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Violet Fowl

Summary: Violet Fowl was soon to discover that her brother had Atlantis Complex and that fairies were indeed real.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4

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Prologue. 

Six year old Violet Fowl was sitting on the floor, a rather un-Fowl like stance, flipping through the photo album.

 

The girl was home from St. Chillian’s School for Young Ladies, and was enjoying her vacation very much. A boarding school was not that much fun, and it was a rather gut-wrenching change for a young child.

 

She continued flipping through, finding the picture of herself after her birth. She smiled happily at the picture…

 

 

Violet Fowl was born on a windy May night. The birth was a little painful, but nothing to horrible, Angeline thought as she held her new daughter.

 

She held the small girl’s hand, and smiled. Someone to dress up, and play with her hair. A girl to take shopping. 

Angeline has asked her husband, for Violet to have a bodyguard like Artemis. He had simply laughed, as much as Artemis.Sr. could ,that is ,and said “Violet won’t need one ,after all she is a girl, Artemis is the one who will be following in my footsteps, right Artemis?” he ruffled the three year olds hair, who looked rather confused.

 

Angeline turned to her son, “This is your sister,” she said.

 

Artemis walked forwardly and looked at his sister, “She’s red,” he observed.

 

Angeline laughed, “Oh I know darling, but that’ll wear off”

 

“Oh, well good,” he paused “What’s her name Mum?”

 

Angeline smiled, not knowing that by the time he was five, he would be calling her Mother instead.

“Violet dear, Violet Fowl”

 

“That’s lovely,” said Artemis solemnly. “She’ll be a wonderful sister, I’m sure”

 

Angeline smiled, though it worried her that her three year old was speaking so…formally, she supposed was the word.

 

She brushed it off, and continued to gaze at her new daughter.

 

Violet continued to flip silently through the pictures, knowing that soon Father would be calling her to talk about her grades. Violet was not sure if she had done good or not, but she hoped so. She really did, she thought, thinking of Father’s imposing eyebrows.

 

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Violet ran after her brother, her eyes narrowing. She ran past the mahogany walls, and the graceful chandeliers, until she cornered him in his study.

 

“Artemis, give the C-Cube to me!” she said, desperately.

 

“No” her thirteen year old brother said, calmly.

 

“Artemis, that thing’s dangerous”

“Violet “

“It is!” she said, making a grab for it. Artemis shot his arm in the air. Violet sighed and jumped up, but to avail. It was only an inch out of her reach she thought. How maddening.

Artemis looked at her, in that way that seemed to be looking in her very soul.

 

“Really Violet, must you worry so?”
“Artemis” she took in a breath “Its John Spiro you’re dealing with…that is dangerous”

 

“Two business men, discussing my “ he waved his hand to the cube “C-Cube, what could go wrong?”

Violet would not know for a long time, as she was shipped back to boarding school the next day.

 

 

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Violet could feel her tears coming. Oh dear god he was gone. Gone. But Artemis Fowl always came back. He would. She couldn’t lose faith. She would not.

 

As she walked out of the living room, and down the hallway, she could hear the sobbing of her Mum coming from her Father and Mum’s sitting room.

 

“Timmy…he’s gone…kidnapped”

 

“There, there Angeline it will be fine” Mr. Fowl spoke with the calmness and evenness of a reassuring lawyer, rather than a distraught Father.

He is changed now, Violet thought as she leaned against the door. However, he is still…the same.

 

“When the time comes Artemis, will you take your chance to be a hero?”

Violet heard her Father’s voice ring though the wall, that she was leaning against in the hospital chair.

 

There was no sound from Artemis. However, inside Violet was seething. First Father wants him to be a crime lord, now a hero! Can’t he just be Arty?

 

In current time, Violet straightened, and pushed opened the door. “Mum” she said rushing into her Mum’s arms. And the two ladies held each other, and cried. Cried for a son, and brother.

 

When Violet was told,  by her parents that she was going to have a new sibling, she felt a mixture of feelings. Anger was one. Anger at her parents for having another child so soon, after Artemis’s disappearance, that they were replacing him. But she felt excitement too, and soon the anger evaporated.

 

When her twin brothers were born, they enchanted Violet. Beckett was tiny and blonde, with brown eyes, inherited from her Mother. Violet had also gotten her Mother’s eyes, as well as her long brown hair. He gave a gurgle, when Violet peered over the cradle to see him.

 

When she saw Myles, she gasped. Her baby brother looked so much like Artemis. The same hair. The same pale skin. He was the splitting image. And, Violet looked away, and left the room, the memory’s threating to make her tears explode.

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When they got the call from the ever-vigilant Butler, Violet could hardly believe it. She was afraid that if, she did believe it, it would be false. And Arty would still be gone.

