Living
Written on March 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(12 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Loading ...Broken Silence, Broken promise
How could he keep quiet any longer? He walked into the bar he knew he always went into and saw him. Rage taking over him.
“Alastir” he said. Before the elf had a chance to respond he was given a punch so hard it knocked him back several feet and then another.
“What’s…” he began. Trouble pinned him against the wall and said
“listen to me, if you touch Holly again I’ll kill you.” He then give him another punch.
One week later
“WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO SAY?” Alastir screamed.
Holly, no longer afraid, replied “I’m breaking up with you. It’s over. Marry you? I’d rather die!”
“That could be arranged, I know some very dangerous people, Holly. Now you listen here- you and I will be married happily and tell your little boyfriend he better not get in the way!” he spat.
She would have just told him Trouble was her friend, but something that Alastir had taken from her returned and she screamed the truth.
“I LOVE HIM! Which is more than I ever have felt for you… I can’t stand you!”.
His fist was about to punch her when she ran.
April 8th, 2007 at 6:18 pm
That story was strange but kool!
April 13th, 2007 at 4:36 am
VERY WELL WRITEN AND HEARTFELT, GOOD JOB!!!!!
April 29th, 2007 at 11:48 am
i loved it
ITS LIKE MY FAVE SO FAR.
May 1st, 2007 at 8:18 am
i love it could u email me a copy cause i love it. soccer_mad14@hotmail.com
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May 25th, 2007 at 7:48 am
IT’S LIKE SO GOOD
May 25th, 2007 at 8:51 pm
wow so good. you better be a writer when u grow up or else .
June 16th, 2007 at 12:51 pm
YAY!
August 5th, 2007 at 7:05 pm
i love this fanfic it is sooooo cool but i think it should be longer sob lol
August 11th, 2007 at 11:12 pm
that was so powerful! it was like real life, not fiction! i lurve it so much!
November 9th, 2007 at 7:10 am
I Loved ur stry pplz write more
November 18th, 2007 at 11:08 pm
Hey, darlin’. I found this on your FF page and figured I’d read it. Now I think I’ll go read the FF one. By the way, loved the second poem about the greyhound on you page. It made me think of my husky, Collin. Well, not as much, Collin’s pretty stupid. I called him downstairs for food one morning, and he came running down, skidded on the wooden floors, sprawling past his food dish, and hit the bar. Molly and I were laughin’ for what felt like five minutes. He was so embareassed. I loved it. But the story was darlin’.
Roman Tynann
November 18th, 2007 at 11:24 pm
Darlin’, if you thought that ring up, you’re living in my head. That’s really close to the ring i gave Molly… creepy, eh? Friggin Canadian friends.
November 18th, 2007 at 11:51 pm
Hiiii!!!!!!!!!!! IDK y I said that… I loved ur story! It was like awesome!
November 25th, 2007 at 9:07 pm
The ring was totally made up- it wasn’t based on anything.
December 5th, 2007 at 1:56 am
I am Vinyaya and I have a robot monkey! COOL! I can use someones name as my own! ( THIS IS JELLY) or is it? no it is, or maybe it’s Bubba! or Mahi! no Its just 017350 I think NOT!~!~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!! I am Jelly.
December 5th, 2007 at 2:12 am
GRR!!! When I saw Vinyay’s name I thought she was back!