Artemis Fowl~ INSANITY
Written on April 30th, 2009 by AF rulesStory Details
(12 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
Loading ...“Dang Artemis! How are you so good at this game?”, groaned Becket. Artemis chuckled. Him and the rest of the Fowl family were playing a quiz game called BUZZ on thier PS3 even Butler joined in the game. Artemis had just won 5 times in a row.
Angiline Fowl laughed. “It’s hard to beat a geneous at a QUIZ game!” Butler just sat there, trying to figure out how to use the remote. Artemis Fowl Senior chuckled. “You forgot to turn it on.”, he said switching on Butlers remote.
“Oh!”, Butler grumbled, “I can take apart a gun in 30 second, but I can’t figure out how to play a game…” Artemis laughed at this. The whole room became quiet. Everyone was staring at Artemis in shock. He laughed. Artemis Fowl II laughed for the first time in a long time.
That was when it happened.
There was a loud explosion, and the ground rumbled. It took a few moments for everyone in the room to reliese that Fowl Manor was collapsing on to them. Shards of wood, and concrete flew everywhere. Blood splattered everywhere around Artemis. Blood. His familys blood. Mother, Father, Myles, Beckett. All of them lay on the floor dead.
Butler jumped on to Artemis to protect him from the falling building. A large chuck of wood fell down, and it stabbed Butler in the back. It went right through him, and almost made a hole in Artemis. With Butlers dieing breath he said, “You… must… live… Artemis…”
Then, for the second time, Butler died.
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Artemis was squished under the weight of Butler and the rubble of Fowl Manor. It took him a long time to wiggle himself free. He had broken his left arm, and two ribs, but he didn’t notice the pain. He was numb with shock. If someone was there they would of seen Artemis’ eyes cloud over. He did not cry, he did not sob, he screamed. He let out a ear splitting scream filled with grief, anger, hate ,and insanity.
May 2nd, 2009 at 2:18 am
Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
Didn’t see that coming.
UPDATE!! (please)
Also, you may need a spell checker.
May 2nd, 2009 at 10:11 am
The grammer has a few mistakes and I know that I am one to talk from my first story In Love but all in all I liked it. upd8
May 2nd, 2009 at 10:38 pm
I don’t like this…. I LOVE IT! Update soon.
May 2nd, 2009 at 11:38 pm
fast, but a great idea Darling!
Sincerly and with high regards,
Asha_Hope
the critic of all!
May 4th, 2009 at 3:24 pm
Wow… Seriously scary. Cool. Update soon!
May 5th, 2009 at 7:00 pm
OMG GOD!!!!!!!
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DID!!!!!!!!!!
NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
C!!!!!!!!!!
THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COMIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YET!!!!!!!!!!!!
SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SAD!!!!!!!!!!!
POOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ARTY!!!!!!!!!!!
HE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LAUGHS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!
May 6th, 2009 at 3:07 pm
You see that another thing about Mudmen you have amazing games systems!
Dam I wish I was a human (Sort of)
I feel sorry for the little fowl boy!
O well he shouldn’t mess with us fairies
Regards Tharl Mudmuncher
May 8th, 2009 at 3:40 am
Well, the plot in good, I’ll give you that. And since you haven’t wrote much, I won’t judge you of rate. However, here are some things you can do to make your story a lot better.
1. Grammar. I personally judge a story a lot on their grammar, because that’s what makes a story LOOK good. Double-checking is a great way to find errors. You should revise this first chapter before moving on.
2. Your story moves too fast. You killed off 4 people in the span of one paragraph. That’s a bit speedy.
I can’t wait to hear and read the next part of this story!
May 13th, 2009 at 1:57 am
Yay, an upd8!!! Love it, more ASAP
May 19th, 2009 at 11:23 am
FOR THE DEVILS SAKE UPDATE!!!!!!
May 21st, 2009 at 6:28 am
pwease update. pweeeaaaassssseeee???*gives super cute puppy dog eyes* pwetty pwease with Arty as a boyfirend?
May 27th, 2009 at 8:36 pm
OH COME ON?!?!?!?!?!?! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE FOR US!!!!! WE NEED AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 28th, 2009 at 9:24 pm
ohhhhhh love the upd8
May 30th, 2009 at 2:20 pm
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i’M BEGGING U!
May 31st, 2009 at 4:11 am
Oh I get the update. Sedah very clever. I’m actually reading a book serise(well more of a trilogy)where Greek myths are real and this teenage girl has to save the world from some demented Demi-God named Philonecron, witch mean lover of death in Greek BTW. A little bit of info Hades is a jerk/idiot Posiden is a total moronic *this is bleaped because it could offend some people* that only cares about how great his own parties are and Zeus…well in the books we haven’t met Zeus yet. Well there you have it! I GTG now. Bye Eoin!
June 1st, 2009 at 3:32 am
lol what book series? And this is such a sad/scary story! Continue! And, Hunter, it’s written, not wrote. Ha!
