ARMAGEDDON’S EVE -(Re-written) NEW CHAPTER ADDED!

Summary: NEW CHAPTER! NEW CHAPTER!!! YAY ME! :)

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11

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Haven City

Holly groaned, frustrated. “Isn’t there any way you could get me a line to Argon? This is serious!”
“Sorry, Captain,” said Foaly. “That jerk is following human rules and refuses to answer calls on Sundays.”
The elf was about leave, when a gentle whirring noise came from Foaly’s largest monitor and Trouble’s face appeared on it. He looked tired. “Holly,” he said, tone serious. “I want you to fly to the surface and get that mud boy down here immediately.”
“But-” began Holly, but she was cut off.
“We have a situation, and I think we caught Opal Koboi on camera.”
Foaly nearly choked. “What?! Opal? She’s dead! Are you absolutely sure-”
“Heck yeah.” Trouble snorted. “Truth is, I’m not surprised. I’m tired of that psychopath. And as much as I hate to say it, Fowl can help.”
Holly and Foaly exchanged looks, swallowing nervously. They had the same thought.
D’Arvit.

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Aqua was enjoying doing everything possible to kill Artemis’s dignity. First, he had a ketchup food fight with Beckett. Then, he had stayed on the other end of his bedroom door playing knock knock jokes with the twins (Example: “Knock, knock” “Who’s there?” “Isabelle” “Isabelle who?” “Isabelle broken, I had to knock!” ) And now, he was in a bath tub filled with bubble bath and he was gleefully reading Artemis’s ‘diary‘.

Ah, the bliss of being the annoying Alter. The best part of it was that Arty himself was yelling at him the whole time. The worst, however, came when he saw Holly enter the room- through the window, as usual- the bathroom door was wide open and she stood there, staring.

“What the heck-” she started, then remembered who this guy really was. Aqua’s face turned pink, both embarrassed and happy at the same time.  “I’ll be there in a while, babe!” he called, soon afterwards realizing that he had no towel on the rack.

Holly sighed, tossing him a one that was on the bed. Oh great. Opal had to come back when this goon was around.

 

Aqua smiled gratefully as he closed the door and got dressed in a pair of jeans along with a t-shirt Artemis had never worn before. (Probably because of the text that said, ‘I was born smart but school ruined me’)

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11

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  1. Mastermind Excello May 24th, 2013 at 12:57 pm 1

    Multiple alternate personalities… this is interesting.

  2. Interesting indeed. I like the rewrite. This one is better than the first, in my opinion. 🙂 Update soon!

    Shaadia:
    thanks! i promise to update as soon as possible.

  3. hey fans! heehee….sorry for not updating in a while but i swear, when my mom gets back from hong kong i WILL use the powers of the laptop to update! keep you eyes open for these awesome alters! Capricornus:freako who sees the supernatural, and other alters are jealous holly cares about him/Scorpio:soft spoken boring in a way/Tarus:intelligent nerd/Libra:stupid guy with a 1secons memory span/Leo:physical guy/Pisces: guy who is slightly perverted, hates his name/Saggitarius: awesome person who nobody yet knows what his personality is/Virgo: girly and embarassing/AND i cant remember the other names, there are 12 alters. all zodiac style. and dont forget opal koboi, she is out for revenge and this leads to an all-out adventure where Haven, Atlantis and the human worlr face a threat. artemis and the alters have to join in on the adventure with holly, my favourite foaly, mulch and trouble kelp. we also get to see the alters of these chatacters as well! foaly has a stupid side! and whats more, can artemis really save the world when he is stuck in his own mind most of the time? read, comment and i will update!

  4. Silver is too lazy to log in June 5th, 2013 at 8:09 pm 4

    I only noticed that comment now. The ones you missed are:

    Cancer(the crab) *my sign!*
    Gemini(the twins)
    Aquarius(the water bearer)
    Aries(the ram)

    If you want more info on what personality type correspond with which astrological symbol, email me and I’ll send you a list.

  5. No, I did use ’em. Observe carefully and you’ll see it.

    I missed Aries on purpose. He comes later on, and he’s like evil. Wouldn’t wanna ruin the surprise!!

    PS: since I’m outta ideas, what kinda person dya want cancer to be?
    (I like that kinda speaking)

  6. Mastermind Excello June 7th, 2013 at 2:18 am 6

    I think Aqua is supposed to be Aquarius. Where’s Scorpio? That’s in the Zodiac, right?

  7. yes! someone finally got it! aqua is indeed aquarius. man, did i really miss scorpio?? i cant believe it. *dies of embarassment* comes back to life and glares at mastermind* never, never point out a mistake like that again!

  8. Silver is still too lazy to log in June 7th, 2013 at 5:02 pm 8

    I meant the ones you missed in the comment.

    @ME- Scorpio was in her comment.

  9. stop confusing the princess y’all. she’s had a long boring day at school with a busy week ahead, so my loving fans: i might not be on for a while, but when princess gets back awesomeness will too!

  10. Haha! Yeah, lucky him. 🙂 Good work! Update soon!

  11. Thanks for the review!

    SMILEY TIME!! 🙂 🙁 😀 :p :mrgreen: 😈 😀

  12. Haha! Awesome work, shaadia. I think you’re definitely getting better. Lots of A/H, too, which I love. 😀 Update soon!

  13. Great work on there update! I totally bet that he will be like ten times hader to work with than Artemis would… that ought to be good… update soon!

  14. What the….?! Are you saying that for Artemis to escape, he has to let the complex take control of him again?? Wow.. What is gonna happen???

    You had better update soon! 😉 I’m watching…

  15. Ha ha, don’t worry I will!

  16. Update soon. I love how you did the whole multiple personalities on your symbols of when you were born. This is great!

  17. Oh cool, you added it here on Fangathering. I can’t wait to see Leo and Pisces and Gemini and Libra take control. I wonder if Artemis has a ‘Butler’ side… Or a random girl side. Can’t wait for the update!

  18. okay, maybe tonight if possible!

  19. Please,please uptdate!
    No one writes anything on this site anymore.
    I have to rely on Fanfiction.net, which is SO untrustworthy.
    by the way, good job.
    Taurus reminds me of myself.
    BTW, Saggitarius should be insane.
    That would be cool.
    Peace out,Artemis.
    NO JOKES ABOUT MY NAME!!!! IT IS GREEK!

    And real!

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