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JayJay writes poems

Summary: Prologue The sun was shining warmly on three figures as they walked out of the manor. One figure was an […]

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Prologue
The sun was shining warmly on three figures as they walked out of the manor. One figure was an elf named Holly Short. Another figure was a human named Artemis Fowl. The last and smallest figure was a lemur named JayJay.
“JayJay! Artemis! I found the perfect spot for our picnic!” Holly called. The other two stumbled through the woods to a beautiful clearing. The little lemur found a branch and began writing a story. Holly came over to him and smiled.
“JayJay your lunch is…” she saw what JayJay had written.
“Whoa, JayJay. Is that a poem?” The little lemur nodded excitedly.
“You’re very good. Maybe you can write some more for us?” JayJay happily grabbed his sandwich and ran up into the trees to plan his new poems.

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  1. Was this written by Jayjay? It’s pretty weird, but that’s not a bad thing. You missed some capitalizations, but I liked the way you spaced it out with the enters and stuff.

  2. Like WE said-missed a couple of caps, kinda weird, but in a good way. I liked how you repeated the line at the beginning of each verse. Will there be more??

  3. Hmm. *considers* Very creative idea. Honestly, I had no idea lemurs could write. 😆 But it didn’t really seem to…flow… completely right. Maybe have more of a plot involved? Maybe you could make something happen to JayJay specifically and let him write about that? Overall, pretty well done. 😉

    -Star

  4. Thanks people! I think I’m going to do actions next. 😈

  5. Irish Awsomeness October 28th, 2010 at 3:49 am 5

    I didn’t know JayJay’s parents died. Cool poem though.

  6. Good next chapter. 🙂 Again with the awesome and effective repeats. 🙂

  7. Good update. 🙂 I’m not a big fan of poems like this, but this was a cute idea. I know he’s a lemur in all, but could you maybe incorporate a little more description? Just a thought. 🙂 I can’t wait to see where you go next with this.

    -Star*

  8. At first I thought this was completely random and weird, but as I continued to read it grew on me. Actually I found it hilarious! Creative, having a lemur write a poem, and nice job on filling in his background. Funny/touching, pleez update!

  9. UMMM…DONT KNOW WHY ITS CAPS.

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