Living
Written on March 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(12 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
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“KELP!” shouted Foaly. Trouble went in and Foaly continued “You do realise what you did was wrong? I mean if Chix done that… you know, take advantage..”
“You’ve got it all wrong. I was just worried about her. She ’s been acting strange and… I L-l” he couldn’t bring himself to say it.
“Just don’t do it again,” said the centaur (who had seen it through a security camera).
Trouble saw Holly the next day, and he couldn’t hold back, and said, “Frond, Holly, what happened to you?”. Holly looked as if a pack of trolls had run over her. Her face was bruised and hurt, her lip was bleeding,her arms were so badly cut you’d have thought she’d been….
“I tripped.”
“You expect me to believe that?” he replied, putting his hand to her face to try and heal it. The last time he’d seen Holly like this was after a gang of older cadets at the acadmey attacked her for being a girl (Trouble went back and punched the leader so hard that he fainted).
“I’m fine, honest. I just…”
“Holls, you can tell me anything,” he said as she sat down. He took her hand.
“You promise you’ll keep it a secret?”
“I promise Holly, I promise.”
“Someone hit me, Trouble.”
“Who’s someone?”
“Al…”
“ALASTIR!” said Trouble, anger taking hold of him, rage building up like a very powerful force. He would kill him. No exaggeration- how dare he hit the most beautiful elf in Haven?
“I’ll kill him Holly. I swear on my life I’ll make him pay.”
Frond, thought Holly, he really cares! But she was shaking, so Trouble held her and asked
“Why?”
“He just… he does it all the time. Except I’m running low on magic so I couldn’t heal myself and I was so tired I couldn’t fight back,” she explained.
The first sentence Holly had said meant that if Alastir had been in the room he would have been dead
April 8th, 2007 at 6:18 pm
That story was strange but kool!
April 13th, 2007 at 4:36 am
VERY WELL WRITEN AND HEARTFELT, GOOD JOB!!!!!
April 29th, 2007 at 11:48 am
i loved it
ITS LIKE MY FAVE SO FAR.
May 1st, 2007 at 8:18 am
i love it could u email me a copy cause i love it. soccer_mad14@hotmail.com
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May 25th, 2007 at 7:48 am
IT’S LIKE SO GOOD
May 25th, 2007 at 8:51 pm
wow so good. you better be a writer when u grow up or else .
June 16th, 2007 at 12:51 pm
YAY!
August 5th, 2007 at 7:05 pm
i love this fanfic it is sooooo cool but i think it should be longer sob lol
August 11th, 2007 at 11:12 pm
that was so powerful! it was like real life, not fiction! i lurve it so much!
November 9th, 2007 at 7:10 am
I Loved ur stry pplz write more
November 18th, 2007 at 11:08 pm
Hey, darlin’. I found this on your FF page and figured I’d read it. Now I think I’ll go read the FF one. By the way, loved the second poem about the greyhound on you page. It made me think of my husky, Collin. Well, not as much, Collin’s pretty stupid. I called him downstairs for food one morning, and he came running down, skidded on the wooden floors, sprawling past his food dish, and hit the bar. Molly and I were laughin’ for what felt like five minutes. He was so embareassed. I loved it. But the story was darlin’.
Roman Tynann
November 18th, 2007 at 11:24 pm
Darlin’, if you thought that ring up, you’re living in my head. That’s really close to the ring i gave Molly… creepy, eh? Friggin Canadian friends.
November 18th, 2007 at 11:51 pm
Hiiii!!!!!!!!!!! IDK y I said that… I loved ur story! It was like awesome!
November 25th, 2007 at 9:07 pm
The ring was totally made up- it wasn’t based on anything.
December 5th, 2007 at 1:56 am
I am Vinyaya and I have a robot monkey! COOL! I can use someones name as my own! ( THIS IS JELLY) or is it? no it is, or maybe it’s Bubba! or Mahi! no Its just 017350 I think NOT!~!~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!! I am Jelly.
December 5th, 2007 at 2:12 am
GRR!!! When I saw Vinyay’s name I thought she was back!