Living
Written on March 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(12 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
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Holly ran faster and faster. Where on earth could she go? Her home wasn’t safe Alastir would find her. She was on street away from Police Plazza. She dropped to the ground her arms were still bruised. Just at that she saw Trouble. She loved him but then again most girls had a huge crush on him. He walked up to her and said
“Holly? Are you OK?”
“Yeah… well no. I can’t go home, I can’t.”
“If this has anything to do with Alastir, I swear I’ll… here, let me help you. You know if your place isn’t safe you can stay with me.”
“Are you sure?” she asked.
“Of course, now come on,” he said before pulling her up.
Trouble’s apparment was only 15 minutes away.
“Do you want to get coffee? I don’t like it myself…”
“Me neither. Give me mineral water any day,” she replied, giving the same answer he would have.
“Really? Me too. Erm… OK, the Haven Knights or West Sharks?” he asked.
“Haven Knights are the far better team,” she replied, “Plus my dad at one point played for them.”
“I thought your dad was in the LEP?” He seemed shocked.
“He was, but he played for them when he was younger, ever heard of James Short?”
“Have I! He was one of the best players of all time!”
“He was my dad, my mum was a Gnommish teacher and I never really knew her. You?”
“My dad was in the LEP, my mum stayed at home to look after us,” he said.
“It’s over with Alastir,” she said and leaned in. So he kissed her and waited for her to pull away but she never did. She kissed him back.
April 8th, 2007 at 6:18 pm
That story was strange but kool!
April 13th, 2007 at 4:36 am
VERY WELL WRITEN AND HEARTFELT, GOOD JOB!!!!!
April 29th, 2007 at 11:48 am
i loved it
ITS LIKE MY FAVE SO FAR.
May 1st, 2007 at 8:18 am
i love it could u email me a copy cause i love it. soccer_mad14@hotmail.com
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
May 25th, 2007 at 7:48 am
IT’S LIKE SO GOOD
May 25th, 2007 at 8:51 pm
wow so good. you better be a writer when u grow up or else .
June 16th, 2007 at 12:51 pm
YAY!
August 5th, 2007 at 7:05 pm
i love this fanfic it is sooooo cool but i think it should be longer sob lol
August 11th, 2007 at 11:12 pm
that was so powerful! it was like real life, not fiction! i lurve it so much!
November 9th, 2007 at 7:10 am
I Loved ur stry pplz write more
November 18th, 2007 at 11:08 pm
Hey, darlin’. I found this on your FF page and figured I’d read it. Now I think I’ll go read the FF one. By the way, loved the second poem about the greyhound on you page. It made me think of my husky, Collin. Well, not as much, Collin’s pretty stupid. I called him downstairs for food one morning, and he came running down, skidded on the wooden floors, sprawling past his food dish, and hit the bar. Molly and I were laughin’ for what felt like five minutes. He was so embareassed. I loved it. But the story was darlin’.
Roman Tynann
November 18th, 2007 at 11:24 pm
Darlin’, if you thought that ring up, you’re living in my head. That’s really close to the ring i gave Molly… creepy, eh? Friggin Canadian friends.
November 18th, 2007 at 11:51 pm
Hiiii!!!!!!!!!!! IDK y I said that… I loved ur story! It was like awesome!
November 25th, 2007 at 9:07 pm
The ring was totally made up- it wasn’t based on anything.
December 5th, 2007 at 1:56 am
I am Vinyaya and I have a robot monkey! COOL! I can use someones name as my own! ( THIS IS JELLY) or is it? no it is, or maybe it’s Bubba! or Mahi! no Its just 017350 I think NOT!~!~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!! I am Jelly.
December 5th, 2007 at 2:12 am
GRR!!! When I saw Vinyay’s name I thought she was back!