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Written on April 25th, 2007 by drawingpupStory Details
- Category: Romance
- Author: drawingpup
- Word Count: 120
- Read 426 times
(13 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
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Holly smiled at Artemis as Butler drove the black, sleek limo. They sat privately in the back and gazed into each other’s eyes for what seemed like forever.
“I have something for you, Artemis.” Holly took out a note with words scribbled on it.
Artemis raised his arm, “Wait, I have something to tell you first.” Holly nodded and Artemis continued, “I don’t love you anymore.”
Holly widened her eyes and held back the hidden tears. But her thudding heart gave her away. Suddenly, a car crashed into Holly’s side of the limo.
That day, former Captain Holly Short died. Artemis reached for her note in her dead hand and it read:
Without your love, I would die.
April 25th, 2007 at 6:10 am
Please and, I mean, PLZZZ no flamers!
Enjoy this short yet sad story and comment! Plz? ^-^
April 25th, 2007 at 4:42 pm
Very sad and very sweet at the same time.
Good Job.
April 27th, 2007 at 4:26 pm
*snif* thats realy SAD.why dont u right about how artemis feels?
April 27th, 2007 at 9:10 pm
*sobbing uncontrolably* omg thats the saddest story on this site
April 29th, 2007 at 5:01 am
a sad ending “YES” but i liked that ending!!! It was cool
April 29th, 2007 at 11:12 am
“tears roll down” sad yes but i loved it short yet ….wat the word….fabulouse
May 7th, 2007 at 2:47 am
*Sob* This fanfic is so *sob* sad!
May 7th, 2007 at 7:17 am
*sobs* Although I don’t see how it would actually happen. It was a coincidence… nothing more.
Don’t mind me, I’m just a cynical person.
May 22nd, 2007 at 1:23 am
That was short and sweet. It was sad.
June 6th, 2007 at 9:16 am
Sob. sniffle…
I have nothing else to say, but I’m crying my eyes out in here…I just love it…(although I’m already drowning in my own flood of tears…
June 10th, 2007 at 2:52 am
(sobbing uncontrolably) That is thje sweetest most sadest story i have ever read in my life. It is awsome. How did you think it up?
June 27th, 2007 at 7:46 pm
*cries until im dehidrated[ i dont know how 2 spell that]* that sad man !!! WAAAAAA
July 9th, 2007 at 1:58 am
*sniff* this story *sniff* is so sad!!!
*sob*but i luved it*sob*
July 9th, 2007 at 2:00 am
*tear* sad very sad but nice and sweet at the same time
July 11th, 2007 at 4:26 pm
very sad crying alot
July 21st, 2007 at 9:33 pm
You can’t kill m..Holly! “sobs” Thats just MEAN!!!!!!!!!!! “starts sobbing uncontrollably” “sniffs”…it was good anyways………
July 25th, 2007 at 10:27 am
Holly… she can’t be dead!*sobs uncontrolably* she is my favourite character! * falls on the floor* Artemis will be so lonley too! * beats hands on floor crying very hard*!!!!!!!!!
July 31st, 2007 at 9:47 pm
Aaaaaaah! I’m crying! Die, Artemis die! Poor Holly! *stabs Artemis and cries over Holly’s body*
August 2nd, 2007 at 3:11 am
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! *snif snif* ok im done.
August 5th, 2007 at 4:26 am
Wow, that one went off the page…
August 5th, 2007 at 7:13 pm
btw very good idea i love it sooo
August 11th, 2007 at 10:59 pm
god that was so sad but so damn cute! i lurved it!
August 31st, 2007 at 6:17 pm
*snif snif* three months and I am still crying *snif snif*
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
September 1st, 2007 at 9:28 am
yup same!!!!!!!!!!
September 19th, 2007 at 5:12 pm
i actually like this waaayyy more than never say i do and it is better than never say never they are to long! this is short and sweet and beautiful.
November 7th, 2007 at 11:49 pm
I am not an A/H shipper but this was pretty good!
November 18th, 2007 at 5:45 am
WOW… short sweet and sad , I loved it , I like all ur stories , your like an awesome writer , now about this story , People how can u cry , I LOVED THE STORY ,…( for sum reason I like sad stories) This kind of came ouyt in a twist…..nice. I am sad that Holly died too. Oh well , we will always have her in our hearts! * Sniff sniff*
December 21st, 2007 at 1:57 am
Snif snif snif snif snif snif snif snif snif snif sniffy
January 6th, 2008 at 4:22 am
okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk, to me that suxs superbad. ok i’m done.
February 20th, 2008 at 3:45 am
BLUESPARKS!!! That is a flame! How dare you! That was good! *sniffle* It was kinda freaky too….O_o *gets goosebumps*
March 20th, 2008 at 3:46 pm
Very sad, yet with such few words it tugs at the emotions. Well done.
April 12th, 2008 at 3:51 am
me sorry, not flaming the story, just Holly’s death. I DON’T LIKE her death, no matter when or where it is portrayed.
April 12th, 2008 at 9:43 pm
I don’t either, but it is technically a flame since you didn’t tell why you didn’t like it.
April 14th, 2008 at 3:05 pm
but blue was just telling you his or her thoughts on the piece and not attacking the writer or the story just the death of holly and in my oppion that was not a flame . short . sad . cord striking! well the first one was but the sacond one wasn’t sry didn’t see that first one
August 28th, 2008 at 5:54 pm
Aw, I like this! It’s so simple but really good. The characters are a bit OOC, but still…