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Summary: Hey, sorry about the cruddy post before. Still a tear jerker, though 😉   He should have known.  It happened […]

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Hey, sorry about the cruddy post before. Still a tear jerker, though 😉

 

He should have known. 

It happened in every pathetic romantic movie. 

Every trashy romance novel. 

Every little girl’s nightmare. 

He should have known he would be broken. 

He should have known she’d choose today. 

Nothing had gone right. He refused his windbreaker in too much of a hurry to see her. He had stepped in many a puddle. It was raining buckets that screamed, “Just don’t leave the house!” But none of it mattered. 

Why? 

Because . . . She would be there. That beautiful blonde woman he hadn’t seen in years. That goddess in a ghee. 

Juliet Butler was coming home. 

Myles licked his lips, and checked once again. 

“You’re sure Ms. Butler was on that flight?” He asked. 

The woman, quivering under the young man’s cold gaze, replied, “I’m sure, sir. I’m sorry-“

But he was already too far, already under the rain. That rain that screamed “I told you so!” 

With a grimace, he added to the rain’s serenade of vain joy and crushing defeat. 

“Juliet . . .” he whispered, like an F sharp in C major, tears running down his cheeks. His knees wobbled. 

“Juliet!” 

His shoulders shook, and his eyes bled pure crystal misery. He refused to believe it. He couldn’t believe it. 

The blonde woman wouldn’t get off the plane. 

Hell, there wasn’t even a plane! 

Yet, he straightened his back controlled his sobs and just stood in the torrent, crying where no one could tell.

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  1. Hermione Fowl March 26th, 2010 at 5:07 am 1

    You rock, TWS. But Myles and Juliet? You still rock.=)=)=)

  2. shadowsnake451 March 26th, 2010 at 10:03 am 2

    The beginning was excellent, but for me it tailed off at the end. That’s just a personal veiw, though – the actual writing is brilliant as always, flawless grammar and spelling, brilliant!

  3. Love it! You had me thinking it was an A/M story but, Myles and Juliet? I like it; very original. 😀

  4. Myles and Juliet…. Yes, yes I can see that. 🙂 Wonderful, TWS. Pure beauty. 5 stars instantly. 🙂

  5. Speechless. You’ve got me speechless. And the speech I’m giving now doesn’t count.
    You never fail to amaze me. I mean, I’ll think you’ve done your very best, then you’ll write another story

    Anyways, TWS, I really do love this story. I think that you are one of the most amazing authors on this site! And I love the way you described Myles’ tears. 😀 It was beautiful. 🙂

    ~CC

  6. 😀 Thank you. For everything. 😀 I’m just stating the truth, is all.

    ~CC

  7. Thanks for what? I’ll I do is write 😉 You, inteligentita, do all the work. Thank YOU for being awesome.

  8. Me? I did nothing! I read your story. Not hard if the story is brilliant! XD

    ~CC

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