costructive critiscism please, ppl. if its too small veiw it bigger but just review plz

later..
im really peeved that no one has commented

cool. I really like holly:-D who was that person that got erased suposed to be?

artemis with really long hair

The basic problem I see with this is that Holly and Trouble look too much alike, this could be remedied by making your own colour swatches and changing their hairstyles slightly. (I sound like I'm nit-picking don't I? >0< ) The only other thing I would suggest is to trace the lineart on a higher layer and then trash the original sketch, but that takes patience, especially for mouse users like you. Keep practicing and you'll get very good. BTY, how old are you?
(If you aren't sure how to make colour swatches, I can give you a link to some I've made that you can download.)

oh, THANK YOU, PHEONIX!!!your'e so nice to me! *sniff*

I'm eleven, BTW.

I need to practise more... I mean, I have not 1, nor 2, but THREE Photoshop help books! And I still suck. How sad. I'm off to either mope, eat chocolate cookies or draw. Or maybe I'll just comment on heaps of pictures first.

like your style, try making them bigger next time (I know your pain, used to draw everything miniscule)

I think they should be a bit bigger, but I understand why you made them so small. For me, it's really difficult to draw a good head shape big, but it's hard to fit the features in a tiny head.
I like Artemis' hair, and I love how you did Holly and Trouble's hair. I do think that they look way too much alike, though. Like they're twins. Anyway, great job!

You sick-O ! Can't you jst leave us in peace and go and put all your porn on your myspace page!?! Snyder687, pervert!

what?

huh whos snyder687?? i see no one!!
oh its been deleted...

i am a total a\h FREAK but i am also an arty\ME freak
P.S.arty is my fiancee so BACK OFF PPL

floating heads