June 3rd, 2009 at 5:40 am
@ AFf96: It’s called The Chronus Chronicles.
@ AF rules: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
June 5th, 2009 at 9:10 pm
Write, write write. By the way thanks a lot!:( You’ve just mentally disturbed me and my friend! Now we’ll never be the same again. I still like the plot though so FINISH THE FRICKIN STORY!!!
June 5th, 2009 at 9:33 pm
nonononnonnonononononono!
yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy did u do that!
they die die!
it was soooooooooooo sad!
June 6th, 2009 at 6:25 pm
yes, sad! Especially since only one twin survived! Where was Juliet? Sad update! Continue soon!
June 7th, 2009 at 3:22 am
didn’t see that coming…
June 7th, 2009 at 5:19 am
Ditto, didn’t see that coming…
June 7th, 2009 at 4:27 pm
GASP! dude….whoa…
June 7th, 2009 at 4:41 pm
WOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ATLEAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOM1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LIVS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
POOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CAN’T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FEEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOTHIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
June 11th, 2009 at 4:46 am
I can’t wait for the update!
June 12th, 2009 at 10:31 pm
Wonderful….though I tried to ignore some little parts there (some in chapter 4)…. cough…
But besides the gross things that was soooo fun and very sad….
June 12th, 2009 at 10:38 pm
Yeah, chappy 4 was slightly disturbing, but the rest was really cool! There’s one thing I wanted to say, but I’ve forgotten it… err… Oh yeah! Commander Kelp is a bit OOC, eh?
P.S. That err… WAS actually me thinking!
June 15th, 2009 at 6:25 am
U HVE 2 UPD8 OR ELSE WE WILL ALL DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
June 16th, 2009 at 1:55 pm
that wasnt much if an upd8!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
June 19th, 2009 at 2:26 am
UPDATE AGAIN!
June 19th, 2009 at 3:50 pm
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPD8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
B4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
June 22nd, 2009 at 3:42 am
AWESOME! HE’S GONNA SAVE THEM! CONTINUE SOON!!! PLEASE!!!
June 22nd, 2009 at 10:35 am
If Artemis manages to stop Fowl manner crashing, will he be whole again?
June 30th, 2009 at 1:58 am
I think so…
June 30th, 2009 at 3:09 am
O my god that was amazing… so sad and rely scary! UPDATE!!! thats an order!!!!
June 30th, 2009 at 6:40 am
Ok this is like those Edgar Allen Poe poems. Scary, sad, and beautiful. This is truley amazing. 11 outta 10. Oh and Sedah.. I always knew there was a dark side to him. chapter 5 was poetry. so know on to the main thing… UPDATE!
July 6th, 2009 at 5:28 am
heads up, there is a few spellign errors hiding in there. And that is extremely random.
July 6th, 2009 at 3:07 pm
I soooo love it!
July 6th, 2009 at 4:01 pm
R U GONNA UPD8 YET?????????!!!!!!!!!
PLZ??????????……..
July 8th, 2009 at 7:42 pm
UPD8!!!! like YEAH!!!!
Finish it!
PLz! *puppy face*
July 10th, 2009 at 7:01 pm
UPDATE NOW! GERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
July 10th, 2009 at 9:57 pm
Gosh Finish it!! I’m waiting and I’m not getting any happier!
July 12th, 2009 at 10:32 pm
please upd8 soon!
July 13th, 2009 at 5:50 am
OMGosh! Chapter 7 was hilarious! A beach!!! HAHAHA! Continue soon please!
July 13th, 2009 at 8:40 pm
A BEACH KEWL!!!
upd8 n continue pleze!
July 13th, 2009 at 10:54 pm
UPD8!!!!!! please??
July 17th, 2009 at 6:16 pm
Update soon it’s so suspensful!!
August 16th, 2009 at 1:42 am
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you a big MEANY
you have just made me hate Myles!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO poor BECKETT now i don’t give a rat’s soggy behind about Artemis or his stupid mother or his stinkin rat of a father or his mussle man ‘body gaurd’!
nOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO!
OMG i kan’t beleve I just sed dat.
sorry i respect you all (exept timmy who for some reason i dont like) sorry Arty jr, sos Angie sos Dom. but i still think Myles a meeny.
LET BECKY LIVE!!!!
August 22nd, 2009 at 5:13 pm
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Wow…your hate for Myles is increasing…
@AFrules
YEY! You like updated it!
October 5th, 2009 at 8:03 pm
NOOOOOOO. U.P.D.A.T.E! and LET BECKETT L.I.V.E.
pwease?
December 27th, 2009 at 10:26 am
woooooooooooooooooooo thats alot of reeiws please update
May 7th, 2010 at 4:50 pm
if u dont update in the next 48 hours ill murder u then bring u back to life with the help of nol so u will know what will happen if u dont upoate! and wite more about sedah! that was great!!!!!!!!!!……. im dying with longing!
May 15th, 2010 at 1:10 pm
please update!