History Repeats (part 3)

Summary: Chapter 6 Samantha P.O.V. Once the dart kicked in, I drifted into sleep. At first, I was so deep in […]

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Chapter 6

Samantha P.O.V.

Once the dart kicked in, I drifted into sleep. At first, I was so deep in sleep I didn’t dream, but then I did, and I wished I wasn’t, because I dreamt of Holly.

It wouldn’t have been so bad, but for the fact I kept dreaming the same thing, over and over, and even that wouldn’t have been so bad, if it was a good dream.

But it wasn’t. What kind of person would call watching the closest thing they had to family be shot once, let alone of and over again, a good dream? The answer: not me!

The worst part was, I could see it all. Every little detail was blown into focus. The gun being raised, the trigger being pulled, watching her crumple as it found its target. It was all happening again, at least it seemed to be, in vivid detail, right in front of me. And it was torture.Every time I watched it, it seemed to get worse and worse.

This is never going to end, I thought. And it did seem like it.

But finally, when it seemed the most hopeless, it did.

The dream started to dim. The colors swirled and mix, making the scene unrecognizable. And then, like the sunset, it slowly started to disappear altogether, sinking beyond the horizon and finishing its retreat.

My dream plunged into blackness.

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4 responses to “History Repeats (part 3).” Join in!

  1. Yay! Next part has come! This is awesome!
    I didn’t spot any mistakes. Hmm…right. Gimme a moment to log in and I’ll add to my favs.
    Five stars. Can’t wait to see the rest!

    Ps: I know you’re getting mad at me for not updating. Sorry. Just because of exams.

  2. Thanks! And I don’t mind. I know how controlling school can be sometimes, especially right now with the OAAs coming up. I’ll post the next part soon.

  3. SilverGoddess March 10th, 2013 at 5:37 pm 3

    I really like your stories and I love your writing style. There was a bit of OOC-ness on Artemis'(II) part, but that was pretty much it.

    I also saw your comment asking me to beta these. Honestly, I don’t think you need it. You make almost no spelling errors, your grammar is good and I see no plot holes, though I’m terrible at spotting then in the first place. There were only minor errors, like putting mud boy instead of Mud Boy. You’re very careful and clean in your work and you should be proud of it, but if you still think you need a beta, you can always check the list (which I did apply for, I just haven’t gotten a response yet), or shoot me an email (silvergoddess666@gmail.com)

    Please post part 4 soon!

  4. Okay! I have it ready, I just have to post it! I just got my Internet fixed! I did warn you about the fact there might be some OOCness on Artemis the seconds part, partly cause he’s older and partly because I’m not good at that kind of stuff. Thanks for the compliment though. I’ll be sure to fix that and capitalize “mud boy” from now on. I will put the next part as soon as I have time!

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