table is just 'out of click' with the whole picture. very good atecion to detail and color! (i love the old lady pouring the water into the gutter)
That rocks! But, it looks a lot like the Graphic Novel. Except for the fact that Butler is slanted to look around the pole and Artemis doesn't have glasses
yet another PC have you guys ever seen a mac it said he had a power book which is a silver mac laptop OK! sorry i really hate PCs we have to use them for school other then the PC its perfect
Butler does look like he is looking around a corner (but that's fine because he brobably IS) i tried to re-create what you did here with colouring pencils. the actual drawing was alright but the pencils killed it
1-Arty was wearing a suit.
2-Arty's eyes are too close together.
Sorry.