Artemis Fowl and the Rip in the paradox: part 11

Summary: THE PAST “What? We’re going to crash?” Holly rolled her eyes. “Relax, Mud Boy. I know what to do.” Artemis […]

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THE PAST

“What? We’re going to crash?”

Holly rolled her eyes. “Relax, Mud Boy. I know what to do.”

Artemis groaned. “I’d be surprised if you say land safely.”

“How long have you known me, Artemis?”

“Long enough.”

Orion poked his head inbetween the pilot and passenger seats. “Really, Arty, you can’t hide it forever. You do know I can read your thoughts. And right now you are thinking that-”

Artemis groaned. “Orion, I swear if you say a word about…”

Orion grinned. “Right now you are thinking that miss Holly looks really attractive.”

“Shut up, Orion! I do not think such things.”

“Oh yes you do. And I already know it all…”

Holly interrupted. “Quiet,you two,unless you want me to crash this thing-”

It crashed.

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The shuttle fell with a violent screeching noise as it got jammed into the golden sand on the coast of the land of Elfin magic.

For a long moment, all was silent until Holly made the announcement.

“Get up Mud Boys. We have something to look for.” she turned to Artemis. “And you find it important, I guess.”

Orion spoke next. “He’s doing it because of you, princess.”

Artemis couldn’t help but shout, “Orion if you’d please mind your own business and stop hacking my thoughts!”

Holly gave him an awkward stare. Artemis kept quiet.

 

UPDATE

“Forget it,”said Artemis.

“I was about to tell you that, I swear, if Orion is telling the truth about-”

“He is not. Anyway, let’s stop wasting time and start searching.”

Holly was smart enough to guess that he was trying to move off topic.

“Fine. Just this once, you’re forgiven.”

Artemis covered Orion’s mouth before he could say something. “Thank you.”

 

 

A/N  i will update.

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2 responses to “Artemis Fowl and the Rip in the paradox: part 11.” Join in!

  1. SilverGoddess March 10th, 2013 at 5:43 pm 1

    Hmmm… it’s a little short and it seems like another stall, but your spelling and grammar are pretty good. There isn’t very much to critique, but Orion was funny, so your humor is getting pretty good, too.

    All in all, not a bad chapter, but it could stand to be a little longer and more action-y.*thumbs up!*

  2. Hmm…i appreciate it that you are still interested…yep. awesome.
    PS: I sent u an email regarding tqoh chapter seven, today. Have a look.

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