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Shattered

Summary: Memories. All around me. Surrounding me, clawing at me. ‘You will die long before I do’, she said. ‘My life […]

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Memories. All around me. Surrounding me, clawing at me. ‘You will die long before I do’, she said. ‘My life will continue for thousands of years’, she said. 

But she was wrong. So painfully, heartbreakingly wrong… 

What I never got about Mud Men was… everything, really. If I wanted to, I could figure out anything, with arte here. Alone. Alone! 

Artemis was avoiding my face for a reason all his own. It was awkward; so beautifully awkward. The sand became softer as I risked a glance in his direction. The ocean waves roaring in our ears became less salty when he was around. 

I picked it up before he did. The awful stench of danger. I examined the beach parking lot. That car. That shiny black SUV. 

“Artemis-” I began but it was too late. I was too late, because the bullet narrowly missed his face. 

He stood up. I stood up too, winch was a big mistake. My neck! My stupid, d’arviting neck! Was that even a word? I didn’t know. I didn’t know anything anymore. Only the heat. Was the beach on fire? Heat! 

Artemis, where was he? Alive. Was he watching me burn on the ground? So fuzzy…. 

I… was… a… trained… professional! Do something… anything. 

“Artemis…” 

And then there was black. 

Dead! I could not relive that… not even as a memory. No… No… No! To nothing… like my heart. 

Shattered. 

 

 

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  1. I wrote this just to make myself cry…
    Don’t ask why I killed Holly.

  2. Ah. I like touching stories. It actually made me cry. And it doesn’t help that I’m listening to Silence by 78Violet.

  3. Artiholi180 iz watchin you ^_^ August 20th, 2010 at 4:32 am 3

    Wow……….epic wow………

    I- *sniff* I love it =’) twas great writing that brought Holly’s death. Good job, Falcon.
    -Dex out-

  4. Ahh,*sniff* thats so *bawls* SS-AAA-DDDD!!!!!!!
    I’m going to have a serious talk with you tomorrow at school!!!!

  5. It’s nice, but I don’t really get the point. It’s too short to make much of a impact.

  6. *tear* random and sad. an interesting combo.

  7. so sad… that actually made me cry. it might make more of an impression if it was longer, though… i’d love to see it play out from Artemis’ pov, too.
    =^^=

  8. Yeah. I can’t do boy’s POV, even Artemis XD

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