Artemis does look hot in this, especially in the last panel. Nice shading, by the way.

I love the diolouge (I hope that's spelled right; I'm too lazy to spell-check!) on this page. It seems really natural and like something Colfer would write. The difference in Artemis' and Holly's rants says volumes about their personalities...

The only thing that looked a little off to me was the second panel when Holly whacked Artemis.. Artemis doesn't really look that affected by it. But it's still funny. XD

he's not affected because he's sort of in shock b/c he has no idea what's going on, and he's probably used to holly hitting him by now.
thanks for the compliment. i can't say i try to write like colfer, but i do try to keep his characters true. i'm happy to know i'm doing well.

you said 'the' instead of 'this' in the third panal, but that's not very noticable. At first Arty's expession while getting punched did look a little flat to me, but now that you've explained why, it makes sense and looks great!

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