-first comment dance- Yay, I always forget that.

AISH!! Definitely, especially in the first panel. =] And Holly in the last panel is very pretty.

thank you. i love the last panel. i made her look her age!

AISH!!!! btw holly does look pretty!!!

First Panel: AISM!! Times a million. And in his other panel, too. But especially the first.

"Miffed" is a perfect word to describe an irritated Artemis, too. It just seems more sophisticated of an adjetive than others. Sorry about any misspellings, by the way. I don't have my spellchecker up. Ah yes... Artemis can insult like no one I've ever seen. It's nice to see his snarky side get some airtime.

You can see a difference in these pages, especially in facial expressions and shading. I liked how Wildman's facial structure hints at his athletic/buff personna-- the jutting chin and longish face. If you've ever played Kingdom Hearts, his features remind me a bit of Vexen.

Side comments: I like Artemis' hair... it's kind of Clark Kent meets iesnoth. And Peregrine's (again, sorry about misspellings) expression in the second panel is just really nice. Cheeky, but not malicious. Just really awesome. Makes me wanna ruffle his hair or something.

Target Aquired

yeah, the fourteenth page and the fifteenth were drawn about a month apart.

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