I Still Believe
Written on December 7th, 2009 by crazy chickStory Details
(11 votes, average: 4.45 out of 5)
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That was the first time I saw her. Her bright hazel eyes glittering in the moonlight, filled with defiance. Holly. Captain Short. She spoke, her voice like steel. “Stay back, human.” She’d said. “You don’t know what you’re dealing with.” And that marked the beginning. Holly. Captain Short. She’d perfected my life. I’d brought her into things she ahd no part of, but she had rode the wave all the way to the shore. She’d filled my youth with adventure. I would have brought adventures myself: dull, uneventful “adventures.” But Holly took my life… and saved it.
December 7th, 2009 at 4:10 am
FIRST REVIEW DANCE!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!
now that that is out of the way…
good story, a little short, and the whole born within two years thing confuses me (wasn’t it 20 years for a new fairy child)
logical musings aside, good story.
December 7th, 2009 at 6:40 am
WOW =)
December 7th, 2009 at 9:34 pm
i like the story cc
December 8th, 2009 at 2:38 am
wow. really cool. i like this. sooo well written.
December 8th, 2009 at 4:14 am
one of the best it was a fab story i rate it 5/5
abra:)
December 19th, 2009 at 7:17 pm
awww…. that’s a nice story
December 23rd, 2009 at 6:07 pm
Wow, CC. That was….. awesome! One of your best, of course.
I absolutley LOVE IT! 
December 24th, 2009 at 3:09 am
Gracias!!!
December 25th, 2009 at 12:51 am
Si nada. (That IS Spanish for your’e welcome, isn’t it? Someone correct me if I’m wrong!
)
December 25th, 2009 at 12:56 am
By the way, I gave it 5 *s.
December 27th, 2009 at 3:55 am
I luv it already! And I’m on chapter 222!!!!! XDXDXDXD
5 points ALREADY
December 27th, 2009 at 3:59 am
Awsome as I read it all! XD
December 27th, 2009 at 4:01 pm
De Nada, Seniorita.
January 3rd, 2010 at 5:52 am
CC THAT WAS EVAN BETTER ON THE COMPUTER!!!! You should so right about Shadows exept make it about Artemis Fowl charecters.
January 5th, 2010 at 12:06 am
Good idea, cherry-pop, good idea.
January 24th, 2010 at 10:29 pm
I call Holly as Callisto, though.
January 24th, 2010 at 10:46 pm
OMG!! That was soooo sad!!! awesome tho!!
February 19th, 2010 at 3:24 am
Thank you, K-Bar. Thank you. This took me longer than it should have.
March 19th, 2010 at 2:24 am
*claps* Brava! Brava! Wonderful, amiga! Soft, sweet, and emotion-filled. This is the part when i wonder if i really was your mentor, since mine seem to focus on pain and suffering, or sadness, worry, or denial. *smirks* 5/5!
March 22nd, 2010 at 3:09 am
The end was so sad! :C :[
April 7th, 2010 at 4:13 pm
*aghast* Oh, Silver!
You have to know I’m yours!!! 
You trained me after all. I just apply myself differently. 
May 22nd, 2010 at 2:35 pm
It was awesome seriously awesome! Now in Spanish, Impresionante en serio impresionante!
May 30th, 2010 at 6:30 pm
*bows* Gracias.
June 20th, 2010 at 4:14 pm
*Sadness* very good, very sad. some of your best work. bravo, bravo!!!!
June 27th, 2010 at 9:13 pm
Hey, CC. I was just reading through this wonderfully awesome story again, and I spotted a few mistakes that I felt like pointing out. Don’t worry, they’re very minor.
First chapter- Misspelled had- “I’d brought her into things she ahd no part of…”
Ch.8- I’m pretty sure there’s an “e” at the end of handsome…
Well, that’s it.
I enjoy this story so much, and I really love “But, no, not my angel. She is perched in my arms.” I thought that was brilliant. 
-Star