The Sun God’s temple

Summary: I sat staring into space as the teacher droned on and on. A soft knock on the door woke me […]

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

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I sat staring into space as the teacher droned on and on. A soft knock on the door woke me out of my trance. It was the boy I had seen on the other campus. Artemis. I let my gaze drift away again, my pencil doodling on the page aimlessly.

“I need Miss. Leigh,” I jumped. He wanted me? Why?

“Lana, you’re wanted!” I stood up slowly, grabbing my stuff and slinging my bag over my back before following the pale boy out.

“Why do you need me?” I asked as soon as the door swang behind us.
“I need your help.” he said shortly.

I snorted. “How can I be of any help to THE Artemis Fowl?”

“You have some information and abilities that I need.” he pulled the paper I had been doodling on out of my hand.

“Are you a fan of egyptian hyrogliphs or Gnommish?” A smile, one of those all-knowing grins, lit up his face.

“Where can we talk?” I asked quietly. IĀ  realised I despised the boy already.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

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  1. Collinluvsholly May 30th, 2010 at 5:24 pm 1

    I love that story “seriously it relates to me” more please!

  2. Great job, Tou! This is tre interesting. šŸ˜€ Please update! I’d love to see where this is going… šŸ˜ˆ

    ~CC

  3. Aww thanx guys.
    @Collin: It relates to u?
    Sure I’ll update soon. Maybe in a coupla mins

  4. A couple of minutes has left us. šŸ˜„ šŸ™

  5. woah! cool! I like it. šŸ™‚ You’ve just got to update some more!

  6. Why don’t you put periods after every dialogue sentence? Mmmm….
    That’s about it. It isn’t bad. Looking forward. šŸ™‚

  7. Will do Sea, Will do.
    Sorry CC the update has to wait until after the wedding.
    Thankies guys.
    U guys never fail to make my day.

  8. *attempts to makes Tou’s day again* Erm… I forgot I don’t have that power. Only the power to unslap.

  9. U do make my day CC and I’ve updated. Only a small update but I really am tired.

  10. There are some tiny errors, but apart from that, this is a really exciting fic. I really like this plot, it’s well paced but not too much so that the reader gets confused. Can’t wait too see what happens next šŸ™‚

  11. Duck With No Name June 2nd, 2010 at 3:24 pm 12

    Nice, Toushi! šŸ˜€ I wonder who the man is… great work as usual! ._.

  12. Great job hitsugayatoushiro!5/5!
    UPDATE PLEASE!

  13. Nice! suspenseful. But wait, you left us at a cliffhanger! Or rather it seemed like one to me…

    By the way, the second to last sentence: “The bittings gave away easily, I found the pattern and picked it out easily,” that seemed repetitive to me. Just that word, “easily”.

    And (this is just me being a spelling/grammar geek), shouldn’t there be a semicolon instead of a comma in that sentence?

  14. yep, ur right. Semi colon and the word easily is repetitive. Thanks.

    YES SOMEONES READ MY ANNOUNCEMENT
    Thank you for the correction and the comment XD U can have an e-cookie for that XD

  15. Lol, WOW that was awsome, update soon or fear my anger!!! šŸ™‚

  16. greekmythology March 10th, 2011 at 2:23 am 18

    this is a good story. does hitsugayatoushiro
    mean the actual toushira from bleach or not?

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