English pound coin

Written on February 28th, 2010 by hitsugayatoushiro

Story Details

“What does she look like?” Artemis asked, his laptop hummed nearly inaudibly infront of him. I couldn’t see what he was doing.

“She’s uh…” I sat thinkign for nearly a whole minuet, then my memory kicked in.

“She was tanned, lightly though. Her long black hair was about shoulder length…green eyes-probably the most brightest I have ever seen.” I answered.

“Anything else? there are millions that fit that discription.” Artemis’ thin eyebrow arched.

“Yeah she was wearing a lilac-maybe it was violet…it was dark-anyway it was a really floaty dress, braided straps. A light shade of purple. She was barefoot and she dropped the english pound. I think she might of been a runaway. Barefeet and she was absoloutely shivering. She’s very fast too” I smiled as I remebered her speed.

“Ok..lets run this through.” He drummed his fingers on the couch arm rest. The noise irratated me but I held my tongue.

“Her name’s Elizabeth Youngs. English father and spanish mother. She was training for the Olympics. She went missing from a party in Tullamore. Is this her?” He spun the laptop around so that it faced me.

“Yeah.” I breathed out. It was the same face-only she was smiling. She looked even more beautiful.

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11 Reviews for “English pound coin”

  1. crazy chick Says:

    Wonderfully done, Tou. :D I’d love an update! Please don’t delete this!!! :D

  2. hitsugayatoushiro Says:

    Thanks CC.
    I appreciate the comment XD

  3. crazy chick Says:

    I’m happy to help. And this seems very Beckett-ish to me. ;)

  4. hiholly123 Says:

    Ooh, looks good. I like it! Update soooooon!

  5. crazy chick Says:

    I knew you could find it. XD

  6. hitsugayatoushiro Says:

    Thanks guys. I appreciate it!!
    I’ll update soon XD

  7. crazy chick Says:

    Yay!

  8. Hermione Fowl Says:

    UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!!! You rock, you know that?

  9. Yoshi Says:

    Creepy…. I’m glad Beckett’s not a jock….

    And I would LOVE an update!!! :D

    ~Yoshi

  10. hitsugayatoushiro Says:

    Okey dokey Yosh. Cos u asked I’ll upd8 soon XD

  11. Yoshi Says:

    I care! Dis is good story! Beckett is much more… easy to identify with then in most stories, Artemis is IC, and it is suspenseful! Very good, and I hope you can find the determination to finish it, despite the attacks of writer’s block! :D

    ~Yoshi

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