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i found this in one of my sketchbooks i think it was of holly getting suited up for her first mission though i can’t remember why i gave her long hair

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Rin   [Oct 24, 2011 at 12:31 AM]
I'm giving a critique so if you don't like constructive critism, then don't look.
I like the suit. The simple yet original design caught my eye at first. The only thing I can say is that the shading could use more contrast but that may just be the quality of the scan. If you hope to improve your art, I suggest copying a picture first from reference and then trying it on your own when you feel confident. It will definitely help you improve quickly and give your drawings a more realist look.
Sorry about that, but i feel that comment on a drawing with only a "it's good" wouldn't help your abilities. Sorry if it's a T__T
nutty about acorns   [Oct 24, 2011 at 02:56 AM]
Thanks i will take that in to account as i am doing a coloured version in paint you’re critique will hopefully not go to waste, i'll do my best Smile
BLoemetje   [Oct 24, 2011 at 08:43 PM]
I know Holly isn't supposed to have long hair, but it looks great on her! I don't know much about shading and stuff, but I love the drawing. She has such a nice expression on her face. I think this is one of your best pics on this site.
Just one critism: I think her neck is really long, and I can't really see what's going on with the back of it.
For the rest: Awesome Very Happy
Fowlfan4ever   [Oct 25, 2011 at 02:13 AM]
OH. MY. BLEENIN. GODS. THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Laughing Laughing Laughing Cool Rolling Eyes how in the gods name do you draw this good?!?!!!?!!?!!?!!? I'm dead serius! Heck with shading, this is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! How in the gods names do you do this?! you have got talent! Cool Cool Laughing Razz Very Happy Smile Cool Surprised Embarrassed Shocked Wink Exclamation
Holls   [Nov 08, 2011 at 10:40 PM]
you've got fans. *looks at Fowlfan4ever* but it is what it is. you've always been a good fanarter, nutty, and people know it. Very Happy
nutty about acorns   [Jan 04, 2012 at 09:29 PM]
thanks for your coments guys i love a bit of feedback Very Happy
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