i hate mind-reading! and then...
hehe

Arty looks hot. =]

thanks.... its blasphemy to NOT make him hot!

I could comment on the other pages, but since they're mostly text, there isn't much to comment on art-wise. I like the plot that's setting up.

Okay, Artemis looks really hot older. And even though he isn't as expressive as Holly, Artemis' faces still make me laugh. I like how is facial structure changed to show his aging-- you didn't just make him taller and change his clothes. Sorry if that sounds weird... I'm just noticing all the little things that really stick out to me personally.

I really like the horned girl, for some reason. She reminds me of the original character challenge I wrote for AF Challenge 19. I don't know what really strikes me; I guess her proportions (and yeah, the ram's horns) just strike me as really cool. I'm sounding silly again... I'd better just stop now.

actually, your comments are very refreshing. i'm glad that the way i changed his face was noticed. it's harder to do than it looks. and i'll have to check out that fanfic. the horned girl, who you'll learn more about the next page, is based off of a friend of mine.

i REALLY need to learn to draw better.......... oh well. you rock and i love the story line. please keep them coming

i plan to.

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