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Holly V.S Minnie

Hello peoples :3 This is my first enrty! hooray! if you can't read it, it says holly 'is angree' and minnie 'ish 'toasteeee'... I want you to know that I am here to be as anime as possible, so you can ecxpect more work from me! please critisize, because i stink at proper posture and pespective... ur's trulee, Artemesque_Anime

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kierisa12   [Sep 20, 2008 at 11:19 AM]
*first comment dance* that is FUNNY! i am trying to do anime to! (though i stink at it) you said you wanted to be critizised so here goes.
1: minnie's arms are a little long, some advice is that the legs should always be a little longer than the arms. (in my opinion)
2: Holly's hair looks a little to light. trying coloring it in a bit more.
3: ummmm can't think of anything else
besides the crits your pic is REALLY cool! not to mention funny! Laughing
p.s i LOVE the fire in Holly's eyes!..... kinda scary Shocked Laughing
Artemesque_Anime   [Sep 20, 2008 at 05:39 PM]
Thanks a bunch! and you remembered the first comment dance!
Captain Holly   [Sep 21, 2008 at 05:17 AM]
*2nd comment dance!*(do i get a thanx 2?) well...basicly i agree with all of the above ...Smile secpt holly legs r also 2 short Sad but it is FUNNY! Laughing Laughing Laughing btw r u a AH or AM??? Razz
Artemesque_Anime   [Sep 22, 2008 at 02:08 AM]
Definetly A/H And thanks! I'll improve on that in future Very Happy
Holly Fowl   [Sep 29, 2008 at 02:20 PM]
YAAAAAAAAAA A/H SHIPPER ALERT!! WOOT! HEHE!Okay, sorry, I'll stop. This is really funny! I like the fire in Holly's eyes, and the style. Nice job!!!
Artylover41697   [Jan 30, 2009 at 04:48 PM]
I luv it!!! I wish I could draw like tat. I draw 1/2 way anime (as I like to call it) This izza GOO! Yay! 5! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
*_Holly*_*Short_*   [Mar 24, 2009 at 04:26 PM]
*7th comment moonwalk*
i used to draw anime, but it kinda warped into anime/cartoony/realisticyish(is that a word? Confused ) i admire anyone who can do anime well, and if you can do anime well AND ur an arty/holly shipper, from me you get FIFTY BAZILLION SIX HUNDRED AND EIGHTY TWO THUMBS UP!!! YAAAAAAAAY!!! Embarrassed er...srry... now some constructive criticism!*smiles sheepishly* heh heh heh...
1)legs are too short
2)minerva MUST DIE!!! i mean... looks like she's smiling! Embarrassed it's like she sees holly looking like she's going to kill her and starts giggling. stupid minerva I MEEN...
3)what's with minerva's arms? they look like they're blowing in the wind.(are they? Neutral)
4) ummm... holly looks more skeptical than angry, she has one eyebrow raised and the corners of her mouth are slightly turned up.
5) holly's hair is too light (and unless ur modeling after the graphic novel she has a crew cut, not shoulder length hair.)
6)minerva's eyes don't match (shapewise, not colour wise. obviously.)
7) unless u drew minerva on a hill, there would be more ground behind her.
8)holly's skin is kinda orange... isn't it supposed to be brown?
i had to look hard to find these. so, it's pretty good. and not to be nosy, u don't have to answer, how old are u? i'm 11. my friend irene and i can draw, and my parents say i'm talented for my age. what's that supposed to mean? most 11 year olds can't draw? hmph. oh well. Rolling Eyes
crazychick   [Jul 04, 2009 at 09:07 AM]
artygirl   [Feb 07, 2011 at 07:16 PM]
teeheehee. die, minerva! DIE!!!!!!!!!
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Fairies   [Dec 28, 2012 at 11:12 PM]
Im srry but i dont quite understand wat theyre saying even with ur typing

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