hellp, is pretty, pretty ilustrations

these are GREAT! the only critique i can say is that i don't think you make Artemis smart enough or EVIL enough in any of them

to chicksverble124: Well, Artemis isn't evil. He never was EVIL, but even less, now.

To iesnoth: Ahahaha, I love the first panel, with all the other characters without much detail at all, while Orla, Holly, and Artemis do have detail. The dialogue between Artemis and Holly always kills me: they're so funny together. Hah, I can totally imagine Holly calling Artemis a pretty boy, and Artemis complaining about carrying bags. But I must say, Orla looks different in this one than she usually does (again, the first panel).

Anyway, great job, as usual.

*Does first comment dance for HANAKO* awesome!!! i love this series!!!

thank you, every peoples! yeah, i have problems with orla a little bit. i'm still trying to get used to her.
and the big bad Arty shall return! (i just HAD to show his weaker side.)

big bad Arty will bew back?
Oh the story are going to getting more interesting.
I love Holly in the second panel.
but... why Artemis eyes in second panel is a bit strange, only white?

because he's a bit to orla's right, so he has to look over at her.

looking at other Orlas, i can't even tell why she looks so different here! it's weird.(that i can't find anything diff.) But awesome! Poor Artemis, Butler isn't there to hold all the lugage.

On another note: HAVE YOU READ THE FIRST THREE PAGES OF THE FIRST CHAPTER OF BOOK SIX?! (that's all i've read, so if any of you have read farther, don't give stuff away, PLEASE!) THEY'RE SOOOOOOO HILLARIOUS!!!!!!!!!! I ALMOST DIED LAUGHING!!!!

to: HollyluvsArty, true Artemis is'nt EVIL but he's got a mean streak. he's also extremely cynical and has an IQ of like 400,000

he has an IQ of "like" 165

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