The Raven and the Dove

Written on January 6th, 2009 by XxEviexX

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  • Category: Romance
  • Author: XxEviexX
  • Word Count: 309
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She does not surprise herself by resenting the Dove for how easily she was able to ensnare the mind of the Raven. She envies the effortless manner in which the Dove is able to flock with him, for under their dissimilar feathers lie insides made of the same colors. She tries to look past the perfection of the hues, the uniformity of the shades. After desperately searching for anything that might throw off the balance of their flawless match, she sees that their feathers count for more than they are accredited with. The Dove’s pale, pristine feathers are hypocritical; they give off the impression of light, while hiding darker internal colors. The Raven’s jet-black coat is secretive; it hides the lighter tones within from all but those who know him best. Perhaps, she hypothesizes, the contrast between exterior and interior matters more than the actual color, even if they are identical. She is slightly assuaged by this notion of imperfection for a moment, but realizes that the contrast affects the overall equation quite insignificantly; for no matter what color they are, the Dove’s feathers mark her as a bird, just like the Raven. She, on the other hand, remains a Fish that puts forth her best effort at a contented façade while those above her world fly towards the horizon, not sparing a glance to the water below.

Rush-edited, so sorry about that. I’m sure everyone can figure out who the Raven, Dove, and Fish is, but then again, they didn’t on FF. So the Raven is obviously Artemis, the Dove is NOT Holly, it’s Minerva, and the Fish is Holly. Honestly, there are A LOT of clues pointing to that. Tried to go for an allegory-type thing. Not sure it worked. Feedback is appreciated.

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7 Reviews for “The Raven and the Dove”

  1. SableOrpheon Says:

    FCD!!!!!! Oh yeahhh! Totally beat ya misaki!

    Nice story, the words flow very nicely!

  2. EvilOpal Says:

    This is really good! I knew the Raven was Artemis, and the Dove was either Holly or Minerva, I thought it was Minerva, and then the person talking was whoever wasn’t the Dove. This is really awesome, though I hope it doesn’t turn out that way in the books. I like A\H. Once again, this is AWESOME!!

  3. ArtemisFowlfan Says:

    Im sorry, Im just not very good at understanding free form poetry.

  4. XxEviexX Says:

    It’s not poetry. And I hope for an AH ending, as well.

  5. ArtemisFowlfan Says:

    oh it sound like poetry beautiful and deep.
    Anyway, Im sorry, but I didn’t understand it.

  6. Miasaki Says:

    Ooh! Very nice the pacing is JUUUUST right to me. :D

    Also, dang you, SableOrpheon!!!! :evil:

  7. hitsugayatoushiro Says:

    innit i cant understand it either
    but it was great anyway

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