 

However, when he came up the gravel path, dirty and tired looking but …looking like Artemis. She knew it was him, and burst out of the doorway and hugged her brother, disregarding his claim that hugs’ were foolish expressions of feelings.

 

She noticed he did not seem to have aged, but for some reason,  forgot about this fact at dinner when he asked everyone to look at him. She forgot.

 

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She begin to notice him twitching, and rearranging things. Artemis had always liked things to be orderly, but this was different. He seemed distant and jumpy as well.

Violet tried to talk to him a few times,  but he brushed her off and would go into his study. Once he did not close his study door, all the way and Violet looked through the crack , and saw him sink into his chair, and put his head in his hands, in a defeated manner. He reached out to his desk, taking a gold medallion off the desk,  and begin to rub it slowly. After a minute, he sat up a bit straighter and turned to his computer, muttering something about “A Project”.

 

Violet Fowl often wondered what secrets her brother had. She did not know that it wouldn’t be long until she found out…

 

 

Chapters: 1 2 3 4

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13 responses to “Violet Fowl.” Join in!

  1. Lots of punctuation issues. Are you new? Haven’t seen you before, and nor have I heard the oldies talking about you, so….

    Hi, I’m Iris_Cam, known as I_C, Iris, or Cammy. Note that the use of Iris is confusing because there’s another user called Iris. I personally like I_C the best. I’m one of the resident nit-pickers.

    Onto the story: Lots of punctuation issues, but I saw nothing else. Read over it, out loud, and put a comma at some places. I see you miss commas quite a bit.

  2. Hmmm, you new? If so, welcome! Haven’t seen ya around before, and for a noob, this is pretty good! I dunno why, but for me it clicked, and I don’t usually say that. I mean, yeah, I like stories, but I don’t really get all in to them like this one. XD Anyway, the only probs I see involve grammer mistakes, and all that other stuff. Don’t think I saw any spelling mistakes. So, 5 stars! I look forward to updates!

    ~Cimerene

  3. I agree with Iris_Cam, read over it please.

    Meanwhile…Hi. I’m KristinN.V., also called by Queenie, Krissy, and Krackle. I’m new and I hope to see many stories from you, because I think you have a great idea on this.

  4. Hi I_C! I am indeed new. I’ll look it over and fix it.Thanks for telling me!

    Hello Cimerene! I am so glad you enjoyed it! I feel quite happy right now.

    Hi Queenie! I am new too. And thank you!

  5. Hi. I’m Eragon Fowl. I will probably comment alot on this story and so far its really good. I don’t really pay attention to mistakes but I didn’t notice any mistakes. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. Hi, I’m River. If you don’t feel like typing the whole thing, just type R. .

    As for the story… I_C is right, PUNCTUATION. Maye one or two spelling mistakes. A little unclear, as well. I think you should develop more about Violet, her feelings and her thoughts, and categorize it in one-shots if you’re not going to update.

    Anyway, not bad, for a newbie! keep trying, you’ll get better.

  7. Hi, I’m Holls, known as Captain_Short, Holls, Holl or Holly. Nice to meet you. The story was pretty good except for the punctuation issues and a plot hole. Beckett and Myles are twins. I look forward to an update!

  8. Hey newbie! Call me Wilde. This is amazing! i could not find any mistakes. 5/ roses. :welcome: c u around!

    Pleased to meet you Wilde! Thank you very much!

  9. Minor mistakes, really. You just seem to forget the period after a sentence, as in here:

    “Violet…sit down”

    There are a lot of those mistakes in the story. No need to rush it!

    3.5/5.

    I took down chapter 3 and I am going to correct the punctuation ,etc. Thanks for pointing them out!

  10. You missed quite a few periods. Fix that and you’re golden.

    I’m kidding. You’re still PastelBlue, but…. never mind. Ignore my dumb joke.

    Btw, does your name come from that time when Orion said that Holly’s aura is “pastel blue with tiny little dolphins”?

    I fixed them, thanks.

    XD It was actually quite a good joke! And yes, my name comes from Orion. Orion was so funny.

  11. This is very good 😀 the one mistake i found was a typo : “Thank youm”

  12. Ania Buhankina November 21st, 2011 at 9:08 pm 12

    Wow, awesome story! This is soo cool! Although there were a few grammar mistakes, but any person will help you to find them.

    P.S. Also, I saw your avatar, and are you Russian? (if you look at my name you will see that “I” am Russian)

    Anyway good start,
    Ania Buhankina

    Thanks so much!

    I’m not Russian, but I love the Russian covers!

  13. This was very good and I noticed Aragon should be Argon. Besides that its good and UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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